Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 92

Naina is the person who will compell Aarti to give a name to her feelings. I think you followed a similar pattern in Sparsh.

I'm catching up a bit late! but I love it! I love how well sketched the characters are! Keep up the great work Indu!

wow⭐️⭐️⭐️...lovely update indu...loved very very❤️ very much...

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I have read the updates last week, but have no words left to say at that time coz my heart was literally crying.

You know why sometimes am hesitant to read ur updates while am at the office, coz I can't fully express my emotions. It's always controlled! 😆

Don't know how many times I got up on my chair, just to hold back the tears on my eyes. I had so much adventures while reading the story, haha. Aarti's character really hit me!
Can u imagine a dept. head cried because of an FF? I don't know what face I will show to them once they saw me, lol!

Nwei, back to the update, can I just hug Yash for making my Aarti feel how important she is?
That condition he gave to her has a "never say never" answer . Though she was a bit hesitant because of her belief that she's a curse, Yash still let Aarti understand it and make her realize how worthy she is with him and Payal..

So, a new entrant just came in, Naina? Oh, she became close to Payal so easily and happens to be Yash teenage friend. The funny thing is, Aarti misunderstood her relationship to Yash. She taught this girl was the one Yash wants to be with. Little she didn't know, she was the one whom Yash was talking about.

I really feel for Aarti when suddenly she felt the emptiness in her when Yash and Payal was not around. I want to join her in that room, hug her and tell her that " hey dear, why don't you open ur heart and read what's inside. u're in love with Yash, don't u know it?!"

Btw Indu, did I ever tell you how much I love the quotes and the poem you put and wrote in every chapter? And the poem in Aarti's journal, are you the one who compose it, for real?
I always love reading it, heart touching!

Oh, how I wish my man would be like uncle Chris, he's so sweet! He's such a darling!
No wonder Aunt Anna was still in love with him even they're already old...
I too want to grow old that way, like them! lol 😆

And the last part, the bonfire scene. Oh, Yash day will never be complete without seeing and talking to Aarti. He can sense that Aarti was kinda hurt whenever Naina was with him. And he felt guilty with it. Well, Naina seems to be the one who will make Yash and Payal more closer to Aarti, isn't she? Wonder what she's up with Yash!

Am so glad, that burning incident in Payal's drawing book, happen at this early. At least it gave Aarti the idea not to easily trust this Naina for them. And soon she will realize her importance to both Yash and Payal. And no one can occupy the space that was emptied to them. No one else but she.
And it was good, coz it also triggers her to let out the pain that she had long time ago.
I guess she was seeing her self to Payal. And she don't want to repeat the past to her.

Am glad Yash came to know about the paintings thru naanimaasi...

Waiting now for the next update..

Take Care always! 😳

Hi Indu,

Really lovely update . Part 24 was awesome and I cannot express my appreciation as I am not good at words. In simple, I can only tell you that , all parts 1 to 24 were read with great interest and appreciating your outstanding writing skills every second while reading. You are really a great poet and a writer Indu, every word you write has a deep and lovely meaning and the poems were extremely superb and heart touching. ... tears do come while reading. You story is beautifully woven with mixer of all different feelings i.e. ignorance, torture, pain, love (various kinds ) thrill, suspense, friendship and one can find everything in this story. Its really worth publishing a Novel Indu and I am sure full world will appreciate and enjoy reading it.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving such a lovely, interesting & heart touching FF sacrificing our valuable time and wish you all the best to get more strength and imagination to complete this story with beautiful ending to the entire satisfaction of the readers.

Take care and enjoy your short vacation which you really need.
Luv
Meena

Beautiful Indu love this part the sunrise the beautiful moments with yash and aarti not forgetting uncle and his romancing aunty.Finally loving how aarti motherly instincts towards payal's drawingswere.
ENJOY YOUR VACATION WAITING ON NEXT UPDATE BY WEDNESDAY

wow wow indu dear i want to hug u

Hey Indu Di

How r you.. hope you are having rocking time

Ch13

Wow di such a beautiful line

you begin to free-fall toward your destiny of a grand reunion with your original self

kya bat hai yash n NM ( naanimassi ) both together sameer beta you are gone

omg nm she is so cute even while datofying n horrifying sameer i love her n then yash expressions well with aarti even small pain be it of strong hold on her wrist is not gone unnoticed by him in between chaos

n then hero made a entry hmmm nm also seems impressed yahs has his own charm kyun di

"My God, Aarti'you have a mafia family." Di even i too love er family especially her future hubby yashji J

Oh thats really amazing ho waarti spekas for herself which i never thot she will rasie ever not abhi atleast b4 yash enters her life fully but i guess he had

A lady really has to be strng to be all by herself n love the way nm stands for her n for her child

Kya baat hai the instant yash has become friendly n he is a hero he become all rounder like srk repars anything in my name is khan n here our yash not only repaied house but also aarti n her bitter past scars which had left her soul ...

Leave it coming to nm n yash they are such gr8 gang love this bf n gf dear

Really when paper scattered i wish yash foundaarti wriotings but then i guess it has time right

So moving how cute n innocent made me remind aarya sr wala scene

So yash use lemon n aarti strawberries.. fruity aarya

My heart again gone for aarti after being on light mode the way she felt after knowing yash n payal n glad tht she has a sigh of relief after knwing yash side

I just could not understand aarti n yash indeoth understanding as they fell not just for each other but also the surroundings i guess tht comes with maturity n my mom wonder wen will i become mature socho

Aarti n yash under same roof kindoff wow n the wya he looked at aarti is only to knw what she feel then only he wants to nods

"You will find her'when the time is right. She is waiting for you." He closed his eyes and felt this peace surge through him in a long, long time

Breathtaking words i wish i too re read it so many times that i can recall these beautiful words anyday anytime

I don't know where this ride is taking me,
I don't know when to let go.

All I know is I'm in it for the journey,
To give me more and more.

I chase for dreams I don't know what for,
I try to be something I don't even know.

I look for things I cannot find,
I believe more in my heart than my mind.

I pray for the night to find my sun,
I want to fly before I run.

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Thanks again for this beautiful update not much to say yet write a one page gathe sorry for going back n recall n flow with my due delays

Have skimmed ch14 as cant wait but then will re read form y lamba wla acomment.. till then cya di

Tc

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ps pg 11 update n comment on pg124 wats shud i say😳

ae lo now it is pg125😆😆