FF 'Meant To Be' thread-2, Chapter -17, pg-124.

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Gkathria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Congratulations Nikki on reaching 100 pages!!!!! I'm so happy! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

I love Aarushi!!!!, she's so nice and she genuinely loves Yashji!!! but I really am having trouble understanding Aarti, so again I'm going to stick to my decision of commenting after most of the truth has been unraveled.

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Abie I was not so sure and confident about this chapter (like I told you in the PM). But now when I read everyone's comments I'm feeling a bit relieved. Yash is really hurt that Gayatri can love a stranger more than she ever loved him.
And he said those demeaning things, cause somewhere deep down Prashant's last words about Aarti and Aakash are still bothering him. And what hurts him even more that Aarti still thinks and dreams about Prashant, even after she's married to him.
Aarushi respects Yash more than she'll show, that's why she's ready to do anything to see a smile in his face.
And why Aarti wants to leave Palak and go away, well one of the main reasons is she's completely broken and shattered from the inside. She doesn't have that confidence in her to raise Palak.
If Aarushi tells Yash about what Aarti told her, I think Yash himself will kill Aarti in a fit of anger and hurt😆

Nikki, I told you I trusted you and you'll do justice to the chapter see you did. 😳 Haha I know right,he will kill Aarti knowing what she's up to and that too because of prashant. 😆 😆

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Rosey Rosey Rosey your comments are becoming longer and longer day by day, but I guess that's the effect of this FF and it proves how much involved you are are in it and how much you are loving it.
I don't want to keep you all waiting for the promo scene, so that's why I'm trying to update soon. Next week also you'll get two updates.
Gayatri has become Aarti's strongest supporters and Paridhi is one confused soul right now, she doesn't know what's right and what's wrong.
Yes Aarti's condition has become really pitiable and so sad, that even I feel emotional while writing about her.
Yash is still feeling hurt by Aarti's betrayal that's why He's trying his best to hurt her so brutally, but deep down he still loves her madly and that's why his feelings will slowly change towards Aarti by the end of the next chapter.
And it's now just a matter of few more days, and after which all you questions and queries will be answered.
😳

u r right di i m very much involved with this ff
u know i m daydreaming about what may happen????
what might be the mystery?

sometimes i fear that if i may not be able to bear the truth and my expectations on u r increasing day by day

i know yash deeply loves aarti but i fear that aarti do something stupid that she will regret and we all regret
hope she will not attempt to kill herself

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Nikki before my comment I wanna confess something dear.This time I am commenting late on your first baby and my passionate love MTB not coz I was busy as I read it last night but I did it forcefully as I was literally speechless after reading your update.For the first time I am searching for words to comment on a thread.
You said that you were confused about the kitchen scene but it's my most fav dear as I felt both satisfaction and sadness while I read it.Satisfaction cozI wanted Yash to react on G3 and Arti for all those pain and humiliation he gone through this two years and sadness coz I could feel the pain Arti going through when Yash was spitting those venomous words to her.
Then the way you portrayed Yash and Art's complex married life was beyond any word to describe.I just failed to understand how you did this magic.There is everything in their relation...silent love...bitter hatred...the frustration of past ...the anguish of present...the conflict between emotion and the different shape of relation...really Nikki it was a masterpiece of writing and I am telling you not as your friend but as a ex student of literature.
The scene when JB kissed yash I was just stunned.Like Yash even I was speechless.I wanted Arti to be jealous to see the kiss but like Yash i was also feeling very sad for her.
When Arti told those heart wrecking words to JB I felt like crying.It's very clear that Arti is having such a pain that she forgot to live...She is so helpless that she is even ready to give up the only source of happiness od her life ...her Palak...I m just speechless again.
It's my birthday today but the whole day I thought about some questions...
1.What was real...G3's anger to yash in the past or her unconditional love for Arti in the present..which one i should support...?
2.Why Arti is having sleepless night for this long days...Why cant she get sleep...what is chasing her...is it her fear of Prashant or her guilt of doing something wrong?
3. Why arti alz try to keep away herself from Yash as she is even shaken of the thought to come close to him...why Yash's single touch disturbs her so much.../
4.Palk was the reason of her life to live but why she is ready to give her to JB?
Nikki for the first time I am commenting you without any any emotional sign coz I am still lost in the part.Everytime I feel while reading your update that this is the best for me but this time I can say dear it will be very tough for you to beat this part of yours as I said it's just a masterpiece of writing.
I am waiting to see Yash's changing behavior and for the climax to be revealed holding my breath.Plz dear update it first coz I just cant wait anymore to read the next one.❤️🤗🤗

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

OMG nikki dear...
You are awesome .. fantastic da... ❤️

Poor arthi always in some thoughts and now fear of yash getting close with her added to it...😭

the way yash spoke to g3 and arthi may be harsh but they need this for their actions..
but pari behaving rude to arthi is not good dear... may be she loves yash as brother but she must understand arthi's feelings too.. 😔

the major trap set was aaru kissing yash to make changes in arthi and her stay with yash ... 😈 but i am shocked to see the decision of arthi to leave her own blood and go away if aaru agrees to be palak's mother...
It was so beautiful to see palak bonding with aaru closely dear 🤗

Now i like JB so much dear.. she is playful but more true to yash and tries to help him in bonding with arthi.. she is great frined and person dear ⭐️⭐️⭐️

your precap is making me anxious to read more dear.. waiting .. waiting.. waiting..

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: ns1970
Amazing update Nikki love love love this one I think Aarushi is the star in this update .don't know why aarti can't forget prashant ( I hate him so much)
Waiting on the next update

Thanks 😊

Aarushi is indeed the star star of the chapter and she'll be in the next one also 😳.

And Prashant even after dying, is ruining Yash's life in some way or the other 😡

Will try my best to update by Tuesday 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: jikky_84
Wow...Nikki you updated twice this week.. 🥳

This chapter is not boring ...ok 😡

Its very essential to know how the relationship between Yash and Arati before you throw the truth to us 😆

I know there is lot more to come about the past but then I was wondering about Arati's nightmares...why are they still there...may be its there because she was never able to pour out her heart to anyone. Till Prashant was there...there was something there but now as she know Yash hates her..she is more scared of this life.

Arushi tured to be much more understanding than I have ever thought.

Waiting for the next update 😛

Asha your dhamki haunts me in my dreams 😭, that's why I'm trying to update faster than before. Even I was shocked two updates in one week 😲 😆. Next week also you'll get two updates 😉

Ok ok ok I agree this chapter is Not Boring 😆

Everyone's comments made me realize that this is indeed a beautiful chapter as its really essential to show the relationship between AarYa after their marriage and before the earth shattering truth comes out.

You are right, Aarti needs someone to share her grief and pain with.

Yash's hatred is not scaring her, but she's scared of the thought that she might end up hurting him again, as she's not able to let to of her past 😭

Even I didn't knew that Aarushi will turn out to be this understanding and caring 😆

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: saf24
Superb update Nikki. Glad to see that despite wanting to make Aarti suffer, Yash can't actually bring himself to do it as he feels guilty. I also loved the fact that he observes her so much that he knows about her sleeping issues and is curious as to what is causing it. Feel a little sorry for Aarti as she really seems to believe that Yash and Aarushi are genuinely happy together and is willing to sacrifice herself for them. Fantastic job as always.

Saf 🤗. This is because you caught something which no one has so far. You got it that despite claiming that he hates Aarti, Yash can't get rid of his true feelings for Aarti, whom he still loves from the bottom of the heart. That's why consciously and sometimes subconsciously he's observing each and every move of Aarti. And it pains him to see Aarti so hurt and depressed,.

Aarti's reasons for leaving Palak, will be shown in the next update. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

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Thanks for reading and commenting 😊

Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: caller123

I' so exited now about your story Nikki!. It has become a story that I cannot stop reading and a story I cannot stop loving. Wow I'm a fan of your and your style of writing Nikki!❤️

OMG Kate I'm speechless and touched and on cloud nine after reading your comment with such a beautiful compliment for me. All I can say or do is ❤️