Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 107

Originally posted by: sara1990

Awesome update

Originally posted by: rutu83

wonderful update- while i don't like it, i def understand yash's position

ah aarti- can't return it herself- i'd laugh but i reacted exactly the same way 😳

that prashant😡

Originally posted by: saf24

Another beautiful update Indu. Your words never cease to amaze me. Loved every bit of what you have written. Looking forward to what is in store next for these two as you continue with their journey.

Originally posted by: Zetter

Another wonderful update Pal 👏 👏 👏...What can I say about Aarti and Yash little lunch together even though it was short they both felt has each they have known each other for years plus the first poem of the journal that Yash ever read that made him fell in love with that writer/person was the first thing that came to his mind why? cause his heart and soul recognized her but his mind is taking its sweet time 😛 😳 😳

Damn that Prashant does he really think that Aarti will ever marry him as long as her grandmother is there she won't let the mikes of him get to her nor any other creeps 😡

I can't wait for the next installment my friend, fantastic job as ever 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

I was going back reading over the past chapters when, "Lo and behold" Chapter 11 is up. I am really amazed with the essence of your story, the words to describe every nuance of feeling and surroundings. I am simply captivated. Chapter 11 is a continuation of some parts of chapter 1; when Yash was talking about Aarti to Payal and him remembering the past as he looked at Aarti's picture with her soulful eyes which he keeps in his wallet. Am so glad that I just read it again. A chapter is never enough though, but patience is a virtue that I am relearning with your story. THANKS AGAIN INDU!