OS ' Because Of You'. Chapter 7 & epilogue, page 77

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Superb update Nikki. Love the way you have written the scene and looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as always.

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jikky_84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Lovely update Nikki 😃

So you are building up for the next phase...

how good it would have been if CVs really showed how Yash's anger affects Arati and also Arati needs to be more careful in doing things. But then they spoiled it.

Looking forward to see your version.

I would like you to show the faults from both the sides, Yash's immediate reactions and anger and Arati's carelessness in doing things which in a way lead to the kidnapping.

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Tanvi Narula

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Woww.. Luvly update.. Very well written..👏.👍🏼 poor aarti..😭..this time i truly want her 2 not forgive yash easily...n do sumthing of this wichita..😡 n thanx 4 d pm..😃 really luking 4ward 4 further updates..😃

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ANU

@kratzyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Nikki,a much waited episode is finally up😃...

"So here also Yash will do the same, but this time he'll bear the consequences for his actions later"---i like this sentence a lot becoz he didn't even apologize for his actions😡 in pv...so here i wish i could see...

" See Aarti what I did to you. You were so proud of yourself that My Yash will never mistrust you. But look as soon as you lost his Aayu, his own flesh and blood, he jerked away from you. And I promise you that very soon he'll throw you out of his life forever and then no one will come in between me and my Yash."----these lines really remembered me of that witchita again😡😈...

i think u are compltely indulged in every character when u r writing their dialogues which is a sign of a very good writer👏👏

thanks for the pm🤗

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Superb part, Nikki di ! 👏👏

Nothing much to say actually because many scenes were similar to PV ! Loved the addition of dialogues.. Its added up the emotions and tense in the story ! 😛 OMG.. Ishita is in my mind again ! 😡😡

But I wanna see Yash bearing the consequences of his actions ! 😛 Much awaiting one !

Good one and Thanks for the PM ! 😃

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

wow di great start😳

Ishita dont want to repeat gaalis for her😆

waiting for next part di😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: princess121993
Yay...again first to comment...

OMG..what a terrific update...OMG..but i broken...feeling so pity for aarti😭

yash is not at all believing her...i want him to pay for i now...cvs never showed it😡 he always does it to aarti..never tries to listen and understand her side when its really needed..

n this ishita...freaking witch lady...hate her..hate her urghhh😡

why cant even vidhi or paridhi understand and support aarti? y r they standing like fools? urghhh...

yash...calm down man...n try understanding aarti man..or else u will feel really very guilty...man...

hey bhagwan mere...is ishita ko utha lo...

great update...please update soon

Charmi even I wanted Yash to realize the consequences his anger can have on the ones who loves him dearly, especially Aarti. She's the one who has to bear the brunt of his anger.

So here I'll try to show how Aarti will react on Yash's behavior. And how much it hurts her when he accuses her every-time without giving a second thought to it.

And the less we talk about Wichita the better 😡 😕 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sara1990
lovely update

Thanks Sara 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: saf24
Superb update Nikki. Love the way you have written the scene and looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as always.

Thanks Saf 😊

Next update hopefully will come next week 😊

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