FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 72

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Great update Mukti 👏

Palak ,SP N G3 convo was so nice,,,loved the way Palak convinced G3 N SP about Aarya going MU together,,so cute she is😊

Viraj is really a Beast😡😡 ,,,how can a person say all these things for his own sis yaar,,,he knows all the truth about Yash n Arpita😡,,oh God ,still keep quiet because he hated Yash ,,,😡

Who is after Arpita then if not Viraj ,,,Suspence,,, baba

Whom does Yash talked on Phone ,,Prashant ❓

Last part was very emotional ,,,

So many thing are clear now ,,loved the part one

Originally posted by: rachna1970

wow ,,,lovely update Mukti 👏

Loved the part where SP ,,G3 n everyone on Dining table were worried for Yash,,Aarti concern for Yash👏 She really love him so much❤️ ,,,she patted him n offered him water ,,their hand touching part ,,wow ,,lovely❤️❤️

,,it was small scene but i loved it,,❤️,everyone outthere also noticed it 😉

Finally Aarya going to MU ,,,Eagerly waiting for the next part yaar,,

Yash was surprised when Aarti was ready to go with him ,,,wow

Dying for the next part jaanu ,,pls pls update soon

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

superb update...

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Sorry Mukti for commenting late.

Actually I was not in the mood to read it at that time, as you had mentioned that it'll be a very emotional update 😭. And it was, especially the flashback scene 😭. But it's so beautifully written 👏

In fact both the parts are so beautifully written 👏.

Palak in ZKT is as much a cutie pie as Palak in MTB. Now I can imagine how MTB's Palak will be when she grows up 😳

Veeraj is I believe Prashant's long lost twin brother 😡 the less we talk about these spineless creatures the better 😡 😡

And people like Dubey 😡

Poor Bua, my heart broke reading about her 😭.

But love the whole Aman-Arpita wedding scene 👏

And the second part...

Aarti is in such a denial, she's so in love with Yash, any blind fool can see it 😡 . Thank God Bauji made that excuse to send them to Mumbai, along with Anshu

Loved the whole dinner scene and the back patting scene 😉

Ok now I'm waiting for the Mumbai trip.

Awesome updates Mukti 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: shalini28

Sorry for the late reply Mukti.😳

Read all the chapters in one go. Really loved it so much.

Feeling so bad for Yash and Aarti😭, he has to bear so much without any fault😭

I have a question. 😉 Can I kill veeraj, prashanth,buaji together???😡(specially veeraj)😡

How could someone say these things about his sisters😡??? Due to him , both the sisters are suffering so much😡.

And what happened to Yash???😭

Now Yash, Aarti and Ansh are going to Mumbai🥳

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Plzzz update jaldi jaldi😳

Originally posted by: princess121993

wow...what an update mukti👏
This is first time when I have received such long update from you sis and I am felling like to dance in joy...sachchi...😳😳😆

well i dont want to talk abt ur special note...we every day have talked abt it on FB...so lets just get over with it

Coming to ur first update...

Mukti...i just want to hug palak...she is so cute...so adorable...love her

i just love the way..she explains situation of yash and aarti their awkwardness...yet their feelings to SP and Gayatri..hats of to her..n hats off to u for giving us a smart palak here...

Yes sis palak is playing the role of angel in Arya life and soon she will make Arti realize about her love for Yash also...😳😳

i am so hating this viraj...freaking M***N...how can someone be so pathetic that he even badmouths about his own sis...omg..feel so bad for arpita...this viraj kneww everything about yash and arpita...omg..only to take revenge he spoiled both of his sisters life...god...wish he dies soon..omg..prashant also helped him...urghhh...hate him

Hate that KAMINA more than anything else...😡

flaskback scene was heartbreaking and hearttouching for me

the way u showed yash handling the situation awesome awesome...the wedding scene...the rakhi scene...so toucht.y...a tight huggy my dear sis...i loved this part...i almost had tears

I have got my sis' sweet hug and they are my fav scene also sonu coz it took so muchtime for me to write them...😳😳

hating this dubeys to the core

second part is also lovely dear

the tenshion filled atmosphere...nicely showen by u mukti...(now if u come to me and say that u r not a good writer...i m sure to sjow u my JKR avatar...remember that ok)

Hi hi hi...I am afraid of you sonu...😆😆😆.
Ok baba wont tell it again..happy...😉😉

yash left with gun..omg...everyone is bound to feel tensed

just loved the way aarti tried to track him down n finally figured out he was in trouble

the love of aarti which she doesnot want to show...but still it is noticiable...she is not able to hide it...its so cute...the way she pats his back when he coughs...it was like awww to me

You know something sis while writing that scen I actually visualized it first and then have written.😳😳 and even I like it also ..😉😉

finally...they are going to mumbai and only with ansh...n now he wil play the role of the cupid to bring them closer...awesome...

lovely update muku...keep rocking dear...i really want to read more..do update soon sweetyy
Thank you so much my sweet sis for this lovely comments...love you sonu...❤️🤗❤️

Originally posted by: srilanka123

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Originally posted by: roserosey

mukthi just now i read ur reply to my comment dear
i m very much glad with ur hearty reply re🤗🤗

me waiting for MU trip

love u too dear i think more than u love me😉🤗❤️

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

Mukku, thank u so so much for ur extra long update👏👏🤗

what to say dear...i have no words...this is another big emotinal update with two parts😭😭😭...

Thank you so much Sai for liking my extra update.Actually since I was so late giving updates this time so first decided to give the long update but then it turned into an extra long that I decided to divide it into two parts.But initially was very tensed whether everyone will liked it or not but now just so relaxed...😳😳

i can't imagine the situation of yash😭😭...poor yash , what all he's going through😭😭..

veeraj😡😡😡...i would be happy if he rot in hell😡😡...he came to know that arpita is alive😲😲...what a person he is...wants to kill his own sis😡😡...

Let not talk about that Kaminas yaar coz they dont worth it but unfortunately there are so many beasts in human shape roaming in the society...😡😡

palak , sp, n g3 are playing a key role in bringing aarya together again...i wish they succeed in it👍🏼..

why aman is so dumb😡...can't he protect his love ...anyways i'm happy that yash saved arpita at the right time n doing kanyadaan...but sad becoz it costed his haapiness n love😭😭😭...

Aman didn't get any chance to protect his love..his Arpita coz he didn't know about her pregnancy and about her attempt to suicide.But later he did much for Arpita.You will come t oknow about it later..😉😉

he's truely a best bro n son👏👏...

aarti can't help loving him...though she named it as hate😳❤️...glad that she agreed to sp's request 😃...n now hoping that this MU trip will bring them closer...

MU trip will crashed the barrier between Arya and they will come to very close dear...😉😉

thank u so much for giving us a very different story🤗
Thank you so much sweetheart for liking my story ...❤️🤗

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Nusrat - appreciate your sincere efforts for updating 2 parts and both parts gave away a lot of untold truth which u have dealt with the reality - 'deciding one's future and family prestige' - we may not have come across but yes there are still out there who play with the lives of one's life. The conversation said it ALL.

Arti's true feelings slowly coming out in action - and it is a matter of time for the words to take over action. Am waiting nd am sure you will deal this very well...waiting for the suspense to come out.. the third man...and we all know...who it can be...let me wait ...😉

Nusrat - am not going into detailing as you will get many many feedback on characters u have dealt with but just would like to say that - conflicts are not the easiest to do...it must be realistic whether it comes to breaking family, lovers, bro-sis, friends...you have handled it well and with the conversation part too. Fab dear !. Waiting for your next...take care !