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Posted: 11 years ago
A lovely update Nikki...

What I loved the most was Kiran's view point which was most practical according to me...

Any trauma needs time to settle and forcing to seal the matter is not the right thing...

Even if Prashant is willing to marry her, or Aarti is willing to accept his offer...both are wrong decisions taken at this particular point of time...

Well those are my views...

Great one...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Di first of all I would like to thank and congratulate you for coming back with a bang and giving us the awesome update of MTB for which we all were waiting and finally you have given us this...so you deserve from all of us.

I really loved the fact that the update started with the conversation of G3 and Dubey ji.It was really an amazing part to read...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Dubey is such a sick person.He is the true representative of the brutal male dominated society.His cruel speech..his narrow thinking proves that he doesn't deserve to be called a father ...a brother.He thinks that no man will accept Arti coz she has lost her virginity by someone ...but this man has forgotten that if beast like him live in the society and man like Yash also live her who knows how spread love ...how to make others live..
Shova is another pain...being a woman she should have felt the pain of Arti..realize what inner turmoil she was going through...but she failed to do this...and what makes me more sad that woman like Shova and Amma ji still exist in our society who only knows how to spread venom... I would like to think you for making your writing a mirror of the brutal society...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

When the voice said...

"No Yash you didn't failed. You believed and trusted what you were made to trust and believe. It was not your fault. It was fate and destiny". Said a voice which made everyone turned around.

Without even reading the next line I knew that it was Arti .I became so happy finally to have her there...and for me these lines were the soul of your update which I loved the most and I just couldn't stop myself from mentioning it...

Aarti moved in his direction and he moved backwards. With each step that Aarti was taking towards him, his gaze became lower and lower. When he couldn't lower his eyes anymore, he turned and moved from there.

Aarti went and sat beside Gayatri. She called out for Yash "Yash I know that you're not able to face me. But don't you think that turning your back from me is not the solution? At one point or the other you'll have to look at me, talk to me, so why not now? Won't you come and sit by me? Won't you be my side when I need you?" She chocked on her last words, which made Yash finally turn around and face her.
SO Arti trusted Yash from long before...it's another interesting turn of your story di.It will be a trea to read your next updates coz there we can read about Arti's truth for which we are waiting so passionately...
You have done a great job di.From the very beginning till the last you have maintained the interest of the readers and it proves how amazing your update was...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Edited by nusratjahan505 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesume update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Now cant wait for next chapter to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update.eagerly waiting for next part.thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really want to do this with Dubey, Shobha ,Ammaji and Prashanth
arghhh they are really not humans๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿคฌ
Aarti is indeed unlucky to get parents like the Dubeys๐Ÿ˜ญ
feeling so bad for her๐Ÿ˜ญ
eagerly waiting for the next part di.

btw di u better update quickly otherwise I will come back in my JKR mode๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back dear amazing part i hate the parents of aarti and that prashant i feell so sad for aarti waiting to next part don't make us wait so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
flask back over ๐Ÿ˜ณ
oh my god dubey and shobama cant believe ๐Ÿ˜ก
waiting for aarti side...and aarya romance
awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Nikki I must say after reading it I found I have lost words to express my self on this update.

These Dubeys I hate them to the core now.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Prashanth robbed Aarthi's virtue and them making Aarthi's life a living hell by getting her married to Prashanth.
They are killing their own daughter with their hands.
Can't call them parents.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Shobha being a mother and a woman behave like this.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
A mother is a person we respect and love. She's the source of love but here she is ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
How can she be so cruel to Aarthi her own daughter?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
I salute G3 being a mother in law she didn't take her son's side but Aarthi's. I salute her.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
If we can find some ladies, mothers and mother in laws like them we could change the world in to a better place.๐Ÿ˜Š
Dr. kiran gave the superb advice. I agree with her. Aarthi or any other girl is not in a state to marry anyone in this condition. But Aarthi's own parents can't understand it and they are going to force Aarthi. Going to force her to enter in to a hell. This prashanth.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก This emoticons are too better for him.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
I can imagine what would have happened to Aarthi after marrying him. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Why destiny played a cruel game with her?๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I feel aarthi trust YAsh more than Yash trust her. In that way Yash is so lucky but he couldn't find how lucky he was.
Yash is repenting at last. good. he must after what he was about to do?
Now I'm waiting to know what incident made Aarthi to trust him so much.
I'm scared to read the parts after aarthi marries Prashanth as I know it will be a hell only.
You are right Nikki now I will make Prashath a better hell in Prashitha's eternal love story.
I don't know why you are not satisfied with this update. But for me it's superb Nikki!โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
I salute you bringing these things out in this story as these things happens in the real world.๐Ÿ‘
I'm waiting eagerly for the next update , the stories you are going to write and updates on the other stories also.


Kate not just that, Dubey said that if Prashant doesn't marry her, they'll marry her off with any available man, doesn't matter who he is, how old he is, as long as he'll marry Aarti, well that's all Dubey's cared about.
Shobha is a disgrace in the name of motherhood, that's all I can say about her

It's true Kate, if there are more women like Gayatri and Kiran, then world will become a better place to live in โญ๏ธ

And personally I feel that Kiran was right. The result is what'll happen to Aarti after she married that python ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Yash's trust on her wavered, cause he was hurt and confused by Aarti's behavior, but Aarti's trust on Yash never wavered or faltered. โญ๏ธ

Thanks Kate, once again for such a beautiful comment โค๏ธ

Kate my problem is I'm never satisfied with anything that I do ๐Ÿค”



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Heeyy Nikki Di !! ๐Ÿค— You shall welcome me back... ๐Ÿ˜† I'm super late in reading anything !! ๐Ÿ˜† I'm really sorry if you have been waiting for my response for ages !! ๐Ÿ˜† Sorry.. I'm sure you doesn't wait as you know me well !! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜•



Okay... Super hot promo hun !! โ˜บ๏ธ I can't wait for that !! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰


Great update, Nikki di !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Lots of things in my mind right now but I'm glad I'm able to catch it up !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

My heart broken and torn apart when Gayathri was trying to reveal Aarti's story !! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Poor girl... She had gone through lots of things at such a young age !! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ’”

Prashant pretended to worry and whaah ! He sent his so call 'angel' ๐Ÿ˜† Amma ji with Gayatri so that he'll updated with current news on Aarti through Amma ji !! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿฅฑ ๐Ÿ˜ก

Aarti.. Oh Aarti ! She's locked in the bathroom and I can imagine what she had experienced right from the trial of suicide till the one she lied like a dead body on the bed.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ What a suffering !! ๐Ÿ’” ๐Ÿ˜ญ Poor girl.. She needs Yash all the time too ! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ


I'm glad Dr. Kiran joined them !! Her words... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ It should be a great lecture to Dubey ji and Shobha !! They even shut Aarti' bua... ๐Ÿ˜ก Ooh.. There I know the connection of Aakash and Aarti !! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Dr. Kiran had came up with an awesome idea, drug test ! That will be a great prove BUT... Dubey ji and Amma ji... what a sick thought they had in their mind ! Marriage is not the best solution.. ๐Ÿ˜ก Poor Aarti... I was shouting a BIG LOUD NO here... ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ


I'm truly excited for more... Let see what you have in the box ! Waiting to know more... ๐Ÿ˜‰ Great update ! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Sorry again ! All the best for the next installment ! ๐Ÿ˜‰


IsYa you never left MTB, despite being so busy, you've always been in touch with it โค๏ธ
So never ever say sorry for late commenting. Or else I'll stop replying on your comments ๐Ÿ˜ก.
But still welcome back ๐Ÿค—

Thanks for appreciating the update.
Ammaji is his ally, and lalla is her JAAN, so she'll go to any extent to save her lalla's life.

But on the other side Gayatri will also go to any extent to save, help and support Aarti. Kiran is also there with them.
OMG that bathroom scene, it even broke my heart while writing it ๐Ÿ˜ญ

The next part is also up, so get ready with lots of GAALI's for the four monsters ๐Ÿ˜ก



Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Amazing updt,cont soon.
Waiting 4 aartis story.

Thanks Alekhika.
Aarti's story will start from the next chapter ๐Ÿ˜›

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