Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 108

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Beautiful write up dear. Waiting Insha Allah for next part.

Shukriya Naeema.😊

Originally posted by: Surish

Excellent update my dear!

Thanks Surish.😊

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! It's fabulous. She sit with him while he was eating, and serve sandwiches and lemonade also. So nice. But the Sameer Singhania came and she went. Yash was feeling that she is also behind money seeing that bracelet. Poor Yash, his past experiences keeping him to believe that such a nice girl would be there in this world. He always encountered with the gold diggers. But I hope soon the clouds will disperse and he will see the pure heart and soul of her.

Prashant disgusting, saying to naanimassi that You are not going to get a millionaire prince for that girl. but he will see soon a prince will be marrying with that same girl.

Thanks Shashi.

Yes...because of the bracelet Yash gets doubts. Poor guy...he's like thrice bitten and one's shy. But the good thing is he already feels this strong pull toward a just-met Aarti.

Originally posted by: custodian75

Just read part 11.
Its nice to know that Yash did not give up on her. Just waiting for the next part.

Thanks you.😊

Originally posted by: ksfan2

loved it..waiting to know more

Thanks Rashee.😊

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Wow.😃..Superb update...👏 👏

Loved yash and aarti moment😳..Yash monologue awesome.⭐️

Liked the way yash analyzing aarti character.Beautifully written👍🏼Poor yash still not able to believe aarti because of his past experiences...

Prashant is really disgusting.😡 😡 .is he really dreaming that aarti will marry him..Naaniamasi is correct aarti is out of limits for him👏

Last part was interesting⭐️

Continue soon dear...Can't wait for the next part

Thanks Radha. Your comments always give this refreshing feel...they have such closeness to the characters. Thanks a ton for appreciating the characters. 😊

I just wanted to let you know I read this update.
There are a myriad of emotions going through me at this moment but the one that comes to the fore,its complicated.
I don't mean to offend you but somewhere in naanimaasi's story existed one close to you.If you would remember the question I asked you during sparsh-that does the kind of love yash felt for aarti exists?,you would get what I'm hinting at.I would have been straight forward but I don't wish to offend.
The thought just came to mind.

Originally posted by: vidya29

I just wanted to let you know I read this update.
There are a myriad of emotions going through me at this moment but the one that comes to the fore,its complicated.
I don't mean to offend you but somewhere in naanimaasi's story existed one close to you.If you would remember the question I asked you during sparsh-that does the kind of love yash felt for aarti exists?,you would get what I'm hinting at.I would have been straight forward but I don't wish to offend.
The thought just came to mind.

Hi Vidya...You remember that? I am touched...so very touched. Yes, you are right. My father is always with me...then how can he not reflect somewhere in my writing? No offense taken, my dear...absolutely none.

As for Yash and Aarti's relationship in Samarpan...it was never going to be simple. 😊

wow beautiful update dear. so cute take of yash's feelings !!

Yash and Aarti's lunch was so short yet meaningful and beautifully written!👏😳