FF 'Meant To Be'... Thread 3, Chapter 23, page 95... - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Ok I won't say sorry now 😳
And don't worry Shalu, I killed that evil Demon for all of us 😡 😆



😆 I know it. but still want to do it😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
good update
very good way of bring the truth to light
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki


Thanks Sri 😊 🤗
Even I also felt that this pic will be perfect for the promo, as it depicts the raw emotions on AarYa's faces so well. It shows how heartbroken and shattered they both are.
Aarti has been through the worst experience of her life. And now the only person who can make her forget about it is Yash. And now Yash won't leave her side and won't let her fall, he'll be her and Palak's protective shield.

Aarti never in her wildest of dreams and ever imagined that Yash could also do something like that. That's way she was scared of him and even compared him with Prashant which was like a tight slap for Yash.
But when Aarti (in the end) saw Yash so love and caring and protectively consoled and calmed down Palak. She to reached out to him, as she knows that if anyone can protect her and her daughter, than that person is Yash.

Prashant, well the less I say about him the better. And Ammaji also.

Gayatri slapped Yash cause just like Aarti, she too was surprised with the fact that Yash could do something like what Prashant did. And Gayatri had witnessed Aarti's pain, so she's always by her side, protecting her. And why Gayatri, Aman, didn't told anyone about anything, well I'll cover that part in the upcoming chapters.

Yash was, is and will be more heartbroken, as more and more truth will come out in front of him.

Aakash is her cousin, but there's a story behind their relationship also, which will also be covered.

The end scene with Palak, Aarti and Yash is also one of my favorites.

Dr. Kiran will help Yash in future also. You'll see how and when.

So get ready for the upcoming emotional updates.
😳


My pleasure nikki dear🤗
Will be waiting for your update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Nikki awesome promo dear
The Aarya pic is so perfect for this promo ,,,expressing everything what u mentioned in it,,,,Yash pain n hurt is so much visible
Omg Aarti wants to tell everything what P😡 done to her
Cant wait Dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Great Great Work Nikki...Really amazing one but...i think till the truth are known..everythink is little confused...but for now arti and akash relationship is very clear...but you have written very wonderful and perfectly dear...thanks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Ok Mukti and Kate, you two stop now 😡 (but I'm loving and enjoying it also ☺️ )

You both are making me blush so madly ☺️
And because of you two I'm on cloud nine and don't feel like coming back

And if I don't come back on the earth, how will I write and give you another update 😉


Nikki you have made us total mad by your MTB.So now bear this sweet torture dear...😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505


Nikki you have made us total mad by your MTB.So now bear this sweet torture dear...😉😆

Ok then bring it on, cause we've a very long way to go with MTB 😳
I'll reply on your comment later, as I'm busy right now and have to finish so much work 😭 😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nikki i m so confused how to start my comment,,,Really dear it is not easy to write this type of update,,,so emotional ,,so painful ,,so heart touching Yaar,,,i read it no of times but not finding words to comment on it,,I was so confused with Aarti why she always Hurt Yash saying she loves P so much but she was living her life like hell,,,,why G3 always support Aarti why she love her so much or more than Yash ,, but now i really love G3 what she did ,,,She love Yash more than her own son n even trust him more but hide her feelings ,,,
I REALLY feel so sorry for Aarti ,,,P did all this because he hate Yash n want to see him in pain ,,,OMG
Aman n Yash convo was so well written Nikki ,,Yash is still so confused
Hurt ,,,guilty
Palak is really angel ,,,she calm down Yash
Seeing yash taking care of her daughter Aarti also calms down,,,
Great
Niiki thanx u so much for this beautiful story dear,,,i still in shock yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Nikki...the number of posts says it all...that u r good at what u r doing...THE BEST ! Wishing once again many more posts which brings u more happiness , cheer, less mood swings😉 and good health.

Promo :

Won't say I am eagerly waiting for this particular promo for it means digging deep to get burnt but yes I do understand - that dark past of Arti will bring changes and the behaviour pattern towards her in future by the family members and readers POV. Am preparing myself to the darker side which I hope...is not too cruel.

Special note :

Wanted to share regarding 'No one is born evil..it is the circumstances that brings changes in people' ...think I shared the same views and pointed out in one your post...but I agree to disagree with Prashant's case (so far) even if the circumstances happens to be 'LOVE' or 'HATE'...would like to say - ' Circumstances are beyond human control but our conduct is in our power'...and this is where his conduct failed.

Update :

The update was simply f a n t a s t i c . Nikki - this particular chapter reveals 'behind the scenes' hardwork...i.e the amount of detailing and taking extra care of not repeating the dialogues and the correct flow of emotion and linking of one character to another and more important not going overboard. Would like to say - ' u r climbing up the ladder' Nikki.

The kodak moment of this entire chapter was Payal and Arti in Yash's arm slowly burning the fear and seeking protection and falling to sleep peacefully. A touching scene - well done - with good explantion - reading reader's POV. Another scene which was worth it - was Yash opening his arms to payal who was crying but found peace in her dear papa's arm...what was beauiful here was - both were getting comfort from one another by hugging.

Touching episode - beautifully written - well done Nikki 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nikki u made me cry😭😭
why why why
really touching...I can feel the pain😭😭

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