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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

👏Hatsof to you Nikki👏
I am not able to think whether I should thank you or salute you for such an intense emotional update...you alz tell me drama queen but today you literally made me speechless with you MTB.
When Arti pushed Yash and she herself fall on the ground shivering in extreme fear my heart was also crying with her as I could feel her each and every pain.Yash wanted to console her , to protect her from that extreme pain to wipe her tears but unfortunately this time he himself was the reason of her pain and tears..😭😭😭.I just felt my heart was broken into thousand pieces in that moment.
In the hall room where G3 dragged Yash with anger and disgust and blurted on him was the turning moment for me.I really felt very bad when she those all words against Yash and slapped him in front of every one.But I agree it was very needed for that moment.Though G3 was cursing Yash but I could felt it clearly that her anger,anguish,frustration wasn't only for this one incident.It was the pain and frustration that she was bearing for long coz of Prashant and Yash's one action just hit that injured part of her heart which made her to react like this.
" OMG, what have I done? Instead of telling Yash everything I slapped him, accused him and told him to go away from here. Aman, go after Yash. He doesn't know the whole story. He's hurt and confused. He might end up hurting himself. Go after him and bring him home. Please Aman bring My Son, My Yash, back home"
My heart really stopped breathing for some seconds while writing this part.Trust me Nikki I had goosebumps while reading this lines as I was carving to see G3's motherly affection of Yash and thanks a lot dear for finally giving it to me.👏😳
The way you portrayed Yash's state of shock ,anger and frustration I cant express how perfect you are in that scenes.Loved the conv of Yash and Aman though I am not satisfied with Aman's pov.He got to know the truth about Akash long before but even after that he didn't tell anything to Yash and invited Akash in the party knowing it very well what Yash actually thinks of him.According to Aman Yash was not ready to hear the truth but I have not seen his any effort to inform him the truth.Hope you will explain it in the upcoming part.
I became very emotional to see the unconditional love between Yash and Palak.Really they are meant to be father and daughter.😳😳 And after that the scene in Yash's room where Arti was afraid to see Yash but finally she let him come near her and surrendered herself in his protective arm was beyond perfection Nikki..👏.Though the reason of Yash's life ,his Arti and his Palak were in his arms but instead of enjoying that moment Yash was in pain for not there with Arti when she was in pain...really nikki I dont know how many times i will read this part.
The promo was very painful.FInally Arti is confronting before every1 what and how much she suffered for that kamina Prashant.Yash comes to console her saying that he will be her protector ,her shield from all sufferings and Arti also put herself in his arms but the pain is still there...the wound is still bleeding...😭😭😭
Hope Yash will be able to heal that pain and bring the lost happiness in Arti's life which she lost long before.
Really Nikki the journey of MTB is not only special for your .It's also special for me as it gave me everything..happiness,pain,laughter,tears, passion and above all restless and sleepless night for which I will alz be grateful to u...😳🤗🤗


Mukti tell me what do I do with you? Do you have any idea what your loving comments do to me? It makes me so emotional and speechless,dear, that it take me so much time to reply on them.

But to tell you the truth I love them so much.

Mukti some scenes Just Pop up on my mind when I sit to write, and Aarti's fear in the first part and the whole last scene just came in my mind while writing. I mean I had rough idea but not the whole scene. So when I'm getting such beautiful comments on those very particular scene that time it strikes me what I've done and I'm amazed at myself.
Aarti's fear and Gayatri's reactions were justified.
And love you sweety for getting the essence of the scene that you've Highlighted in Blue.
She was also as confused as Yash. In fact all three of them Aarti, Yash and Gayatri were so shocked and confused at the turn of events.

And what to say, even I'm in LOVE with the last scene, where Yash finally have Aarti and Palak safe and secure in his arms and they both finally go to sleep, calmly and peacefully.

Yash will (after knowing the whole truth) will forget all about his pain and hurt and will put his entire focus on Aarti's happiness.

Love you sweety for being with me in this beautiful journey of MTB ❤️





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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

Ok then bring out your monkey gang and do it. You've got my full support 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prachidalmia

good update
very good way of bring the truth to light
please update soon

OMG you are a Brand New Reader of MTB, welcome to MTB 🤗

I'm glad that you liked the way I brought out the truth 😊

Will try my best to update soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Nikki awesome promo dear

The Aarya pic is so perfect for this promo ,,,expressing everything what u mentioned in it,,,,Yash pain n hurt is so much visible
Omg Aarti wants to tell everything what P😡 done to her
Cant wait Dear

Rachna even I felt that the pic suited so much to this Promo. As Aarti is so scared and distraught and an equally distraught Yash is trying his best to console her.

I think it'll be better if Aarti herself tells Yash the whole truth of what that python did to her 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
after reading ur update only one word that i love u Aarti.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Josmi01

after reading ur update only one word that i love u Aarti.

Thanks so much for Loving Aarti and her character ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: negha

Great Great Work Nikki...Really amazing one but...i think till the truth are known..everythink is little confused...but for now arti and akash relationship is very clear...but you have written very wonderful and perfectly dear...thanks for the Pm...

Yes Negha till the entire truth comes out, there will be a lot of confusion. But it'll take time for the entire truth to come out, as I've to cover the two and a half years period of time.

And thanks Negha for appreciating my work 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Nikki i m so confused how to start my comment,,,Really dear it is not easy to write this type of update,,,so emotional ,,so painful ,,so heart touching Yaar,,,i read it no of times but not finding words to comment on it,,I was so confused with Aarti why she always Hurt Yash saying she loves P so much but she was living her life like hell,,,,why G3 always support Aarti why she love her so much or more than Yash ,, but now i really love G3 what she did ,,,She love Yash more than her own son n even trust him more but hide her feelings ,,,

I REALLY feel so sorry for Aarti ,,,P did all this because he hate Yash n want to see him in pain ,,,OMG
Aman n Yash convo was so well written Nikki ,,Yash is still so confused
Hurt ,,,guilty
Palak is really angel ,,,she calm down Yash
Seeing yash taking care of her daughter Aarti also calms down,,,
Great
Niiki thanx u so much for this beautiful story dear,,,i still in shock yaar

Rachna I'm in love with your confusion. Thanks so much dear for such a beautiful confusion (thanks for appreciating my work )
Rachna it took me 2-3 days to concentrate of those scenes and I had to literally visualize them to get the real feel of them. So yes it was a bit hard stressful for me. But I'm so happy with the end result and with everyone's reactions and comments that I've forgotten about all that stress.
Till now Aarti was lying to Yash cause she didn't want to hurt him anymore and wanted him to move ahead in life, that's why she was pushing him away. And the same goes for Gayatri also.

Yash will be hurt and confused till he learns the whole truth. After that only he'll be able to think rationally and protect Aarti

OMG I love Palak in MTB,

Rachna Thank You for Reading MTB and Loving it ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nikki u better update next part soon!
Or my pussy cat + pikachu will not leave u 😡😆!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG what an update nikki dear 😛😭

i feel like killing that already dead prashant for arthi's condition !!!! 🤢🤢🤢
can a person be like this !!!!

the words came from arthi's mouth definitely tore his heart and the pain arthi had undergone can be known by none other than yash who loved her truly !!!! 😭 now he too did the same to her in anger...
but when yash ran to call g3 for help even without noticing he was only in jeans shows the fear he had on her condition ...

When g3 was afraid to enter the room thinking it should not be deja vu 😭 i was hell shocked to even think of how prashant should have forced on arthi just to get her from yash ... chi.. he is a disgusting demon 😡😡... so he raped arthi before marriage and so she was in a condition to marry that devil ah ... What i was fearing has happened exactly !!!!

Yash by now would have in the start of guilt and when he comes to know the full truth he will be completely broken !!!! YES HE IS THE MAIN REASON WHY ARTHI HAD A HELL LIFE !!!
just bcoz that python saw yash and arthi kissing he decided to pluck her from him and he used such a killing method 💔

The slap G3 gave to yash completely shows the love she has fro arthi and whoever tries to harm her wil be the same 👏👏👏
I am so proud of her nikki dear !!! she is perfect mother...

But she could have explained to yash what happened !!! and here is aman the best friend who can help yash in all miseries...
I felt so much for g3 and arthi's hell life these days with prashant 😭😭😭
And i am not able to bear the scream and pain of arthi dear.. so terrible

I pity arthi for being the victim thro everyone's role in it dear 🤢...
and mainly yash loved her was the point for the dog to attack arthi 😡😡
Now aman is ready to reveal the truth but will yash be able to digest it dear...

and exactly as i guesses AKASH WAS HER BROTHERLY RELATION 😛
what a cute relation and definitely it has so much love in it which that prashant said in a disgusting way 😡

All is well when palak is there 😳 so sweet baby can make yash calm down in a second 😛😛
and when yash approached arthi with palak the shiver she had from the fear is unexpressable but what the doctor said was absolutely correct 😳...

arthi sleeping in yash's arms so peacefullly was the heavenly scene nikki 😳😳😳 she finds peace in him..

when she saw yash taking care of palak every fear vanished and she saw him as her protector 👏👏👏
but the attacker is the most disgusting feeling created by that prashant !!!! 😡😡😡

coming to the promo !!!!
So arthi will confess all the truth and poor soul how will she be able to tell it dear 😭😭😭
now i understand what could be her horrible dreams 😡😡
i am waiting to know the rest so that i can find that prashant and kill him again...

continue soon dear... HATS OFF TO YOU ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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