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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: gcluv
Yash's mountain fairy ...☺️...
Love arati feel of comfort with Yash
Prashant just disgusting
nanimashi .. very strong lady
awesome update
waiting for next

Aditi...Yup, at that moment Payal's mountain fairy became Yash's mountain fairy.😳

Thank you.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: pvejani
lovely update
beautifully wtritten👏👏👏.
loved and enjoyed reading.
thanx for update and pm.continue soon.

Thank you.😳 🤗

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Dishaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Indu di..first of all sorry for the late response😒

And about the update...shall I need to response now😃

Because Indu di am lacking of my words right now😆

Ur update is always something that I need to think for the words before comment.😉

What lovely lines Indu di even to explain the tiny bit of hair "...her long hair dance.. "..

still got more but wont enough space to copy paste all the lines😛

U are writing so detailly di 😉

and it makes me to feel that I was travelling along this journey with Yash and Aarti👏

Indu di..i so wished really to meet u one day if its possible to see who is this lady Indu that can write something so simply just like an epic of addiction😊

Thank u so much Indu di for this🤗

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alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Chapter 14: An EXTRA long comment cos I'm late hehe:)

Another beautiful update Indu:). I felt so sorry for naanimaasi in this chapter. I'm actually surprised that she trusted Yash enough to invite him to stay with them after her experiences with Prashant. Hmm, Yash's question to the lawyer makes me wonder if "someone" is going to buy the property and be a white knight on a horse hehe. Loved the scene with "mountain fair" surrounded by the animals. Was so sweet! Reminded me exactly of the scene from snow white (animated version that is) where the sweetness of the character is reflected in the beauty of the scene:). Good for Yash!!! I'm so happy he punched Prashant. I want to slap Prashant that... that.. bottom feeding disgusting excuse for a human. Actually, its kind of funny and I feel kinda sorry for Yash, every time he turns around he's tripping on Aarti's suitors lol.

You write so beautifully Indu. I feel privileged to be able to read this poignantly beautiful love story. I know Yash is going to hurt Aarti (emotionally) in the future, its almost inevitable at this point. But love is like that, pain and forgivess make love stronger and we only really hurt and are hurt by the people who we love us and who love us. And when he does hurt her, I'm going to go back and read the first two chapters and remember it was all worth it in the end:)

PS, every single time I hear O Saiyaan from Agneepath, I think of Aarti and her most probably fearful (becos she's never known happiness), reluctant and apprehensive love for Yash. These two stanza's remind me the most of her... and thats the magic of your story:)

Meri adhoori kahani
lo daastaan ban gayi
o tune chhua aaj aise
main kya se kya ban gayi

My incomplete story,
has finally become a (complete) story..
You touched me today such that
I became all different..

sehme hue sapne mere haule haule angdaiyaan le rahe,
thehre hue lamhe mere nayi nayi gehraiyaan le rahe,
zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane..
karwat lene lage hain armaan phir bhi
hai aankh nam kyun na jaane
o saiyyan

My afraid dreams are slowly stretching..
my stopped moments are taking new depths..
my life is wearing a smile,
and I don't know why it's showing so much compassion..
my wishes have started twisting n turning but-
don't know why, my eyes are still wet..
O my love..

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drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

di loved last two parts 😊

& no need to say that the way u write always leave me speechless 👏

i want to write so much but no long comments this time as i m running out of time

waiting for the next part 😃

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: kdsubs
Sigh...ok, tripti holo.

Don't know precisely what or why - but this one update was very very satisfying Indu. I have this broad smile on my face at the moment 😊. Thank you!

Shotti? Jaak...mone ektu shanti pelam. But it's only the beginning...The unfoldings from both sides have to be natural and not forced...that's the challenge. I really want that smile to broaden as the time goes...even though with truth being hidden, things are bound to shake up a bit.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev
Indu di..first of all sorry for the late response😒
And about the update...shall I need to response now😃
Because Indu di am lacking of my words right now😆
Ur update is always something that I need to think for the words before comment.😉
What lovely lines Indu di even to explain the tiny bit of hair "...her long hair dance.. "..
still got more but wont enough space to copy paste all the lines😛
U are writing so detailly di 😉
and it makes me to feel that I was travelling along this journey with Yash and Aarti👏

Indu di..i so wished really to meet u one day if its possible to see who is this lady Indu that can write something so simply just like an epic of addiction😊
Thank u so much Indu di for this🤗

No apologies needed Disha...I totally understand.🤗

I am so glad that I could make you visualize what was happening in the story. That compliment leaves me very satisfied. Thank you so much.
Yash and Aarti are developing these feelings for the first time...as such it is natural they notice every little thing about the other..

Aww...you meet me here in the forum daily Disha. I don't think I am any different from what you can make out. I am a simple person...a mother of two wonderful children, a wife to a very supporting husband, and an editor in a company...a job I love because it includes my passion of reading and writing. That's about it.😳

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir
wow amazing sweet

Thanks Kinny.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR
di loved last two parts 😊
& no need to say that the way u write always leave me speechless 👏

i want to write so much but no long comments this time as i m running out of time

waiting for the next part 😃

Thank you Miti.

I appreciate your dropping in to pen a few words. Thanks.😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Indu finally I was able to sit down and read the last two chapters leisurely. To read your updates I need complete silence and peace (no distraction of any kind), so that I could enjoy each and every word, as you know how much I love your writing 😳

While reading chapter 13, I was feeling as if I'm reading Jane Austin's novel ( Pride And Prejudice is my all time favorite, and Mr,Darcy and Ms. Bennett my all time favorite pair)

While reading that chapter, I could visualize Yash and Aarti in that era and somehow dressed like them. Well that's the beauty of your wonderful writing 👏 .

That Nanimaasi is so cute, after Aayu she's my favorite character in Samarpan 😳. Loved the way she was threatning Sameer with her fake dog, and that fool even bought it 😆( somehow he reminded me of Ishita getting Popat in the last few episodes 😆)

And OMG Yash is totally smitten by Aarti , well can we blame him, Aarti is so lovable that anyone will fall in love with her the moment they meet her. 😳

OMG the way you described the scene where Yash finds Aarti sitting ( in chapter 14), I was visualizing lush meadows and pastures and Aarti sitting there and Yash standing and admiring her beauty ( just like Mr. Darcy and Ms. Bennett )

And I'm so happy that Yash will now stay with these two lovely ladies and soon Payal will also join them .

Sorry for such a late reply (*holding my both ears*).

And congrats for the second thread 👏