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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini
awesome update indu..
loved Aarthi characterization.. she loves nature.. aww. so sweet

Yash toh totally fida over Aarthi.. Mountain Fairy...

Nanimassi such a strong lady.. hats off to her...

Finally Prashant.. aargh.. this guys never changed .. he deserves the slap...

indu dear, awesome awesome awesome..

thanks u for this wonderful update..

cant wait for ur next one...

Thanks Shalini.

Aarti always loved nature. Whenever she would be upset, she escaped to nature and her writings. Throughout her growing years she did that.

Prashant thinks he has naanimaasi cornered. He just might have surprises in store for him.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams
beautiful update, you have described arthi's green patch so well, it surely pictured as a fairy tale. poor naanimaasi, must applaud her will to protect arthi even with so many issues around her own self. finally i got the much awaited blow on prashant's face from my dear yashu...🥳

Thanks my friend.

Naanimaasi and Aarti are the only family to each other as of today. Also, the older woman loves Aarti as her own child now, so she is going all out to protect her.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: jikky_84
Beautiful update as usual Indu 👏

Nanimasi is really a very strong women who is taking care of everything her own. Glad that now she has some one like Yash who genuinely cares for her and whom she can trust. So Yash is starting to know Arati more and hope our little princess of Yash reaches here as soon as possible so that she can met her mountain fairy.

Thanks Asha.

Naanimaasi is used to being self-reliant, having spend so many years alone. Protecting Aarti and giving her the best in life is her biggest incentive now.

Yash loves what he sees. He just can't seem to get enough of Aarti's purity.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Shwty
Loved the update! Can't wait for the next one. Prashant is such a creep. Can't wait for aarti and yash to start bonding.

Thanks Shwty.

Yash and Aarti are already bonding, albeit slowly.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Leevi05
awesome update😉

Thanks Leevi.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: shalini28
wow another mindblowing update Indu sis.😳
really loved the old couple Anna and Chris and their bonding with Aarti😳
and at last i think that punch is given by yash😉
waiting for next update di😳

Thanks Shalini.😊

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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

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It was the second time I've read the updates, but I feel like repeating it again and again..
I'm so happy about the way the story goes and how Yash little by little witnessing Aarti's other side.

Am glad Yash got to know the problem that naanimaasi is currently facing, her financial situation and about Prashant.
For sure he will get what he deserves from Yash, a punch!

I so loved how you picturized the entire scenario, where Yash saw Aarti enjoyed playing with the birds and squirrel while she was writing on her notebook. And she is indeed his Mountain fairy!

I loved the bonding that Aarti have with the oldies and Yash-naanimaasi bonding was awesome! Their childish act were such a treat to read!

I actually love every bit of the story!

Although am a little bit worried about Yash lie.
Wondering how will Aarti and naanimaasi react once found out about his real identity and how will he face them once the truth come out...

Wonder how the story unfold once Yash finally live on that house and Payal met Aarti.

Can't wait for the next installment, I hope I'd be able to catch it when I'm fully free!

*HUGS for the wonderful read Indu dear!

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Fab update Indu.. Nanimasi what a strong lady she is but thank God yash is there by her. Arrg prashant whats it with this guy!

love those yash Aarti moments together.

Contine soon.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: saf24
Fantastic update as usual Indu. Really loved that Yash got to see different sides of Aarti with her smiling and laughing and his hope that he can always keep her happy like that. Also liked that he found out about Naanimasi's financial situation as i'm sure he'll do is best to help her. Beautifully written. Loved every bit of it.

Thanks Saf.

Yeah...Yash is learning more and more about Aarti. The more he sees her, the more he'll understand that there must be a reason that she is so closed up among people.

Let's see how Yash helps naanimaasi without compromising his position.