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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update. Both parts are awesome. Veeraj is so disgusting. He called Yash to know where is Arpita.

The flashback is tragic. Poor Arpita gone to commit suicide because of the traditional and strict family values of her family, as she was pregnant. She knows that nobody cares for the women in the house, all the males dominate the women.

Yash is a pure heart person who not only saved Arpita from committing suicide but protect her dignity by arranging her marriage with Aman. He really helped her just like a big brother. Even though, his marriage rituals about to start in 2-3 hours, he supported Arpita and Aman.

At the dining table, Aarti patted Yash's back, it's the most lovely, touchy moment for Yash.

Yash told SP and G3 that he is going to MU. Loved the way SP tricked Yash to take Aarti with him. Even though, Yash doesn't wanted to take Aarti with him and hopes that Aarti will deny coming with him, but he got the shock of his life when Aarti becomes ready to go with Yash. Aarti feared that something wrong is going to happen in MU and she don't want Yash to risk his life.
Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous update. Both parts are awesome. Veeraj is so disgusting. He called Yash to know where is Arpita.
Thanks a lot for the lovely comment Shashi as I was waiting for it..😉.There is no doubt that Veeraj is a disgusting soul but soon there will be another one who will be more disgusting from him...😡😡

The flashback is tragic. Poor Arpita gone to commit suicide because of the traditional and strict family values of her family, as she was pregnant. She knows that nobody cares for the women in the house, all the males dominate the women.
Yes dear Arpita has suffered a lot fr hr family.In fact she has lost her first child for her own brother..😭😭.I have written these all coz there are still millions of women who are living in the mail dominated society and leading a very suffocating life...😭😭

Yash is a pure heart person who not only saved Arpita from committing suicide but protect her dignity by arranging her marriage with Aman. He really helped her just like a big brother. Even though, his marriage rituals about to start in 2-3 hours, he supported Arpita and Aman.
Yash is a man of golden heart.He not only saved Arpita but gave her the most precious gift of life..her Aman though he himself suffered the most for it.But he is fulfilling his responsibility as a brother till now...😳😳

At the dining table, Aarti patted Yash's back, it's the most lovely, touchy moment for Yash.
It was my fav part.In fact when I read this part I also feel that it was very needed to come out Arti's love and care for her Yash..😳

Yash told SP and G3 that he is going to MU. Loved the way SP tricked Yash to take Aarti with him. Even though, Yash doesn't wanted to take Aarti with him and hopes that Aarti will deny coming with him, but he got the shock of his life when Aarti becomes ready to go with Yash. Aarti feared that something wrong is going to happen in MU and she don't want Yash to risk his life.


SP will tr yhis level best to give Yash every happiness that he has snatched from him and in this his helping hand will be Palak.And Arti will do everything to save her life..her Yash..😳



Thanks again for the lovely comments.ANd my replies are in BLUE.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nusrat U r too honest like Nikki - love and respect your honesty and appreciation - felt bad for the delay but I really got distracted many times while reading your FF - phone calls nd customers to attend to - and I ended up reading half of Part 1 thrice to get the readers emotion back on track - infact all these rereading was done b4 ur PM dear. Thanks for making me special - would like to add that I don't want to ruin u by praise but save u by criticism - i.e if I happen to come across in future.

Hope Nusrat you take your shayari seriously and work on it too - U r fab there...and sweetest too. Take care and as usual am waiting...4 the update.
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
😲 🤣 !! Someone is making me IMPOSSIBLE to comment ! 😆 LOL Mukku... This is so lengthy yet awesome updates from you !! 👏👏👏 To be honest, you are too good in reflecting the emotions and feelings of the characters into readers' eyes !! 👍🏼


----- PART 1 ------

I so love the idea of letting AarYa to be together to MU... Isshh ! The idea getting the supports right from SP and Gayu ! 😉 Oh my... Action scenes ! Too tensed.. too good ! 👏👏 Just hate Veeraj... 😡😡 Don't have any word for a beast like him.. 🥱 Ahzz... The punches ! 😆 😉
The flashback.. Oh my ! This girl nearly kills herself.. 😲 Happy that Yash madly stopped her from doing such crazy things... And that's when everything revealed.. The story of her and Aman and she being preggy...

I don't like the old trust.. You know sometimes it's a bakwaas ! 🥱 Pity Damini bua ji.. And being forced is something unacceptable ! The trust that whoever didn't care for the family reputation doesn't deserve a good life.. 😲 🥱 !!??

Aman is a good boy.. He works hard and achieved success in his life ! But.. Oh my.. Their love for each other is really pure one ! ❤️ Their reunion was made by our very own Love Guru.. Yay ! 😉 Awwnn.. even marriage was arranged ! Yashu is always the best ! 😳 So love the emotional talks.. Arpita didn't deserve a bhai like Veeraj... 😡





------- PART 2 ---------


Dining scene.. 😃 😳 😉... Finally, Yash turned up after everyone started to worry about him.. It's just too cute to see Yash and Ansh ! 😊 Uffo.. The coughing scene made me remember PV's coughing scene.. 😆 😳 Lovely moments ! ❤️

Oh god.. 😆 SP trying to convince Yash to take her along to MU ! 😉 😳... Ansh will be joining as well ?? 😳 😆 (You know why I react like that )

OMG.. This gonna be lots of fun ! 😳 I so love Yash and Aarti's POV ! Great plans I guess.. 👏👏


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Superb Going Mukku Darling.. 👏👏👏 Loving the flows of the story ! ⭐️ 👍🏼 Looking forward for the next... 😉


Sorry for the late reply although you'll say No Sorry from me.. 😆 😳 Please.. I know I'm too late ! 😳 Keep up the good job ! 🤗 Love ya ! ❤️
Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505


Plz Shalini dear dont say sorry.I know that life is so busy and sometimes it's so tough to run with it.In fact see Im also late to give you reply dear...😳😳
Wow I am so so so glad that you have read all the chapters together.Really feeling amazing to think that you have liked my work...😃😃😃
Yes dear .You can kill them and I have a request to you.Plz take me with yourself in this killing mission...😆😆..Dont worry dear.They will suffer much for their deed and that's a promise.😳
I will try to update soon janu..❤️🤗

@bold ya I read it one go and the credits goes to u. All the chapters are so captivating that I cant stop reading them.

@red
Ok lets do it 😎😈

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

@bold ya I read it one go and the credits goes to u. All the chapters are so captivating that I cant stop reading them.

@red
Ok lets do it 😎😈

If you two go on a killing spree here, then who'll kill Ammaji in MTB? 😡

I've already killed python, 😈. But his side-kick is still there 😭



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505


Thanks again for the lovely comments.ANd my replies are in BLUE.🤗



Hi! Thanks for the reply. You said about another person. Yeah, I forgot to ask about that, it slipped from my mind that whom Yash is calling and giving instructions. I guess it was Prashant, who turned the tables for Yash.
Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Nusrat U r too honest like Nikki - love and respect your honesty and appreciation - felt bad for the delay but I really got distracted many times while reading your FF - phone calls nd customers to attend to - and I ended up reading half of Part 1 thrice to get the readers emotion back on track - infact all these rereading was done b4 ur PM dear. Thanks for making me special - would like to add that I don't want to ruin u by praise but save u by criticism - i.e if I happen to come across in future.

Hope Nusrat you take your shayari seriously and work on it too - U r fab there...and sweetest too. Take care and as usual am waiting...4 the update.
🤗


Thanks a lot Citra for the complement dear.Honesty is the only thing that I alz wanted to cherish in my life and still trying to do it everyday.Dont know how much successful I am but I am keep trying to be honest.
I am so touched that you have tried this much to read my FF .In fact it's the greatest pleasure that I m feeling now coz it has given me the strength to write something better for my friends like you.
May be it sounds strange but I will be waiting for your criticism coz I know and believe it will be the best gift for me that I can have a small writer and I mean it dear.
Ha ha ha ..my shayari...actually it depends on my mood dear.When I feel very happy or very sad I write shayari...now u can imagine what a unique mad I am...😉😉
Hope this love and support will alz be with me no matter in which form...❤️🤗
Edited by nusratjahan505 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

@bold ya I read it one go and the credits goes to u. All the chapters are so captivating that I cant stop reading them.

@red
Ok lets do it 😎😈


I am so touched Shalini..really feeling so so happy and special dear...🤗❤️
So Prashant..Veeraj and Dubeys...aab tum logo ka kya hoga...😈😈😈😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

If you two go on a killing spree here, then who'll kill Ammaji in MTB? 😡

I've already killed python, 😈. But his side-kick is still there 😭




Nikki dont worry there should be no limit in doing MAHAN TASKS...😉😉😉
I am ready to give Amma ji a horrible death..mere bhagwaan ki kasam...😆😆

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