FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 97

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepu59

Nice update loved the bond between yash ansh


Thanks a lot dear for your comments and support also..๐Ÿ˜ณ


Edited by nusratjahan505 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinnas

thanks mukku fr undrstanding my feelings and apprciate my little feedback .your JKT is a awesome journey to me like pv rerun I want to say more and more about it but unable till nw but I will put my feelings asap next week
So happy u didnt disapoint by this slow viewers feeling very glad ..
We pray for you and yor family all well nd happy at all times I glad to know uncle is well now ...
Have a great time dear ...aftr seeing ur reply fr my post I colud nt resist my self to again came to this place nd leave my thanks...


JB why are you thanking me dear...you know I am alz therefor you and my support and love will alz be with you.I am writing this story only for you guys and as long as you love it I will keep trying.So just chill and read when u like...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Hi mukti dear...๐Ÿค—

And yes aunty is doing well.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.She is recovering...day after tomorrow check up...

Saw your lovely reply of my comment.โค๏ธ
Heavy work load...Me unable to give reply comment of the update and will be waiting for next update...Take your own time and give it leisurely๐Ÿ˜ณ
Take care dear๐Ÿค—
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I am so happy that Aunty is recovering.May God alz bless her make her get well soon.Even now a days I am also very busy so couldn't reply you earlier...dont take any stress dear.Just follow my update when you are fully free.And take care of your health also coz you need to be strong and healthy also...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 123mitul

9 B is so heart wrenching!๐Ÿ˜ญ


Thanks a lot Mitul for your first comment...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

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yash is in such a poor state but tsill he is tyrying his best to fight with the enemies of his family
Yes Janu you are right.Yash has suffered a lot.But now when his own life is in danger he just wanna make sure the safety of his family and for this he wanna destroy the destroyer of his family...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• so that they can live a peaceful life after his departure..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
arpita conditions sounds scary n then nihaan n arpita words i was crying mukku n so scared to absorb all
top pf it i am sitting with my mom what to express baba i dont know how you able to put all these in words it worse ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
It was very tough for me to write that scene also and you wont believe jaanu that I also cried first time while writing that part...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.But I am happy that u also cried coz now hisaab barabaar hua ..hain na...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰


and aarti in her JKR mode but i wish aarti in her anger also jiust once look into deep eyes of yahs n then i know she will not take time to figure out how much pain yahs is bearing n that too all alone he needs her love her strength her aarti๐Ÿ˜ญ
Yes Arti is in JKR mood coz she cant take the indifference of Yash towards her and when she came to know that Yash had lied to her she just lost all control and burst out like this.But dont worry Yashu will be also like this and their fight will bring them close to each other...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
mukky precap made me smile๐Ÿ˜ณ
will look forward too beautiful one dear๐Ÿ‘
SO jaanu you are happy about the precap na..so lets increase your happiness a lil more...yes jannu in chap 9 two extra long updates are waiting for you...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


ps i am 60 the liked person on your partb๐Ÿ˜‰
I am so happpyyy..yeee...coz after my first update I have got 60 likes on my thread...

Love you so much Jaanu.Alz be with me...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ


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Posted: 11 years ago

Hum wo nahi jo dil tod denge,
Thaam ker haath sath chod denge,
Hum dosti karte hai pani or machli ki tarah,
Juda karna chahe koi to hum dum tod denge...

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG... A superb update from you, Mukku !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I loved the story progression !! Thumbs up on the way you are working on your story line !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

What A Drama yaar at the beginning !! Yash was too harsh when he burst his anger to Aarti and that had broken Aarti's heart to the core !! She refused to even speak to Yash !! And this had made Yash felt guilty and suffers a lot !!

But I loved the way he promised to himself that he'll make sure Aarti laughs again !! ๐Ÿ˜‰ And that's when our little one plays as cupid !! ๐Ÿ˜‰ But sadly, that little plan failed and Yash became superman in a sudden !! ๐Ÿ˜†

Then the hot game started !! โ˜บ๏ธ It was almost the prey and predator game re !! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜› I loved their challenges and arguments !! Both were trying hard to control themselves from exploring each other !! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ Uff ! Aarti finally made her way to the shopping mall with Yash and Ansh but no use.. she's not involved in the shopping and still fuming in anger !! ๐Ÿ˜›

Why did that Prashant came in between !! ?? Uff !! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿฅฑ ๐Ÿ˜ก

Cartoon movie.. ๐Ÿ˜† Adi almost ๐Ÿ˜† when he found out he wanted to go for a cartoon movie and that's when he doubled up his plan.. Ansh and Adi for cartoon movie and he and Aarti for another plan !! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Pineapple juice + chocolate moist + Shayari... And finally, the song !! Oh wow !! Great efforts from Yash !! Well done, Mukku !! โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Awwwnn.. Aarti couldn't help but to admire Yash silently !! This guy is slowly ruling her heart after years again !! โค๏ธ So the sharaat are accepted !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

As slowly the questions started to load and Yash calmly answering everything, his past really brought me into tears !! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Very heartbreaking moments !! He almost rejected his life during that suffering time and Aarti stood there speechless, crying as well !! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Loved the POV Shayari !! Well done !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ And some light moments between the sad one !! ๐Ÿ˜ณ And his story continued !! Somewhere pain and somewhere happy !! On top of that, I'm happy that Aarti had a golden chance to hear from Yash about his past !! Glad too that both get some time to spend with each other !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Done then !! Aarti forgave him and oh no.. he sang after so long time ?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

I wanna read more.. Very interesting bits !! Fabulous job, darling !! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ loved every part of it waiting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Ch9 a)

So aarti said wad she what not suppose to say to yash that she is waiting for him n then covered with ansh wah wah aartiji

So is yash too realized his mistake but cover with a lie perfect made for each other

N then these two stubborn egositic mukku please admits then to anger management classes

See my anshu also saw them in their worst state that's bad aarya

N then yash got his lil brain back but aarti is aarti wat to do now go run after n manaofy her

N who know aarti better than yash is completely can be felt in his mumbling

Yaar mukku jaldi kuch kar i want ansh to say yash papa chachhu does not sounds cool you know

Ansh n yash dup planning aartiji bacjh ke bach ke yeh Badmaash Company

Hmm good one aarti duo planned failed but yash hayee Romeo in her Juliet balcony how dreamy n then shhh issshhh mukku I wonder ab yash ko kaam nahi hai kya but ahem ahem not important as aarti

CORRECT but again in mid of all their nonk jhonk dil ki awaaz hotto pe aayi but yeh dimag dil se tez niklahotto pe aise baat mein daba ke chala aaya khul ajye

N then the battle of power or love wat shud i say begin but then y yash disaapear hmm to make aarti miss him or something again scary coming

P he is jerk man he is @!#!@$@#%

Hmm see that y i was scared yah is not doing mischief but was in really bad state but hold himself stronger for aarti n ansh OMG n then bold movie joke to horror one funny really aysh is so right enjoy this pal aarti you never know kal ho naa ho (but mind it dare you do something to yash okay)

Aarti denotes yash as her devil that's cute


"Moments are passing very rapidly Arti. Try to live it happily."

That reminds song zee le jaara

Aarya need no words their silence their each moment is so sync and imprint in each other heart aww it stole my heart

beautiful update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 11 years ago

Looking forward to part b mukku with aarya cute moments

DEAL๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ya no DEAL๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜‰


RES๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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