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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rachna1970
wow,,wonderful update Indu
Poor Aarti ,,i'm feeling so bad for her

Yash advice to Aarti was great part

Finally she is saved by Naanimassi

Thanx for the pm

Waiting for next part

Thanks Rachna...

Yeah, thank God Aarti's angels entered at the right time: one motivated her as to what to do and the other picked her up from the darkness.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev
Beautiful story Indu sis.I just read all the parts..The way u convey each and every scenes was damn superb and realistic...really this is really an epic of life.Am eager for ur next update.Do PM me di if possible..if not its okay..hates off to u👏👏👏

Thanks Disha...Welcome to the thread!🤗

I am so glad I could pull you in with me on this journey. Hope you continue to stay till the end.😳

Sure I'll pm you...Better still, send me a buddy request.😊

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Just wanted to drop in and say that I finally, finally got a chance to read Part 6 properly. It made me teary-eyed. I didn't know whether I would start shedding tears of sadness or happiness as I kept reading, but I do know that both emotions were coursing through me from start to finish.

P.S. Continue the waiting game, Indu. Samarpan has drawn me into its story so fully that I can't seem to pull myself together to write reviews until I have a significant chunk of time to myself to devote to detail-jotting. Love you and love, love, love this story, Didi 🤗.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams
Just wanted to drop in and say that I finally, finally got a chance to read Part 6 properly. It made me teary-eyed. I didn't know whether I would start shedding tears of sadness or happiness as I kept reading, but I do know that both emotions were coursing through me from start to finish.

P.S. Continue the waiting game, Indu. Samarpan has drawn me into its story so fully that I can't seem to pull myself together to write reviews until I have a significant chunk of time to myself to devote to detail-jotting. Love you and love, love, love this story, Didi 🤗.

Borna...love you back...loads.🤗

You felt the characters as I did when I wrote...that's enough for me. You know there was so much that was cruising through me when I wrote the past (still ongoing) that I had to deliberately anchor my flow in places and only portray the main events in her life. As it is the updates get very long. At so many places I wanted to go more deeply but held myself back.

In the end I can only hope that my decision to pick and choose was taken well. I wanted to depict that although Aarti's family life was a bed of hot coals, there were sootheners and balm appliers when she was out of them. There were people who cared...people who made her experience love and affection. But yes...as she grew up, she found it more difficult to let anyone come close to her. As such her only real human contacts remained Radhama, Pandit dadu, and Malti. Her art was her real savior though.

You take your time love...I shall be right here when your pen is ready to do the jottings.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Kadeen...Hey there lil sis! Great to have your first thoughts on Samarpan. Thank you.

I can safely say that the family were just blindly following their beliefs as also that she was a girl. The fact that their son had disowned her gave them the licence to treat Aarti like dirt...an unwanted baggage. But since they were supposed to be a reputed family, they couldn't deny her the education till graduation. First time the Scindias gave the nudge. Post schooling, the society took up her case when she topped the state..and so she could go to college. However, now even the society can't help her if they decide to rid her by getting her married off.

I completely agree that the loss of Aarti's art was the worst loss she faced in her life...it completely demotivated her. However, not all is lost...bits and pieces are still preserved. Wonder what Yash was reading in the car!!!😛

See ya lil one...take care.🤗

Noted the bold, but hadn't gotten around to mentioning it- you should know I wouldn't miss such an implication😛. And before I flee again, I am so fed up of this "girl" thing. What is with people?! It's almost as if being female removes the right to be human in some cultures, and what irks me every single time is that other women help to perpetuate the crimes and enable the continuation of this line of thinking. Chi! Anyhoot, people will be people and we can all only do our best with our share of the world.

Kadeen...the girl thing is a very real thing in our society...even today. You know when I had desired for a second child after my son, my MIL had dissuaded me saying, "Now that you have a son, why do you need another child? What if she is a girl?" I could only look at her. The sad part is she didn't say that out of any malice...it was what she believed. So, yeah...a woman is definitely a woman's greatest enemy, if you go by the culture we still belong to. Yet, times are changing...and there is much hope now. When my brother adopted a child (because they were childless for 8 years), he went in for a girl child...and my parents were right with him when he signed the papers in the orphanage. Today, that kid is the apple of our eye...a real sweetheart.😊

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@Di: Times are changing, that I cannot deny. I just hope that it is before another generation is spoiled.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

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******Reserved******

It seems even I am developing this bad habit of reserving and not commenting immediately.😳

But I will get back. I have to read it again at leisure to be able to form any thoughts about it. Your writing always has that effect on me.

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: InduG64

Borna...love you back...loads.🤗

You felt the characters as I did when I wrote...that's enough for me. You know there was so much that was cruising through me when I wrote the past (still ongoing) that I had to deliberately anchor my flow in places and only portray the main events in her life. As it is the updates get very long. At so many places I wanted to go more deeply but held myself back.

In the end I can only hope that my decision to pick and choose was taken well. I wanted to depict that although Aarti's family life was a bed of hot coals, there were sootheners and balm appliers when she was out of them. There were people who cared...people who made her experience love and affection. But yes...as she grew up, she found it more difficult to let anyone come close to her. As such her only real human contacts remained Radhama, Pandit dadu, and Malti. Her art was her real savior though.

You take your time love...I shall be right here when your pen is ready to do the jottings.😊

❤️

At the risk of sounding silly (since I'm already so overwhelmed by your writing and the scenes that I see in my head as I read), I would like to say that I sorely wish you hadn't held back the further explorations into Aarti's life and her emotional states...Then again, what you do choose to share and what you leave out is a sign of a very thoughtful writer, so I might as well thank you for making my life a little bit easier there. Less to write about, you see...🤔 Hmm, actually, I doubt that will make too much of a difference...We'll see 😆.

You know, I love reading your responses to the other members who have already reviewed (plus Kadeen and me 😃 😆) because the way you speak of the characters is so touching. It makes me smile. You know them inside out - and why wouldn't you? You're bringing them to life for all of us, and so, in a way, they are real...To me, they are quite real...

@last paragraph: *nods, with a long sigh* And now look what you've done. I want to write up my reviews right now so that I can relive everything. Alas, I will have to return later. At the rate you're going, you won't be in this thread when I actually jot something down. I don't know whether to be happy about that or not 😆. I guess that's a reminder for me to hurry up! 😃 Until next time, then! I won't write anything else here until I've given you a review.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Borna...we have talked about this earlier too. Our writing patterns are similar. If I am writing about Pandit dadu, I have to close my eyes and see him sitting on the white marble steps of the mandir and regaling a rapt Aarti with tales of mahabharat and Krishna or smiling at Aarti while they both sing the evening bhajan together, as Radhama sits near smiling proudly at the girl she is rearing. *Sigh* see what you made me do...This is the stuff that I have to constantly sift through.😳

Am I going very fast? I thought I was slow this time...managing one in 4/5 days against the twice in a week schedule of Sparsh. I guess I want to put down the thoughts asap lest the continuity of thought process gets broken.😳

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Sheema Rajoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank goodness... Finally Aarti spoke up against all those who treated her like dirt and told them that she wouldn't marry. I honestly felt so disgusted with her family members who wanted to marry her off to a middle age man. It is so degrading and insulting to aarti and it would have crushed her to think that her own family thinks of her as such a burden that they're willing to get her married off to anyone. Such low life but yeah people like this do exist. It even happened to my grandma but those were the olden days when people were less educated but to think it still happens, it's just way beyond appalling.

I just loved the way Yash was the one who gave her the courage to live life the way she wants. to be the master of her own life. without him, I'm pretty sure that she'd end up marrying that man and her life would have been doomed. Thank goodness she has people like Malti and the principle around were the reason she was able to further her studies. What made me feel really sad was Aarti feeling the guilt when her pandit dadu died and it went worse with that Maya adding salt to her wound. These people should be shot dead. I really wanted to break that woman's hand when she slapped aarti multiple times for going against their wishes of getting her married off. I didn't get what she meant by "this is how you repay us". Oh my, I was like "no this is how I should repay you... *slap and punch and kick*"..I really felt like slapping all of them who think aarti owes them anything.

Naanimaasi finally made her appearance and was the one to bring aarti out of that hell hole. Though she's physically out of it, mentally she'd be haunted and scared for life. It's such a pity to see her go through so much of pain during the years which you're supposed to experience the best years of your life. That father of her's is just hopeless I tell you. Man like him don't deserve to be called fathers. I do understand he's angry, upset but when so much injustice is happening to your own child, he should have done something but instead remained silent. Disgusting man.

Indu again another masterpiece. This updates made me really sad and I nearly teared up upon the death of pandit dadu but most of all I was so damn angry with those people she calls her family. I really wanted to slap everyone so hard especially maya. she's useless. Loved your updates and finally we will probably get to see some happy moments but I know it will definitely come with a lot of sadness as aarti is still haunted by the past. So now for such a brilliant update i'll not only give you a jhappi but also a pappi.. 🤗 You're amazing Indu..

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