FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 86

first thanks for looong updates 😊😊😊😊 2 updates are awesome

Originally posted by: roserosey

oh mukthi finally i m pouring out my feelings abt this update dear😳
firstly hatts off to u for this extra long update which was very very difficult but u did it 👏 that too with a lot of emotions we had little fun ,heart break, anger ,nok-jhok of aarya...a power packed update⭐️
First of I am sorry Rosy for being late to reply you.But my health prob is making my life hell....Really sorry janu..😭😭
You know I was so so tensed for my update's length. I just felt that I am torturing you all with so long updates.That's why decided to cut some sequence.But felt that it wont be right coz the essence will be missing then.Finally happy that you loved my extra long update dear.😳😳

hmm...aarya conversation i enjoyed it coz there is hidden love in that 😳😳 both care for each other and still madly love each other but both r so adamant to admit it to each other...atleast yash admits to himself but aarthi she is doing everything for his sake but still convincing herself that she hates him😭😭...
Yash and Arti are made for each other.They are destined to be each other.No matter what but they wont stop loving each other ever.But one is refusing this for her misunderstanding and another is for his helpless state.Yash can confess his love to himself coz for him there is no other option except loving Arti but things are totally opposite for her.Arti has all the reasons to hate Yash coz of her ignorance f reality but even after that she cant stop loving Yash...but she cant confess her love also...😭😭
yash lost trust over god coz he got over so many things in his life...everyone insulted him for being an orphan .he lost his love, he couldnt do anything to save arpithas baby he is in so much pain...i m feeling angry over myself i cant do anything to help him to bring out of his grief... he deserves a life full of love😳 ..
When there is darkness around and no hope of light then we expect that God will be there to help us...he will bring back the lost life of our life.Yash also did it...he also waited for God's support but unfortunately he didn't get that.So now he has stopped loving God..believing him but his anger and frustration bears that if he is angry with god then it coz he loves Him still .Just doesn't wanna accept it.But as Palak said that god is almighty and one day he will make those melt who are angry with him now...😳

oh my yash was mesmerized again by aarthis beauty...i m 🤢🤢 with their eyelock... so yash was finding reasons to go to mumbai alone but dont he know how stubborn aarthi was😉...

buaji😡 cant u keep quiet if u cant say anything good then pls dont dare to bad mouth aarthi😡😡 already she is going through hell...😭😭 living this hell life with no mistake of hers😭😭...
I am not able to write intense romantic scene Rosy.But I tried hard to show the glimpse of Arya romance and happy that you have loved it..😃😃
Dont wanna say anything for Bua ji as she doesn't worth it..😡😡
palak wassuch a sweet heart hope her wish get fulfilled soon...😊

gayathri-aarthi convo it shows how much she loves aarthi along with yash and what they means to her ⭐️⭐️ it touched me mukthi👏
I wrote that part in shortly but tried to provide the mes that a MIL can love her DIL as much as her son unconditionally.We just need to build up that base of love in relation.You are one of those who has mentioned about that scene and I am very happy for that...😳😳

dhaba scene wasreally awesome...oho our aarthi knows all ways to convince yash 😆😆 and white mustache teasing was hilarious😆😆😆 it felt so heartwarming mukthi trust me...i enjoyed it to the core even shed happy tears too...it seemed like a perfect family to me...⭐️

poetry part⭐️
i dont know what to say this completely suits yash s role in JKT AS he is doing thesame for his love😳😳 u made me speechless👏 i m glad that i m having a frnd who is a great shayar⭐️🤗🤗
In this long update Dhaba scene was one of my fav.In fact I have dreamt about that scene from long before.And finally all of you have accepted my imagination and I am so grateful to yu all for that.🤗🤗
You are right .Arti knows it very well how to make Yash listen to her.Yash can ignore his happiness but not Arti.SHe will try her best to secure the life of her life...her Yash..😳😳😳
OMG you are making me blush by praising my Shayeri...☺️.Dear trust me I am not a good poet.It's your love that making you love my works..😳😳😳

at this point of time i m feeling same like aarthi mukthi...why yash behaving like this???why did he became like this????this is coz he lost his love????or even after losing everything he cant make anyone happy?????or he is tired of living this life???? u already know that i had so many questions in my mind which i need to find answers through ur updates😊...

i already asked u regarding the step yash took now that is revenge on prasanth and u cleared my doubt too ...i m satisfied with his stepnow...
All your questions will be answered very sure dear.Justwait for sometime more.😉😉

and mukthi arpitha part was so heart breaking it would have very hard for her when she lost her nihaan even she couldnt look at his face...as a mother she felt like its better dying thousand times😭 but glad that yash and aman was with her but no body can bring her what she lost ...but atleast she had two pure souls with her who loves her the most...yash-arpitha-aman convo left me 🥺 heart broken i m feeling helpless ...
I wont say much about that scene Rosy.It was one of the tough scene for me to write and I took so much time to write that part but finally when started writing it I dont know when and how but I started crying.It happened to me for the first time.I couldn't believe that I was crying but then I felt for the first time that I wont mind if anyone likes this part or not but it will be my fav part as I felt that pain.😭😭😭

i love aarthi in JKT but she is silly sometimes ...cant she understand that yash couldnot make up for shopping there may be a strong reason behind..it...
Arti is not upset with Yash coz he didn't came to take her for shopping.She was upset coz yash lied to her.This part will be cleared in the next update dear.😉
but waiting for the precap which was making me anxious and i m pulling my hairs thinking aarthisreaction over therevelation

fantastic mindblowing fantabulous update👏
hatts off to u⭐️
Thanks a lot gain for this brief comment which I loved a lot ..in fact more than that..❤️🤗
regarding my doubts i read ur pm and i m convinced with ur reply and i m waiting for yash ke zindagi ke talaash😉
Yes Arti will search life for Yash and that Taalash will be done only by Arti...😳😳

Comments are in deep purple.😳

Originally posted by: Abie10

Foboulous lonngg update.👏👏 This yash na still confused on why Aarti agreed to go with him when she also hates being with him. Only because he dint want to go with her told he will go early and if she's not on time he's going..but Aarti gave him shock by getting there on time.😆

Loved their journey with Ansh together! Liked yash's shayari..and Aarti was super shock to hear him.😳😳

Oh that scene where Yash went to the grave was so touching with Arpita and crying for their child!😭

Now Aarti is mad cos Yash failed to take them for shopping..waiting for the next update and the bit romance you mentioned in precap. You going great with this story Mukti!👍🏼

Thanks a lot Abie dear for being with me in the journey of JKT.Your love and support means a lot to me dear.Thanks a lot...🤗
Yes Yash told that coz he didn't want to take Arti with him .But Arti is adamant to go with him in spite of his refusal coz after the distance of six years she is not ready to loose Yash again.But coz of the misunderstanding she cant confess his love for Yash.
Thanks for loving my SHayeri..😳
Arpita and Yash scene was indeed very painful and I felt that pain also..😭😭
Thanks once again for your lovely comments dear...🤗

Originally posted by: deepu59

first thanks for looong updates 😊 2 updates are awesome

Thanks a lot for loving my long update Deepu.Really thank you so much dear..🤗
NB: You were waiting for my update and I made your wait so long...really sorry for that yaar..😕😕

Originally posted by: MaRiYaOsHiNRonY

Mukku It's beautiful...

Thanks a lot mannu for bearing my torture ...😆😆

Hey mukku you know how iu am bit lazy n ad you said that i also need quality time to read n i did during my travelling but the n commenting is few words is not my cup of tea so here i am

First a big round of applause ofr your writing n maintain lil suspense

Honestly aarpita story it hot but never imagine it would be so cruel n then after revealing you created the suspense who was there behind second attempt

So yash family in a way decided that y shud they worry about aarya when they have themselves for each other thats really nice one

N as you haven't reverted by comment on ch6 now i got it mu bole toh Mumbai

Veeraj is sick man what shud i day about him n arpita telling more about her family n how arpta n aarti brought up really i just thanks almighty for blessing us with great family and awesome parents

The whole arpita turmoil n yash being their saviour n aman ishumble man but i am more curious what has happen which made yash not to marry n i don't know y my shak goes to p ( don't tell me here i can understand if you don't)

But you descriptive dialogues n strong emotion gave me goose bumps n feel like i am watching it arpita whole state of living in fear n losing the most prices possessions n yash for his love aarti n then above all a great human being

Aarti n yahs trip i am all excited nit wit tha fact that they will get close n will have aarya moments but call of a moment is aarti get to know truth sooner to be there with yahs ias his pillar of strength n fight as my JKR for her true love her yash

Writing something on this will not suffice what to say i mean love it who you are going with a flow of story i mean wow awesome works all i can te way your brain n tounge will be a tool for your profession n here your words all written has great impact in all of us as readers

*Reserved*

Awesome write up loved the way how the story progresses thanks for your PM, very sorry for the late reply.

I came across this FF and i thought ok the title's kinda interesting why not try reading ...

Originally posted by: RA17

Hey mukku you know how iu am bit lazy n ad you said that i also need quality time to read n i did during my travelling but the n commenting is few words is not my cup of tea so here i am

First a big round of applause ofr your writing n maintain lil suspense

Riya I know jaan how busy you are these days and I have no prob if you dont comment on my update coz I know your love and blessings will be with me alz and this is the bonding we share jaan.

Honestly aarpita story it hot but never imagine it would be so cruel n then after revealing you created the suspense who was there behind second attempt

Ya you are right that I have revealed Arpita's past but with another suspense but what to do jaanu..now a days I am loving this suspense a lot.Who is the another person who tried to kill Arpita...well the ans will come on your way after some time...😉😉

So yash family in a way decided that y shud they worry about aarya when they have themselves for each other thats really nice one

N as you haven't reverted by comment on ch6 now i got it mu bole toh Mumbai

Yes MU means Mumbai...😆😆😆.You know what when I had come to this forum even I faced the same prob.I thought MU means misunderstanding...😆😆😆

Veeraj is sick man what shud i day about him n arpita telling more about her family n how arpta n aarti brought up really i just thanks almighty for blessing us with great family and awesome parents

Veeraj is a jerk and no doubt in that .😡😡😡😡 But unfortunately these types of person and family also exist in our society.I just hope that one day persons like these will start thinking women as human not a soulless creature..😭😭

The whole arpita turmoil n yash being their saviour n aman ishumble man but i am more curious what has happen which made yash not to marry n i don't know y my shak goes to p ( don't tell me here i can understand if you don't)

This part was tough for me to write coz I was confuse whether readers will accept my pov or not but now I am much relieved jaanu.And about your doubt...lets see what happened...😉😉

But you descriptive dialogues n strong emotion gave me goose bumps n feel like i am watching it arpita whole state of living in fear n losing the most prices possessions n yash for his love aarti n then above all a great human being

Thanks for loving my works and being so involved with my characters Riya.It's your love and inspiration that has made me able to write.Otherwise I would stop long before.Thanks a lot again..🤗

Aarti n yahs trip i am all excited nit wit tha fact that they will get close n will have aarya moments but call of a moment is aarti get to know truth sooner to be there with yahs ias his pillar of strength n fight as my JKR for her true love her yash

Arya journey has already started Riya.I have send you PM also.When u get time read it..😳

Writing something on this will not suffice what to say i mean love it who you are going with a flow of story i mean wow awesome works all i can te way your brain n tounge will be a tool for your profession n here your words all written has great impact in all of us as readers

Well now I am blushing...😳😳Stop praising so much jaan...mujhe sharam aati hain...😆😆😆

Comments are in purple Jaanu...😉😉