Leave me and My Aarthiji alone last ch pg 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Thanks a lot my dear and you are most welcome.🤗
Thanks for loving each and every part. At last PraDhi united the family. They opened the eyes of them. Next part is the last part dear!

Its my pleasure dear🤗
Omg..What next part is last part...😲
Then wanna new aarya story😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

It's ok Kate I understand. 😊

I wish I could work at this speed and finish at least one of my works 😕 😆

No don't ever do that. You are a great writer and it gives us pleasure to read your work. It's like watching PV again. So don't ever stop that.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Its my pleasure dear🤗
Omg..What next part is last part...😲
Then wanna new aarya story😳

A new aarya story. We'll see. Now I have to think about new concept.🤪
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

A new aarya story. We'll see. Now I have to think about new concept.🤪

Ok Take your own time...Will be waiting😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have done a fantastic job in this part Kate.Really it was just awesome..👏👏👏👏👏
The way Paridhi and Prateek tried to convince SP about yash and arti is just awesome.👏👏👏
Loved the way they showed reality to Bhidhi and Pankaj also.Your dialogue delivery was just mind blowing yaar.👏👏👏
Waiting for the next one.😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow my dear..
pradhi has done a great awesome job 👏
they are the true relations of arya.. who supported with gratitude remembering all arthi had done to pari.

the way they struggled in explaining to sp how arya is important in their life makes me feel proud of them and they succeeded in making sp agree to bring back arya to SM..😳

and it was definitely a great surprise to arya who never expected this... the warm hug and the love shows how much they missed inspite of anger blocking their eyes...

and wow the men are cooking for the ladies... it will be so wonderful and vidhi's statement of " will it be eatable is so hilarious dear " 🤣

finallly the happy family is back and i am so happy dear.. continue soon ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

You have done a fantastic job in this part Kate.Really it was just awesome..👏
The way Paridhi and Prateek tried to convince SP about yash and arti is just awesome.👏👏👏
Loved the way they showed reality to Bhidhi and Pankaj also.Your dialogue delivery was just mind blowing yaar.👏👏👏
Waiting for the next one.😳😳

Thanks Mukthi. Truly I was waiting for your comment dear! You are one of the person who stayed with me from the beginning.
It now has become a habit to wait for your comment. Thanks my dear appreeciating and encouraging my simple update.
May God Bless you dear!🤗❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

wow wow my dear..
pradhi has done a great awesome job 👏
they are the true relations of arya.. who supported with gratitude remembering all arthi had done to pari.

the way they struggled in explaining to sp how arya is important in their life makes me feel proud of them and they succeeded in making sp agree to bring back arya to SM..😳

and it was definitely a great surprise to arya who never expected this... the warm hug and the love shows how much they missed inspite of anger blocking their eyes...

and wow the men are cooking for the ladies... it will be so wonderful and vidhi's statement of " will it be eatable is so hilarious dear " 🤣

finallly the happy family is back and i am so happy dear.. continue soon ❤️

Thank you so much Maha for this lovely comment as it really means a lot to me. Paridi is straight forward and talktative by her nature. So she only can do this. She only can open the eyes SM members.

Happy to hear you enjoyed men's cooking along with Vidhi!
Thank you once again and I will try to update it soon.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
last chapter
yay this is my 2000th post🥳

So all SM men went to kitchen to cook.
"Oh Pratheik we don't know any single thing on cooking. You only have to save our honor." Said Pankaj.

"Ok you all do what I say! If you tell as I say we can prepare a good dinner maybe better than ladies in our house." Said Pratheik

"Pankaj bhayya you make and roll the dough. As you are the fattest..." Pankaj glared at him
"And strongest you can do it easily. "

"Pratheik..." Said Pankaj.

"Why did I say something wrong. Now start your work as we have less time.Yash bhai you are so emotional why don't you cut onions? Some tears won't trouble you as you and bhabhi's love is so emotional"

"Pratheik ... Are you giving instructions or teasing us? " Saying this Yash chased after him.

"Yes Yash he's too much now" And Pankaj also chased Pratheik with Yash around the kitchen. Pratheik who was running to safe guard him went and knocked on SP who just came in.

"What are you doing. Won't we start cooking? If we play we won't be able to cook on time." Said SP.

"Yes bauji. See these baiyyas remembered their childhood with me and chasing me like that old age." Said Pratheik.

"PRatheik..." Shouted both Yash and Pankaj.

"Ok you canfight later now let's start work. Pratheik beta tall us what to do?"

"Ok bauji! " So they started to cook.
After a while RD came running into the kitchen.
"Yash bhai! Someone has come to meet you!He said his name is Prashanth and he has come with a lawyer."

"What he is up to now? " Ssaid Yash.

"Let's go" Other men also joined him.
Aarthi who was passing their heard this and came in."

She was shocked.
"Yashji ! Prashanth??"

"Don't worry Aarthiji! Trust me. Nothing bad will happen. Come with me. Don't stress your self."

So all went to the hall.
Prashanth was there with a lawyer.
Yash went forward with so much confidence.

"Oh Mr. Yash Scindia. When I was sick you forced me to give custody of Ansh to you. But now I have filed a case against you saying I was forced for this when I was sick and saying you blackmailed me."

"What did you say Prashanth? I didn't force you neither I did come to you when you were sick. Wait Pratheik go and bring Ansh's custody documents soon."
So he brought them.
"Here Prashanth check the date. It was the date before mine and Aarthi's marriage. You were not sick at that time. If you go to court you will loose the case. I'm sure. Check it lawyer."

"What is this Prashanth. Sorry Prashanth I can't take this case. All the things are against you. Better find another lawyer."
Saying this the lawyer left the place.

"Don't try to outsmart me Prashanth. I know about people like you and I took each step carefully. IT's your fault that you signed it without reading. You are so cheap and I have to think carefully to protect my family from you. Now please go and don't ever try to come back here. Otherwise you will see worse side of Yash." Said Yash.
Prashanth left the place silently.

"whatever you did was wrong beta. But people like Prashanth will take advantage if we be good to them. So I don't scold you on this. Now all of you let's go to the kitchen and start cooking." Said SP.

All the men left the place expect Yash. Aarthi was shocked seeing this whole incident.
Yash turned to her.
"Sorry Aarthi I kept you in dark as it's not good for you to stress your self. I knew this will come as soon as get cured. So when Shobha ma asked me to give Ansh for the bone marrow I asked for the custody of Ansh instead. Yes I was wrong. But I couldn't take it anymore. I saw what you went through because of them I almost lost you. I couldn't take another chance. So I went to a lawyer and arranged this. Sorry I should not have done this."

"No Yash ji! I'm surprised. If you haven't done this..." She hugged him tightly and cried.
Yash hugged her back.

"I couldn't trust Dubeys anymore. So I did this Aarthiji. So sorry.I broke our principal not to lie. I hate lies and I myself did it."

"You did it for us Yashji! You don't know he's a cheap person. You don't know what I went through after marrying him. He ...he...abuse me. He hit me...He hated Ansh...He called him bad blood. He said I'm a cheap woman.."

"Shh! Aarthiji! I'm with you now. Forget your past. Now no one can hurt you or Ansh. I'm with you and our family is with you.!"

That night all enjoyed marvelous dinner cooked by men thanks to chef Pratheik.
They all sang songs and danced and had fun.

At night in Aarya's room
"I'm so happy Yashji! Now all MU are cleared now we can stay as a happy family again."

"We'll give a second chance to our relationship Aarthiji. Now the past is gone and we can start a new life with our children" Saying this Yash held her hand so lovingly.

"Yes Yashji! I also want to start a new life with you and my family."
yash kissed her forehead.
Aarthi hugged him tighly and Yash responded to it.
They lost in each others love but this time not as a sin but a pure relationship.

The end
Thank you all readers who were reading this so far.
Sometimes you may not like the ending and the step Yash took. If so forgive me for it. I had to finish this story so I wrote it this way.
This is just an imagination. Sorry for making Yash take this step.Really sorry.
Thank you once again for bearing up with me. Sorry for the delays of updating.





Edited by caller123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kate, the last part is very fuuny in the beginning n very emotional& lovely at the end👏👏...great job dear👏⭐️...
pankaj was asked to prepare dough as he's fattest😆😆😆...n yash was asked to cut the onions as he's emotional😆😆...prateek u r awesome👏😆😆...kate where did u get this idea😉..it's so funny😆 dear...

that prashant😡😡..yash gave a brilliant reply to his cunningness 👏👏😈...great job yashji👏...

aww...that family time n our aarya's start of new journey is a bliss😳...

uff...so aarya started it☺️...n no more consider it a sin😳😆😆...

thank u so much for this lovely story dear🤗...
Edited by kratzyfan - 12 years ago

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