FF 'Meant To Be' thread-2, Chapter -17, pg-124.

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Nikki...so far this chapter was the best according to me. Not a moment of dullness, every para was a required information .

Am not going into every scene detail...for I loved the entire chapter but yes few thoughts I would like to share -

1. Never judge the book by its cover - so true - Aarushi's modern look and behaviour can put her into a wrong slot but it is her thought that holds culture and has given shape to her character. Loved her mature and much needed talk to Yash.

2. Prashant's death didn't concern Yash, it was Sunshine he couldn't allow to die and so slowly he found himself changing towards G3 and Arti after Aarushi putting her words effectively into Yash.

3. Grief is the price we pay for LOVE - This suits Arti for the situation she is in. We saw her sleeping peacefully in Yash bed alongwith Palak. Sometimes your jerks/grief wipes out momentarily cause the protector/love is there to look after your grief... and that is the sole comfort she got in that bed...her love...which I believe you will do so...in your later chapters...ofcourse I don't want u to highlight it.

4. Joy multiplies and kills the present emotion to express happiness. This is what happened to Arti to her reaction of the first word 'PA' uttered by payal and her immediate action of hugging Yash and then the realisation.

5. Love is such a deep foundation that irrespective of how the weather behaves...the foundation refuses to move even if it happens to be the earthquake...and this is what Yash has realised his deep love for Arti which he refused to believe with the range of emotions that played in his life.

Reaction of Yash in your next chapter can be controlled emotions if he goes by Aarushi's positive thoughts and then we can see the happening of the party scene given by you in your earlier promo.

Would definately love to give you ⭐️⭐️⭐️ as this chapter was worth and also for keeping up your promise. Once again Nikki...well done!

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palbhar

@palbhar

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

OMG!!! Poor Yash!!!! Just when he realizes and accepts his feelings for Aarti, he has to hear the phone conversation!!!! Aarti saying ILY to Aakash must have broken Yash... so sad for him!
What is going on between Aarti and Aakash?!!! Who is he to her?!!
So many questions that I hope you'll answer in the next update!!! The suspense is nail -biting!!!!
All in all, thank you for such a quick update...really appreciate it!!

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

OMG.. what a pleasant surprise! Super quick update.. Brilliant 👏 👏

Hope Aarti comes out of her past soon and know her life is precious to her daughter and family. Yes! Yash is regretting his harsh words to Aarti-Gayatri 👍🏼 his anger was justified though but he's feeling bad for it especially towards Gayatri cus she took care of him since childhood. Well written Nikki.

Am loving Aarushi hope Arpita does soon 😆 Her advice to yash was spot on. He made him find that love in him that he's trying to deny. She's very right as I also thought yash married Aarti out of love and to protect her from the world and Ammaji's taunts..palak was just a short way. 😆 Finally he went home with a new found feelings 🥳

OMG..palak's first word is PA how cute. Huh, the last sentence Aarti said to yash there was something she meant but yash thinks she was over emotional. 😭

Ohh noo.. yash is again heart broken at the end 💔 she said I love you to Aakash 😲 wait, she can say it to him as a friend nah. Or am I assuming what I want it to be 😆 pls I don't want another heart broken yash.

Oh boy Nikki,you did what you do best..end it where why head spins 😡

That was a fantastic update my friend. ❤️ 🤗

Edited by Abie10 - 12 years ago

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jikky_84

@jikky_84

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Awww...Palak's first word was PA...that was so awsome. She is so attached to her father 😳

So again Yash is falling in love with Arati... He was always in love with Arati but it was just that because of her betrayal he was not accepting that.

Arushi is the most understanding person in this FF ...and she is a very true friend who made Yash understand what is right and there is no shame in accepting that he still love Arati.

Finally the promo scene is coming...eagerly waiting for the scene and the truth 😃

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ns1970

@ns1970

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Amazing update wow Payal first word PA oh that was so sweet and Yash falling in love in love with Aarti again totally amazing BUT then Aakash i am going crazy thinking who this Aakash is but i am sure i will be wrong so looking forward in to knowing who this person is going to be and what part in there life he will play
waiting anxiously on update

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

nice update
like the way gaytari made aarti realized that what she is doing not right

love the way yash changed his behavior towards maa and aarti and

palak't first word is pa
wowww

waiting for next update

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Great update nikki dear👏 👏

Gayatri and aarti confrontation superb👏...Poor aarti😭😭

omg...😲She thinking as her a threat to her own life andPalak..How much she surpressed her pain when she told propasal to aarushi😭😭

I really sad for aarti😭..Paridi 😡words are really harsh and made felt like her.😡.

Whatever may be she done wrong but still didn't accept paridi's taunt to her😡..I hope once truth is out ,Paridi going to be regrets her words🤔

Yash and aarushi conversation superb...👏 👏

Liked aarushi character and she maturedly well explained to yash👏.

Again yash accepted his feeling to aarti..Liked the change of yash behavior to aarti and gayatri...⭐️ ⭐️

Aarya palak scene fantastic👏😛😳

Lovely moment when palak said first word pa.❤️..Wow...Palak is such adorable kid made their parents happy by telling first word...

Loved the way aarti expressed happily confessed about palak moment with her hug😳

Last part..Again twist.Omg aarti telling ILU to aakash😲😕.Poor yash again heart broken...💔

Its seems like she is purposly doing to yash so she can stay away from him and palak🤔

How yash going to react towards aarti after this phone call😕

Suspense precap.Much awaited scene and the truth

Eagerly waiting for next part

Continue soon

Thanks for pm...😊

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

OMG OMG aarti said I LOVE U to Akash

again my head has started spinning

so many questions going in my mind

wait for next part di where we will get all our ans😉

any ways di great update. loving it so much😳

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Fantastic update Nikki. I like the fact that Yash has changed his behaviour towards Aarti and is now trying to be more understanding with her. The scene with Palak's first word was beautifully written as well. Looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as always.

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: pvejani
ch 14 and ch 15:
just read both chapters...enjoyed reading.
wow...superb updates dear👏👏👏...loved very❤️ very very❤️ much .
i liked 😉😛yash checking whether aarti is getting jelous or not.😎..but poor😉 yash unable to see her expression😕.

but i was shocked😲 when aarti kept that offer in front of aarushi...i felt she is planning to suicide😔 and also felt how can she love prashant so much when he was just using her and not loving her truly.

very interesting..

beautifully written👏

thanx for long update and pm.

continue soon

ch 16:
amazing update👏👏👏 dear.
loved very very much.
loved aarushi's role in this story..very nicely portraid👏..
loving this positive change in yash's behaviour.
waiting for aakash's entry so aarti's relation with him will be clear.
thanx for update and pm.

Pooja thank you so muchmuch🤗
I'm replying on both of your comments together. 😳

Yash is deeply attracted to her, that's why he went ahead with Aarushi's plan to make Aarti jealous 😉

But in vain 😭. Their plan backfired. Instead Aarti went to Aaru with that stupid proposal 😡. But can't blame Aarti also, as she's lost self confidence 😭 and on top of that Paridhi's taunting added the fuel 😡

No Aarti will never commit suicide. She's ready to leave Palak, but she'll never commit suicide.

And the positive change in Yash will change once again in the next chapter, as he'll be completely heartbroken once again 🥺

I'll try to update by Thursday or Friday 😳