Cold, Tears...Blood- An Aarya OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS IS VERY DEPRESSING...do not read if you are already depressed otherwise I will only collect chappals!

COLD, TEARS.....BLOOD

"AARTI!!!!!!!!"

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They will never understand...never! She'll never speak again...so what? She'll never laugh again... so what? She'll never...breathe again...so what? They want to burn her! Her skin was not meant to be touched by flames, only by him! Her body cannot be out through that! Do they have any idea how much pain it will cause her! Only he could understand that...but only he couldn't understand she was gone...forever!


He sat up in the abandoned room of a lone house in the distance...far away from civilization...far away from everyone! He had goose bumps due to the coldness of the room but he could bear any pain for her! Once she didn't have to...


Her skin was ice cold, eyes shut, soul gone! He walked up to her and looked at her...with tears that were heart breaking...eyes that spoke out his heart...was she really dead? NOOO, she wasn't...she could never have left him...NEVER...could she? If so, he would never burn her, she would stay there with him, always! If he stayed...


An ear piercing scream...


Red colour from his veins filled her forehead to complete her final rites...


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If you disobeyed my warning...I told you!


Edited by .KillTheBitch. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Carissa, this is BEAUTIFUL! I love the way you wrote it! It gave me the chills while reading it. I honestly don't know how to express how much I loved it because... well it's that amazing! Very, very well written! I love the symbolic meaning with the red colour on her forehead. I could feel the pain Yash must have been hurting from as I read this! Well done!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Very Sad OS Please Do Conti.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u and ur depressing stories
saf24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superbly written piece. Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!! this is a beautiful piece!
drmhp thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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carissa this was amazingly written.
I really like ur writeup .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written👏👏👏liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Even it is sad OS i loved it so much dear...
yash without arthi can never be thought of.. so ur OS has a emotional impression in me.
thank u carissa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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emotional os...loved it...
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