OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Unreserved the post on page 26

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Fantastic Nikki...simply lo..oooved it👏...ur version was way way much better than original...and what I loved more here is Buaji overhearing and joining hands...for the tadka is more and the outcome will be different...lets see how u shape Buaji's character in the end...which is important.

I did feel sad for Arti for she needed support from Yash the most but the trust was not there ...hope to see Yash regret and more. I want Arti to show some attitude towards Yash in later part...will be eagerly waiting to know the reaction of family towards Arti's emotional action and outburst ... Ayu...the little baby adopted by Paridhi and Prateek...wishing Nikki for the update to come from u soon this time.

The details from the setting, dialog and the tone of ur version was bang on Nikki🤗

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palbhar

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Poor Aarti... Ishita is making life so difficult for her and Yash is no better!!! Bua 😡 how could she do this??? Really awful of her...shouldn't be surprised but am really sad that all those Aarti helped have forsaken her!!!

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Fantastic update Nikki. Gosh Yash's beahaviour is something else. I know he is hurt because Aayu is not with them but he is not willing to let up and give Aarti a chance to explain while she just bears it all silently. Bua and Ishita are so evil, can't wait to see what will happen when both get caught.Beautifully written as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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nan0102

@nan0102

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

,,hate that ishita soo much and that maya bua,,and poor aarti had to face the problem all by herself,,thanks god radha maa is there for her,,

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Yash is soo mean...but isn't he most of the time lol sry 😆 but srsly tht was soo mean

feel bad for poor Aarti doh

n Bua as always pisses me off to no extent if only she was real I wud've been in jail already for killin her😆

Ishita no comments yucky 😡🤢

I loved it though

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
Yash is soo mean...but isn't he most of the time lol sry😆but srsly tht was soo mean
feel bad for poor Aarti doh
n Bua as always pisses me off to no extent if only she was real I wud've been in jail already for killin her😆
Ishita no comments yucky😡🤢
I loved it though

I would gladly be your acomplice 😃 only I would have and additional charge Ishita's murder 😆

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Nikki love the update so badly want to see Ishita get punished, Bua humiliated in the worst way, and Yash regret big time not forgiven easily by Aarti. Will wait patiently for whenever you update 😃

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Fabulous update. Yash is behaving so rude with Aarti. He don't want to understand her. Even he gets angry when Aarti took the name of Ishita. That disgusting Ishita making Aarti's all work wrong. And Bua, she is helping Ishita to do the evil. And she is successful in doing what she want to do. The kids are also fearing to go near Aarti.

Wow! Aarti claimed that the child PraDhi brought is Aayu. But I am sure no one will agree to her, not Yash, as he didn't want to listen to Aarti.

Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago