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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Fabulous, beautifully written. The way you describe Yash and Aarti's relationship after so many years of marriage is amazing. They are made for each other couple. Payal says that is right, no other person can love like Yash loves Aarti.

Thanks for the PM

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Fabulous part, Indu... 👏👏👏

Oh wow... The game was very fun!! 😃 The hint and clues had finally brought Yash to the place where Aarti had kept surprise for him... 😉 The book, Samarpan... I loved the descriptions for the painting.. The sentences... 👍🏼!!

Oh this sentence...

To my husband Yash
I am because you are ... 😳

Oh my.. Payal!! Payal is absolutely right... There's no couple could love each other more than AarYa.. 😳😳 It's a fact.. 😳😉

I'm excited for next Indu.. 😛😉 Enjoy reading it.. 😉 Update soon.. 😃😉 Thanks for the PM! 😃

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

wow so so cute part indu sweetie !!!

Loved the cute family so much

i am so happy to see another great work after sparsh !!!! great job

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inlieu

@inlieu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

@ Indu - I'm loving this so far. I expect it will be even more amazing than Sparsh! 👏 👏 👏

Do you have a thing for the letter 'S', by the way?

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

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ns1970

@ns1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Wow great update indu👏

The love they share is just amazing hope for more soon

Aayu is so sweet I really lve this family

Update soon

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: keerthus.9
What a beautiful story it is turning out to be ,
I really believe that u have some magic in ur words
Amazing part ,
I feel like Payal right now , there cannot be any other family more loving than this

Thanks Keerthus. You know I began with showcasing the closeness of the family just so one knows later that how deserved this happiness is.😊

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J12L85

@J12L85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Speechless Indu... will edit this post when this update settles in.

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: ksfan2
loved it so much di..superb

Thank you.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: rutu83
loved it but getting very curious about the past
payal's very perceptive no? but she's right, your yash and aarti have such a beautiful special bond ❤️

Thanks Rutu. I shall visit the past probably from the next chapter itself. I am yet to plan that out.

The special bond that you mention is exactly what I wanted to convey in the beginning so that when we go back we are assured of how they ended.😊

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