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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Indu 👏

You have described it so beautifully how Arati don't know what is that she feels for Yash. She wants Yash and Payal to be happy but can't see them happy with someone else. Somewhere she wants to a part in that incomplete family and make it complete but couldn't think of it as she considers herself as a curse. Also she is still not aware that what she feel for Yahs is love and that was why she felt hurt when Yash told that he has some one in his heart.

Arati accepted so fast that Naina could be that girl in Yash's life and the reason could be some where she wants to run away from those emotions and feelings Yash evoke in her just by one look. But I am really glad that unknowingly even Naina became the reason for the burning of the drawing book which gave not only Arati a chance to let out her pain but will make her understand slowly that none other than her could be the mother of Payal and if she wants to see Yash and Payal happy, she will have to let go of her insecurities and pain and embrace the life for all 3 of them.



Edited by jikky_84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww..poor aarti😭..her family managed to damage her severly😡..but now yash will be there for her😊..waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AHHH.. was so excited to see you had updated...
awesome part .. almost in tears reading the end..
i am so glad that you didnt stretch out this naina business too much.. i see now that arti will not approve of naina.. after this incident.. because her angel was hurt and upset..
i loved her outburst.. to naina..
really really well written.. love the sunrise scene.. before naina came.. hope you continue soon and hope yash can confess soon.. to arti how much he loves her and how much him and payal need her..
i hope you update again soon.. will be eagerly waiting..


Have you written any other fanfics? On who? Where can I find?

Edited by princess4120 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
indu..there are no words to describe ur writing skills👏

fictional characters in ur story are ruling my heart now
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello😛,

this was awesome as always indu di❤️

i loved it so much, love hw aarti voiced out her anger on naina

ohh aarti is misuderstanding yash here , he does nt love naina bt u, focus aarti 😉

chris uncle 😆, he is still romancing, he never gets old.

can't wait to see yash telling aarti about his past 😳 .

lovely poem di

😳

please accept this chot gift from me, am bad at poetry, giving it a try

your words touched my heart,⭐️

your magnificient pen voice out your thought,👍🏼

You effectively and efficiently express what's on your mind😳,
And let your voice be heard when you write😉,
you have a heart of a writer who deliverys it to the reader❤️,
Your touching words make me cry at times(aarti's case)😳
But then on happy notes you make me smile😃
may d magic of your story continue to flow😊
continue soon dear and thanx for then PM
Edited by billieberry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this update is loaded with unlimited ride on roller coaster of feelings, be it love, security, jealousy, possessiveness, sadness, mischief...everything. brilliant update indeed. thanks so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh Indu, another masterpiece! Aarti's family have damaged her in every way. What she couldn't do for herself is what she did for payal. Telling Naina straight away it's not a mere book as she thought. Oh I just wanna hug her.

Hope Aarti soon come to terms that she loves yash.

Thanks for another wonderful undate.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
poor aarti😭
only yash can help her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved...who knew one could feel this emotional for a fictional character?
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the response to the burning drawings but Yash read her current journal without any qualms? That's not the same as reading the one she'd lost from my perspective.

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Edited by Kittya_Cullen - 12 years ago

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