FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 87

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

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Reading it... But if the update really takes a long time, then it will take some time for me to re-edit this spot !! 😆 😳 Please bare with me and my busyness !! 😆 😳

SO happy to receive your comments as I was waiting for it so passionately...😳😳.But sorry for being late in giving you reply as Papa was in hospital and I was so much involved in family matters.Really sorry sweetu...😭😭😭

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The first part was a very enjoyable and nice ride !! ❤️ Good Job in writing those light moments between Yash-Aarti and Ansh !! 👏👏👏

I have tried to give you some light moments as from the very beginning I was giving update of Rona Dhona..😭😭 and happy that You have liked it and bear me alz..😃😃

The part begins with Yash asking about the purpose of Aarti following him to MU and that she shouldn't follow him ! Aarti changed the story and told him the other way round which made Yash mummed and goes off ! 😆 😉 Next morning.. hehe ! Poor guy.. thought of escaping but never.. his sweet devil is right on her place.. 😆 😳 😉 And oh.. the trip started after some family moments in the mandir !! 😃


Yash will try his level best to avoid Arti but no matter how much he tries he can never be successful as It's Arti..the JKR who will never leave her Yash...😉😉

Loved Yash and Ansh bond !! 😃 They are so very perfect together !! 😳

Yash and Ansh are just perfect for each other.They are destined to be father and son and it will be proven in future..😛

I loved the Thaba scene !! After so long time.. the sweet moments and fights of AarYa returned back !! Oh god.. Literally enjoyed their golden sweet moments !! Loved the shayari scene as well ! You are too good in this, Mukku !! 👏👏👏

Thaba scene is my fav also as I thought much about these scene and took much time to write it.I am happy that you liked it.Dont say much anything about my Shayeri as I feel shy...😳😳

Hmm.. good to see Aarti wondering why Yash is having such strange attitude with him and his words .. Oh god !! Oh, he ended up being sick which worried Aarti somehow !!

Arti is sensing that something is very wrong that Yash is hiding and soon she will try to find out about Yashu's past...😉😉

Part 2 was equally great !! 👏👏 More to emotional scenes !! 😭😭

Okay.. I sincerely loved the way you have written out the scenes of Yash-Aman-Arpita conversations over the line !! ⭐️

In the journey of JKT is first time when I took so much time to write a sequence and I am really very happy that you have liked it sis.😃😃

It was too emotional when it was all about Nihaan.. 😭😭😭 My heart was breaking and torn for Arpita who was grieving for the biggest lost in her life, her baby Nihaan !! 😭😭 Even Yash couldn't control his weeps and sobs !! 😭😭 Glad Aman was there to calm her down !! 😊

This scene made me cry like baby.I never thought that I would cry while writing a scene of my FF but it happened and when I found tears flowing from my eyes I became so surprised Ishu..😳😳

LOL.. Aarti waiting for Yash !! 😆 😛 And when he comes, Puff ! He just ignored her due to his tension and worries !! And that's when our Aarti couldn't tolerate his gesture anymore !! 😉

Yes Arti is so angry on Yash and her anger will bring something very amazing for you...😉😉

Nice precap !! Waiting for the next installment !! Keep up the fab job !! 👍🏼 Sorry for the late reply !! 😆 😳

DOnt say sorry sonu.You know I dont like it.Just be with me and plz plz plz let me know where I am doing mistake...😃😃
Love you so muchh sis...❤️🤗❤️

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Awesome write up loved the way how the story progresses thanks for your PM, very sorry for the late reply.

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

I came across this FF and i thought ok the title's kinda interesting why not try reading ...

Juz when i start i CAN'T STOP i juz want more ..

U hav some talent there buddy ...👍🏼 👏

Keep up the good work and I'm so looking forward for ur work ... 😃

Originally posted by: Folla

when you well update i am waiting the update

Originally posted by: princess121993

Muku..i m really sorry for being late...i know you will not like my apology as u were aware of my busy schedule...but still i want to say...

But i must say...what an update...an extra long update...Full of mixed emotions...love..hate..anger...care...disgust...everything perfectly shown by you...you r awesome 👏

Charmi I know it very well that how much busy time you are passing and for this reason I told you not to read my update as it is so long and will kill your valuable time .But you didn't listen to me and put effort to read and comment and I dont know what to say sis...I m just speechless ..just wanna say...🤗❤️🤗

Starting with the cute..nok jhok of yash and aarti..both are happy that they are going to mumbai together...still they both want to be angry on eachother...n show that they really dont care..😆😆thats so funny...both love eachother to the core...but still dont want to tell eachother...due to their own ego😡... yash is still admitting that he likes aarti...but aarti😡

Yahs and Arti are madly in love but both of them are trying hard to hide their real feelings before other...Yash has his own limitations and Arti is having her fake anger but koi baat nahi...soon something will happen that Arti will feel that she cant live without Yash...😳😳

i can understand what yash will be feeling...poor guy had been suffering because of others...so definitely he will feel...god doesnot exist...its not his mistake at all...its the situation...that is making him...feel this...wish i could just hug him n say..everything will alright...

Yash has suffered a lot in this six years and in the next update Arti will get to know about his sufferings.I just hope that soon fortune will be in favor of them ...😃😃

Oyee Hoyee...yash lost in aarti's beauty again...a very cute scene...😳

He is alz lost in Arti just wanna hide it coz of circumstances...😉😉

This bua toh na😡😡i will kill her,...seriously...glad..palak handled everything perfectly...i m loving palak more with ur every passing update...😃

Bua is alz boring .And I cant help it sis...😭😭.But I will try to give her pov...😉

The conversation between gayatri and aarti was cute😃

the dhabba scene is funny...well i must say..aarti knows every way to deal with yash..everytime..n yash has to lose...

Dhaba scene is my fav also and I am so much happy that you have liked it sonu...😳😳

i already told u tis...n i m tellin u again..i loved the poetry u wrote..its just awesome...its so creative...loved it loved it

Hi hi hi..me and my SHayeri...dont wanna comment in this...😆😆

OMG...arpitas part is so emotional😭omg..i dont think i would be able to comment...This is so heart braking..she lost her son nihaan...omg..but i m glad she has yash and aman for her to take care..

It was a very tough scene for me to write as the whole sequence was filled with pain and it even made me cry when I wrote those dialogues...😭😭.Finally feeling relax that everyone liked this emotional part...😊😊

Last part cute again...i loved aarti's excitement..but soon spoiled by khadoos yash😆

I just loved the way u showed aarti realizing that yash is hiding something from her...awesome..

wow..spoiler is awesome...waiting very very eagerly for it

Arti is angry with Yash and her anger will bring a great twist sis.It will come in the next part..😉😉

Update soon

Thanks a again fro reading my update and giving time to comment also sonu...🤗🤗.Next update will be soon.😳

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

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