OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Alamelu
loved it...i remember feeling real bad for arti then and now after reading this feel even worse for her. This time bua has added on her quota of hatred for arti to push the kids also away from her. I am surprised arti has not gone to a madhouse by now with all the tricks being pulled by ishita to alienate arti from everyone in the house. right now looks like radha is the only one who is on arti's side. How can anyone even think that arti would do things to hurt her kids...does not make sense at all. ANyway eagerly waiting to see how everyone is going to react to arti's claim that it is aayu who is the baby adopted by pari and pratiek...
I did not like the way pari spoke to arti even in the show and after reading yours I still feel the same. I sometimes felt she is one selfish person.

Thanks Alamelu for reading and commenting.

I'm not saying that Aarti was right all the time, but she suffered the most. At the hands of her family and both her husbands. Yash was at his worst post Mumbai and here also he's behaving the same, maybe more worse than before.

Even I used to wonder how Aarti survived in that madhouse, moreover how Aayu survived, despite Aarti having complications and so much stress throughout her pregnancy. The woman who risked her own life to bring the baby into this world, is being accused of loosing the same baby.

And that baby landed up with selfish Paridhi, who could never see Aarti's happiness.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sara1990
awesome
thanks for the PM
waiting for the next update

Thanks Sara for reading and commenting. 😛

Originally posted by: ksen
very nice.thanks for pm

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

Originally posted by: freya123
grt part

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
Congrats

Thanks 😛

[QUOTE=alekhika20]Asum part,cnt soon[/QUOTE

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

[QUOTE=prettyji]congo 200th post

nice

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitsri65

Fantastic Nikki...simply lo..oooved it👏...ur version was way way much better than original...and what I loved more here is Buaji overhearing and joining hands...for the tadka is more and the outcome will be different...lets see how u shape Buaji's character in the end...which is important.

I did feel sad for Arti for she needed support from Yash the most but the trust was not there ...hope to see Yash regret and more. I want Arti to show some attitude towards Yash in later part...will be eagerly waiting to know the reaction of family towards Arti's emotional action and outburst ... Ayu...the little baby adopted by Paridhi and Prateek...wishing Nikki for the update to come from u soon this time.

The details from the setting, dialog and the tone of ur version was bang on Nikki🤗

I'm happy that you liked my version better than the one we got in the end of PV, they ruined the whole beautiful show for us. 😭

Chitra Buaji was the perfect Tadka to spice up PV, always hearing everything standing outside of AarYa's room 😡

She even suspected Ishita due to this habit of hers. But in the end CVs made a fool of Bua's character also 😕

Chitra Yash treated her so badly post Mumbai, but CVs never showed any remorse from him nor him repenting. So I'll try my best to show Aarti giving him the much needed realization of what she went through post Mumbai.

And this time I'll try to update soon, cause my interest in this OS came back after reading everyone's comments.

@bold

And THANK YOU SO MUCH for the encouraging words 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: princess121993
RES🤗👏

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Firstly congrats for ur 200th post...very happy and proud of u👏🥳

Now coming to the update

YASH😡
ISHITA😡
BUA😡
PARIDHI😡

I am hating all this characters so much right...yash is realluy being annoying now...he is not even trying to listen aarti...trying to understand her pain...he is acting as if he is only the one affected by aayu's kidnapping...he is not even understanding what aarti might hve gone through..seeing her own son getting kidnapped in front of her eyes😭

I feel so so bad for aarti...whenever someone else needs...aarti stands like a pillar for everyone...n wheneveer she needs a suport...no freaking person cares for her...i can onluy see radha sensitive here...atleast she knows and ares about aarti...the temple scene is really good

this bua and ishita..ughh...GOD...ishita is dhabba in the name of women...she is trying to show aarti down..with the help of bua,...but both of the fools dont know...even in ramayan...ravan died..n they will die soon

N this yash..di...i really want u to punish yash for being so insensitive towards aarti...really..show aarti showing hell lot of aatitude..on him...its high time he pays...no freaking SM member ever apologize to aarti...for their stupid behavior...i want everyone...every single person to repent their behavior...

n this paridhi...WTH...did she forget it was aarti who risked her own pregnany condition..to save her from that murder case...she also forget that it was aarti who had opposed bua when bua had insulted paridhi in the aayu's naming ceremony only because she could not concieve...paridhi...go to hell...😡

i really ant to know how will everyone react when aarti will claim adpoted baby as aayu...

cannot wait..please update soon

Charmi I can understand your anger toward all the four characters for whom you've used 😡, cause my reaction was the same for the, in PV at one point or the other. But for Ishita it was like this 🤬

For hiding the truth from Yash I was angry with Aarti also, but she was not entirely at fault and that's what I'll try to show here. Aarti will make Yash realize about the way he had behaved post Mumbai and what she went through all the humiliation because of him 😡

Paridhi and Vidhi used Aarti as per their convenience, loved her when they wanted to and neglected her when they wanted to 😡

Regarding Aayu well lets wait and see what happens and how will everyone react?

Loved your comment Chams ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: palbhar
Poor Aarti... Ishita is making life so difficult for her and Yash is no better!!! Bua 😡 how could she do this??? Really awful of her...shouldn't be surprised but am really sad that all those Aarti helped have forsaken her!!!

Delusional Ishita, who only thinks for herself, is trying to create a rift between Yash and Aarti and she's succeeding also 😕 😡

And we all know how Bua felt for Aarti even before she met her.

Bharthi don't we all know how SM family members behaved with Aarti? Used her and abused her as per their convenience 😡 😭

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: saf24
Fantastic update Nikki. Gosh Yash's beahaviour is something else. I know he is hurt because Aayu is not with them but he is not willing to let up and give Aarti a chance to explain while she just bears it all silently. Bua and Ishita are so evil, can't wait to see what will happen when both get caught.Beautifully written as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

Yes Saf Yash's behavior is always something else, very unpredictable. And we all know when he's hurt how he shuts out everyone and takes it all out on Aarti and blames her for everything forgetting that she's also a human being who's putting up with him and still trying to stay strong and smile. But to his surprise it'll be different this time. This time Aarti will retaliate in a way that he'd never even dreamed about.

Bua and Ishita, well we'll have to wait and see what happens to them

Thanks Saf for appreciating my efforts 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: nan0102
,,hate that ishita soo much and that maya bua,,and poor aarti had to face the problem all by herself,,thanks god radha maa is there for her,,

Nan it's a waste of our time and energy to even talk about Ishita. She's crossed all the limits of being an alien also.

Yes thanks God at least Radha Ma was there for Aarti, or else I couldn't even imagine her condition.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
Yash is soo mean...but isn't he most of the time lol sry 😆 but srsly tht was soo mean
feel bad for poor Aarti doh
n Bua as always pisses me off to no extent if only she was real I wud've been in jail already for killin her😆
Ishita no comments yucky 😡🤢
I loved it though

Kesha 🤗

After such a long time read a comment from you

Don't say sorry for what you said regarding Yash, cause at times he was really a jerk and poor Aarti had to always bear his brunt 😭

Bua, well we all know how she was even in of also, but we are lucky that the show ended before You Ended in jail for killing Bua 😆

And yes no comments for yucky Ishita 😡