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Roza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

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That was absolutely amazing! The clues given were superb!👏

She gave him the book, Samarpan...awww!!!!😳

I love how your Aayu is!!😉

Payal is rght...Yash and Aarti do share a special bond!❤️

I wonder why Aarti was crying though at the end!!😕

Anyways, dessert will be next huh? God help me!☺️

Please do continue soon!!⭐️

Edited by guruandkratz - 12 years ago

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Shwty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

That was interesting especially the end. I think what Payal said reminded Aarti of how she used to think. Update soon.

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

idk y everyone res. but this update was boss 👍🏼 (don't worry tht's a good thing it means ur update iwas awesome)

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Dear friends,

As per Angel's suggestion, I have placed a note below the update regarding the relations mentioned till Part 2. Please let me know if you have any other confusion.

Thank you.
Indu

Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

I loved the update!

I've mentioned this before, but I love the relationship Yash and Aarti have with each other. Their unconditional love and support for each other is amazing and their relationship with their kids is touching and beautiful. That moment when Yash was thinking about not wanting to see the hurt and sadness in Aarti's eyes and always wanting to keep her happy was wonderful as well as his reaction on seeing Aarti's book. The understanding they have for each other is so special and something that I adore.

I love the characters of Payal and Aayu. Payal has heady notions of love and romance that stems from her observation of her parents. I can understand why Aarti would scold her for thinking so. Payal reveres her parents' relationship with each other so much that she doesn't believe that it's possible for her to have one just like them with her own special someone.

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Awww a well written beautiful update, Pal 👏 👏 👏...OMG I loved the journey through AarYa's relationship through the clues that Aarti left for Yash, their love is so pure and breathtaking 😳 😳

Their kids are too adorable especially, Aayu stealing a spoonful of chocolate mousse and Payal is just too much ❤️

Wow that was one great gift that Aarti gave to Yash it was so emotional when he found it, I loved that Aarti corrected him when he said that she made and she told him that they made together 😉 😳

Can't wait for more and once again fab job my friend 🤗

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Indu this was such a beautiful update. Loved every bit of it. Enjoyed the kids getting involved in the treasure hunt and then the Yash and Aarti moments. Simply put the update was perfect

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Di...all I can say is you made me cry with how beautifully you're shaping up AarYa's love story! 😭 👏 👏

Nothing else...I'm still wiping tears! 😭

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Sheema Rajoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Indu I absolutely loved the 4 clues treasure hunt. It was brilliant. I absolutely loved the way aarti went 4 clues, 40 minutes and if you can't find it by then, no gift and certainly no dessert. The way she teased yash by brushing against him and going no dessert made me blush.. Your Samarpan is making me blush like crazy I tell you.

Then the kids and Yash solving the clues together was such a nice read. Aayu is definitely the cheeky one as he sneakingly took a spoonful of chocolate mousse..

My favourite part is definitely the gift of the book Samarpan and the little message Aarti wrote for Yash in it. It was so beautiful and breath taking. I almost teared up at this whole part when I read that Yash had tears in his eyes. That was so sweet and touching Indu. This is just too early for me to tear up. It's just the second update and I'm already getting emotional.

Now Im even more curious to know Aarti's past which I'm very sure you'll disclose in the near future. Her past seems very tragic and filled with sadness as her reaction towards payal's statement that she'll never find someone who loves her as much as her dad loves her mom, proves that Aarti's past was tragic.

Indu this again is another brilliant update by you. Each update is more interesting and beautiful than before. You're simply amazing and definitely know the ways to captivate readers by making the story way beyond interesting. Love love love it. Now I give you a jhappi and huggy for this fantastic update..🤗