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Posted: 12 years ago
very nyc update,
yash's concern for aarti n aarti's trust over yash...all made me cry..
seriously i m enjoying ur update nikki...
wait for the moment wen aarya will confess there love for each other and at first yash know the whole truth..in short w8ing for promo episode :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a fabolus story "meant to be" i want to share my feelings about this ff truly so bear me
at first reading your ff really i dnt liked the concept of betryl arti marris pras then the 1st promo about ther mrge i really feel nt intrsted but after that just fr once trying to start readin and fell into love this ff it is really "meant to be in love"👏👏👏
after then every day week daily checking for next update eagerly waitin fr next update when it will come its my regular duty⭐️⭐️⭐️
though i never exprsesed my feelings comments even i didnt press like button sorry for that😭 like arti in ur ff maintaining secret from yash😉
every human have flaws like wise yash also the shape of the charcter trough out the story and his feelings emotions are worth imagining 👏👏
the other charactrs also maintaining in the story and travelling merging in it very intrsting and gripping most of them are naturally very nice and favour except p😡 and amma😡
the gradual revelation of the truth nd slowly prograssing storyline becoming more more intresting
about the questions i dnt want to ask any questins regarding truth arti char prasnt ...etc if the entire truth comes infront of evryone before early the story may end that i dnt like nd tooo much suspence also noo need but to continue more chapter it need it so i dnt bother about it
right now waitin for ur update enjoy reading it only fixed in my mind
keep continue ur writing wat ever you want to put in it just pendown
i always support nd enjoy ur ff this time i dnt get dumb
surely hit like button nd comment on it
please update asap very eagerly waitin for next part about g3 pov😭😭😭
sorry if hurt anyone😲
happy friendship day nikki
Edited by vinnas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Nikki...the number of posts says it all...that u r good at what u r doing...THE BEST ! Wishing once again many more posts which brings u more happiness , cheer, less mood swings😉 and good health.

Promo :

Won't say I am eagerly waiting for this particular promo for it means digging deep to get burnt but yes I do understand - that dark past of Arti will bring changes and the behaviour pattern towards her in future by the family members and readers POV. Am preparing myself to the darker side which I hope...is not too cruel.

Special note :

Wanted to share regarding 'No one is born evil..it is the circumstances that brings changes in people' ...think I shared the same views and pointed out in one your post...but I agree to disagree with Prashant's case (so far) even if the circumstances happens to be 'LOVE' or 'HATE'...would like to say - ' Circumstances are beyond human control but our conduct is in our power'...and this is where his conduct failed.

Update :

The update was simply f a n t a s t i c . Nikki - this particular chapter reveals 'behind the scenes' hardwork...i.e the amount of detailing and taking extra care of not repeating the dialogues and the correct flow of emotion and linking of one character to another and more important not going overboard. Would like to say - ' u r climbing up the ladder' Nikki.

The kodak moment of this entire chapter was Payal and Arti in Yash's arm slowly burning the fear and seeking protection and falling to sleep peacefully. A touching scene - well done - with good explantion - reading reader's POV. Another scene which was worth it - was Yash opening his arms to payal who was crying but found peace in her dear papa's arm...what was beauiful here was - both were getting comfort from one another by hugging.

Touching episode - beautifully written - well done Nikki 🤗

Chitra the number of posts proves that I've become to addicted to the PV forum and this has indeed become my second home with us a loving and caring family. ❤️

Yes Chitra this is one Promo that is very scary, as it'll open up so many wounds and scars of the scary and painful past. Everyone's opinion for Aarti will change in SM and for readers also. I'm so say this but the dark wide will be scary and unimaginable.

@bold
I think you are right about Prashant and his circumstances.
He had crossed all the limits of humanity and became inhuman, not only towards Yash and Aarti but towards his whole family.

Chitra this chapter left me drained physically and mentally as it was painful for me also to write this. To show emotions of Aarti, Yash and Gayatri was not at all easy for me. But I'm happy that my efforts paid of as everyone loved this chapter so much.

Chitra in almost every comment I've replied that the scene where Palak and Aarti both finally falls asleep feeling all the love, comfort and protection in his loving and protective embrace. Even I visualized and felt the depth of the whole scene while writing it.

Love you Chitra for always writing your comments so beautifully and lovingly. ❤️
🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

Nikki u made me cry😭😭

why why why
really touching...I can feel the pain😭😭

So worry Leevi for making you cry like this 😭

Believe me when I day that it wasn't easy for me also to write this choatert and I dread to write the upcoming chapters as they'll be more emotional than this one 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Dona
@ Prettyji
@ Freya
Thanks for reading and for the beautiful comments 😳
Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nan0102

sorry dear due to the slow internet connection like is bot working for me..but i really like the update..you are such an amazing and talented writer..love the update..and the promo so much..thanks for the pm..

It's ok Nan, I understand 😊

Thanks so much for loving this update, I know you were a little disappointed and confused for Aarti's character in the last 2-3 chapters, but now finally you are once again loving it. It means so much to me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

hey nikki di
first i m holding ears for late comment sorry di😭😭 i m out of town for three days so i could not read it and comment 😭

coming to the promo:
omg it is so heart-breaking di aarthi herself revealing her bitter painful past this is so painful di...😭 but i sensed one thing aarthi found comfort in yash she always flinches whenever yash comes near her but in this promo she is quite comfortable with yash and hope she changed her decision of quitting sm forever leaving behind palak and her love yash...

i m not able to see aarthi breaking down😭

coming to the special note:
its ok di we will always wait for the update of our favourite MTB take ur time and dont take much stress di i know how much u r stessing ur self to write this so emotional and heart-breaking scenes

u r such a wonderful writer di 👏
love u always🤗🤗
i feel very lucky to be part of this wonderful journey😃 and i get to meet such a lovely people here like u😃

how yash was responsible for aarthis present condition???? i know prasanth did all this to make yash suffer but it doesnot mean that yash was responsible for this 😕😕

i agree with u nobody r born as evil circumstances make them to behave like that but what prasanth did to aarthi was beyond that i will never forgive him never ever😡😡😡

u have reached third thread without spamming what is the need spam di thisissuch a wonderful story who ever read this will like to comment
great going di👏 keep on giving such wonderful updates and many more fictions in future and all the best di👍🏼

coming to the update:
u made me speechless with this emotional update 😭😭
i m crying whilereading about aarthis condition😭 i want to be there for her and console her

my heart flinched when aarthi said u r like him u r like prasanth i know what yash did was out of his anger hurt frustation and it was wrong but no no yash is not like prasanth never like him😭😭😭

aarthi sat on the floor shivering like a leaf😭
poor girl she lost everything in her life becoz of that bas***d🤬 she lost hope to live this is so heart-wrenching di😭

atleast she had gayathri to take care of her otherwisei couldnot even imagine what had happened with aarthi???😭😭😭
aarthi scared of yash 😭😭

di many of them may not liked gayathri slapping yash but she did what she felt at that time anybody in her place would havedone the same thing she was hurt anddisppointed that yash could do such thing 😭😭

ammaji 😡 pls shut ur mouth for godsake otherwise i dont know what i will do to her

even i was wondering how come nobody in sm knows about prasanth ??????aarthi relation????
not even aamaji prateek how?????😕

i even felt bad for yash he dont know anything how his loved ones suffered???😭😭 and he will try to punish himself😭


this part was my favourite di i dont know why:::
yashs realization about what had happened to aarthi😭 and he came to know about aakash
u potrayed this part very well very very well👏

palak is indeed an angel she herself is a magic wand in aaryas life how she went into the armsof yash she istruly yashs daughter😃

last part :
aarthi hugged yash and slept in his arms u made my day by giving this scene
perfect family u dont knowdi how i m longing for this...⭐️

eagerly waiting for the furthur revealation part
awesome job di👏

love u🤗🤗


Rosey don't you say sorry for the late comments. Even I'm so late in replying to all the comments as I too was very very very busy with my personal life.

The promo is really scary cause Aarti herself will tell Yash and everyone the gory details of her painful and ugly past. Poor girl will have to relive every single moment once more while telling about the past. But this time her support her protector Yash will be there (though it's too late for that)
And now she won't leave SM, cause Yash won't allow her to go out of his sight even for a single moment now.

Thanks Rosey for being a part of this journey with me and for always standing by me and supporting me. ❤️

You will know later on how Yash is also (very little) responsible for all of this. To a certain extent everyone is responsible.

Yes she lost everything in life, her self-respect, her identity and in the end her wish to live again. But Yash will give all these and much more back to her slowly, with his love and care.

Gayatri was there, is there and will always be there for Aarti, even if it means going against her own family.
Rosey almost everyone agreed with the fact that Gayatri did the right thing to slap Yash, as no matter what, but he indeed ended up (almost) doing the same thing that Python did to her.

Ammaji, well the less we talk about her the better.

To tell you a secret Rosey, your favorite part is my favorite part also. 😉

Love you Rosey for always giving me such beautiful and encouraging comments ❤️









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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update

finally prashants truth is out😡😡😡
he is such a bad person who made aarit life living hell😡😡😡

poor aarti has suffered sooo much that she even get scared of yash

now waiting how yash will look after her and bring old aarti back

Jas right now only a small part of the truth has been revealed. It'll take time, for the entire truth to come out 😭

Python was not at all a human being. Wait till you know what else he did to everyone 😡

It'll take time and so much efforts on Yash's part. But he'll bring back the old Aarti, with whom he fell in love with 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

The promo is superb, and the pic is awesome, perfectly matches the situation. At last Yash found his love and Aarti found solace in his arms. But the pain is there of the two and half years in which Aarti suffered because of Prashant.


As far as the chapter concerns, it's superb. Very, very thanks for the superb and long, long update. The whole chapter fully filled with emotional roller coaster.

After seeing that Aarti was scared of Prashant, he asked her what did he done to her and why is she scared of him. Yash frightened seeing Aarti's condition and called ma. Gayatri feared about what would have happened seeing her in that condition. She recalled to see her in the same condition.

Loved the way Gayatri comfort her. She really a superb MIL for Aarti who loves her like her daughter and concerned about her. Gayatri confronted Yash about Aarti's condition. She asked him how he could stoop so low to try to rape your own wife. Yash came to know that Prashant raped Aarti and this truth make him numb. G3 ask him to get out.

Yash is hurting himself in gym. He was devastated because of what he did to Aarti. The words of Gayatri and Aarti are ringing in his ears. " No Prashant no. Please don't hurt me... You are like Prashant... ...You tired to force yourself on your wife... ...You tried to do the same thing that Prashant did to her. You are no less than Prashant... You are like Prashant... No Prashant no..."

He recalled Prashant words, " You took away Aarushi away from me, so I took away Aarti from you." He was punching the bag. His mind surrounded by millions of questions about Aarti, ma and Prashant. He is not getting answers to any of his questions. He came to know that Aakash was her cousin.

The little angel Palak crying and he comfort her, but it's Palak that comfort Yash. He calmed down due to his little angel.

Loved the last scene. When first Aarti flinched seeing him and then when he was about to go, she called him. She hugged him. His soothing words act like a balm on her wounds. She found solace in his arms and fell asleep.


Shashi even I felt that this pic was perfect for this Promo, for this upcoming scene as it shows the pain, the anguish, the heartbreak in their faces. The way Aarti is all shattered and an equally shattered Yash is comforting her, being there for her, and Aarti finally finding that solace in his arms for which she has been yearning for so long.

Shashi, I don't want to leave any minute details and I'm trying my best to cover all aspects all details in every chapters, and that's why we are getting long updates. As it helps me to explain every situations as I want them to be.

Yash was at first confused as to what had happened to her. But one look at her scared him to death. He tried to know the reason for it and tried to console Aarti, but couldn't do it as he didn't even knew why Aarti was comparing him with Prashant and what could've happened between Aarti and Prashant. And the only person who could've helped him at that moment was Gayatri Ma, so in a disheveled state he ran to fetch her.
Gayatri is the only one who's witnessed what Aarti went through at the hands of Prashant, so she never left Aarti's side. Though in the process she lost the love of her husband, her Yash.
But she still stood by Gayatri. Which is really very commendable for a MIL.

Yash was devastated in the gym, as slowly the realization of what could've happened with Aarti was sinking in, through all those words ringing I his ears. The more truth he will learn the more devastated he will be.
And there are so many answers that he deserves to know. All of them will break him even more. But he'll have to stay strong for Aarti's sake, as now he'll have to bring back the old Aarti, with whom he fell in love with.
It won't be simple for him, as he'll have to go through so much so finally get there. But he will get there and bring back the old Aarti, as they both are "Meant To Be" happily together forever and ever.

OMG Shashi I've told everyone that the last scene with Aarti and Palak finding that peace and solace in their protector Yash's warm and loving and protective embrace, is my favorite scene by far. ❤️


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