FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136

Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: nan0102
excellent update,,love it..can't wait for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chitra I dont know why but I alz wait for your comments as I find it as a mirror of my writing..and I really mean it dear.This time I have updated after almost one month.And the reason was I wanted to think a lot before writing. There were so many things and I wont hesitate to say that I was not able to put them together.But finally tried to join the thread of my imagination and I am very very happy that you liked it.Feeling so relax dear...😳😳
I have made all wait for almost two months for introducing the MU trip so there was extreme pressure on me how I handle the track.And now feeling so relieved that you have liked it.
What to say about Shayeri...actually I had no intention to use shayeri in my FF.But by getting inspired with your comments I have decided to use it here.And the credit goes to you only dear.
I alz heard that people cry while writing but it never happened to me before.But while writing Arpita's dialogue I dont know why but I cried.Tears were rolling down my cheeks and I was amazed to see it.Then I felt that no matter what but it will be my fav part as I felt the emotion of the sequence fully.
Thanks lot again Chitra for being there with me in this journey which was difficult but your support has made it easy for me.Thanks a lot for that..❤️🤗

@ Bold ...Thanks for your wonderful comment.
...a writer's involvement speaks ...thru tears.
...Nusrat...believe me...u r a flawless writer...and a sweetest one at that...May Allah always be with you. This response is only to respond to your continues wonderful comment. Take care !

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi thank you for this long update it was worth the wait 👏👏 every word each scene was mind blowing 👍🏼 trust me dear if I did not like or enjoy your FF I will tell you 😃 one of the things I love about this FF is the bonds of relationship Yash/Aripita/Arman though they are not related by blood their ties of friendship and love for each other is so strong. Aarti and Yash still love each other and will always their love is timeless, Yash bond with Ansh there is a slowly but strong father son bond there. Yash with his parents although he is their adopted son their love for each other is great, Palak/Yash brother /sister love is wonderful if you are lucky to have it, Bua we may not like her but she love her nephew. Prashant he has no love for his family what made him so bad that he is Yash no1 enemy did I miss that part? This last update is emotional the lunch scene aarya cute fight about the food with ansh having to intervene, the lassi scene, the journey Yash and ansh convo 👍🏼 aarti and yash convo👍🏼 sorry I don't speak hindi cant comment on the poem 😳.The emotional convo between Yash/Arman/Aripita and her lost baby heart breaking. Yash and Aarti love each other eagerly waiting for the time when all explanation will be given and there will be understanding and acceptance by both. My final statement is I love this FF and the pace in which you are writing , it is well thought out and well written.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing update super iam so ecxcited for the next part to see how aarti well know the trurh and to see they're romance update soon don't make me wait the next part

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rachna1970
awesome update Mukti
me was so happy seeing extra long update but kab finish hua pata hi nahi chala ,,,so beautifully written dear so👏

Aarti clevrly hide her care n feeling for Yash saying she cant ignore Bauji's request , when Yash asked her to stay ,,lovely
Car scene Aarya were so quiet but love Cute Ansh n his small little questions ,,love the way Yash was answering them lovingly
Dhaba scene was mast
wow the way Arti ordered the food n Lassi for all three
She laughted seeing white mostache ,,,clean it so lovingly ,,wow,,loved it so much
Shayri ,,,SHUBHANALLAH,,SO LOVELY YAAR
Beautiful part dear

Thank you so much Rachna dear.I am so happy that you liked my Long Update..😳😳
Arti still loves Yash madly but the misunderstanding betwween Arya is stopping her to express his love for him..😭😭.SO she is trying her best to hide her feelings from Yash.😭😭
Thaba scene was also my fav.SO glad dear you also have liked it..yappeee
I tried to put my Shayeri in this part and frankly speaking was so tensed to do this yaar..😳😳.
And once again thank you so much for such lovely comments.🤗

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
Awesome update for the both part...cont soon

Thank you so much dear.😃😃

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rachna1970
Awesome update Mukti
Part 2
So emotional yaar ,,but loved it
Poor Arpita,,, feel so sorry for her she lost her first child n still could not get over it😭
Yash ,,Aarpita phone convo ,,so heartbreaking dear,,poor Aman 😭

Aarti shopping plan with Yash ,,,but spoiled
Glad that Aarti can senced that Yash is hiding something Big from her
Precape is so interesting Dear ,,wow,,wow wow
PLs update soon with some more Shayries ,,,If possible yaar

Rachna first of all I wanna thank you from the bottom of my heart for your both comments.In fact you are the only one who has given me two individual comments on the two parts in brief.Thank you so much yaar.🤗
Arpita-Aman and Yash scene is my fav also coz it was filled with painful emotion and while writing that part I had felt that emotion..that pain within me..😭😭
Arti has started to believe that there is something about Yash which she is unaware of.Lets see what she will do to know about Yash's past.😊
In the next part there will be two Shayeri.Hope you will like it also dear...😳😳😳
Thanks again for such lovely comments and plz like the two updates while reading.My one part has less like than the other..😭😭😭

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ns1970
WOW 2 updates this is awesome
Well just love the little part where they were eating and yash getting the milk on his upper lip aarti having to wipe off
now with that teaser i can't wait for the next update

I thought my readers would be bored with my looong update and that are two also.But here you are looking so happy 😃😃😃 and to see your happiness I am also feeling very happy dear.😃😃
That scene is my fav also...😳😳
Next update will be on next week.So stay in touch dear and thanks a lot for the lovely comments.🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: caller123

W e will be always with you dear Mukthi. Don't worry.
May God bless you Dear!🤗❤️

Thanks a lot sweetheart for this unconditional love which is priceless for me..🤗❤️🤗

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitsri65

Chitra I dont know why but I alz wait for your comments as I find it as a mirror of my writing..and I really mean it dear.This time I have updated after almost one month.And the reason was I wanted to think a lot before writing. There were so many things and I wont hesitate to say that I was not able to put them together.But finally tried to join the thread of my imagination and I am very very happy that you liked it.Feeling so relax dear...😳😳
I have made all wait for almost two months for introducing the MU trip so there was extreme pressure on me how I handle the track.And now feeling so relieved that you have liked it.
What to say about Shayeri...actually I had no intention to use shayeri in my FF.But by getting inspired with your comments I have decided to use it here.And the credit goes to you only dear.
I alz heard that people cry while writing but it never happened to me before.But while writing Arpita's dialogue I dont know why but I cried.Tears were rolling down my cheeks and I was amazed to see it.Then I felt that no matter what but it will be my fav part as I felt the emotion of the sequence fully.
Thanks lot again Chitra for being there with me in this journey which was difficult but your support has made it easy for me.Thanks a lot for that..❤️🤗

@ Bold ...Thanks for your wonderful comment.
...a writer's involvement speaks ...thru tears.
...Nusrat...believe me...u r a flawless writer...and a sweetest one at that...May Allah always be with you. This response is only to respond to your continues wonderful comment. Take care !

Some moments are enough to pass the whole life with smile and few friends are enough to make feel that we also have the shelter that our soul is searching for.Thanks a lot Chitra for making me feel that.God bless you dear.

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