Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133)

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina
Fantastic update Indu!

I love naanimasi. She's an adorable and strong woman.

And I'm so excited to see what happens in the next chapter! Prashant had that punch coming 😆.

Thanks Nina.

Naanimaasi has lived a lonely life for long and has lot of pride and self-respect in her. In Aarti, she has found a daughter whom she has to protect and give the best the life has to offer.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Surish

Surish...that's cool.

Thanks.😃

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr
Great update...please update soon...Prashant deserved the punch 😆...hope Yash will give the punch to P...

Thank you.

Yup, Prashant had it coming.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: freya123
grt part

Thanks Freya.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha
Beautiful update dear👏 👏 👏..Loved it 😳
loved the way Aarti enjoyed the nature with the birds and squirrels😛..Beautifully described👍🏼..
Aarya moment is so lovely😳...Yash was totally lost with mountain fairy😉
Applause to Naanimassi👏 ..She is strong lady able to manage all very well⭐️
Loved the bonding between Anna and chris with Aarti ⭐️
grr.Prashant😡 😡is such a creep man.He deserve that punch😆😆
Eagerly waiting for next part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊

Radha...thanks a ton my friend.

I appreciate the sweet words of support. They get me going. I love how you interject each event with just the right emo...😊

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doratalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

And... Indu finally gets to her forte- unraveling the love story between her Yash and her Aarti! I loved every word.

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rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

ugh ugh prashant!! i know i should comment first on the wonderful bonding of yash with naanimaasi, which i'm loving🤗but...prashant just leaves a bad taste 😡 how long will you keep my future wife away BHABHI...bhabhi's grandniece 🤢 sick!

so now that i'm done with that can i just say i adore yash-naanmaasi bonding 😃--so happy we'll see them together in futue too. and while we prob won't see much of them in the future, i'm guessing, a special mention for chris and aarti 😆 ...and aarti lets him hug her👍🏼

oh i was so hoping aarti would accidentally leave her journal behind and yash finding it...but that's rushing things no?😳

...and that punch 😃yay!! though i'm usually a non-violent person, i was so happy for that well-deserved punch👏

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alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Chapter 13:

Sorry for the late comment Indu!! Real life had to take precedence over reel life:(. But had to comment on this amazing chapter.

I loved Yash and Naanimaasi's interactions. They are so cute together. Naanimaasi was hilarious. She has so much spunk for a cute little old lady. I adore her. Omg, in retrospect its so expected that naanimaasi would have invited yash to stay and yet... I'm still surprised and blown away!! Yash's slow fall for Aarti is so beautiful to read. It pulls you slowly in and makes to believe in star-crossed, inevitable love:).

I love this story so much! Every chapter is a happy treat and keeps you guessing and thats the best kind of surprise:)

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Sigh...ok, tripti holo.

Don't know precisely what or why - but this one update was very very satisfying Indu. I have this broad smile on my face at the moment 😊. Thank you!