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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: miti16295
Lovely epilogue dear👏
wow baby shower & arrival aayu

but i m sad that i won't read this story again 😭

Hope u will write more stories . 😃

thanks a ton dear...thanks for ur feedback..thank u always for being active in reading m os and giving ur time in commenting..the comments really encouraged to write more...i m also feelingbad that it ended...i will try writing soon..just some ip school stuff to do for now

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Dear.. So Cute and Dreamy Epilogue it was!! 👏👏

I had tears in my eyes for the happy ending!! 😳 Just wished many more like this kind of moments in PV soon! 😳 Most happy is to read about Aakash and Ishita!! 😳 I'm waiting for his acceptance in the family in PV!! 😉

Oh Aayu came to the world already.. !! AarYa moments with the kids were so cute.. !!

Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us dear!! 😃 Hope to see you coming up with another story!! 😉 Thanks once again buddy! 🤗

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

I m just feeling so gud reading this os fabulous dear

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

dear this was sp beautiful

yash and aarti as aarya journey with aayu oh it was all dreamy

loved each word and s smile on my fcae

they are really meant to be HAMESHA AND FOREVER

will reallly look forward to more work on aarya

yo write so beautifully and simple way it touches your heart..

all i can do 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Epilogue is fabulous, fantastic, awesome, mind-blowing. The baby shower, the family's bonding, the kids understanding their responsibility, the waiting for the baby to come to this world, all is just fabulous.

"Paridhi then comes forward and whispers "bhabhi, right now I and pratiek wants a baby version of our gundi bhabhi and next baby version of shy yash bhaiya" It's really cute of Paridhi.

And Aayu, it's the beautiful gift, bundle of joy for the family, especially for Yash and Aarti. They lived happily hamesha and forever. Lovely ending.

But I will miss HAMESHA AND FOREVER.

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

wow my dear i have tears in my eyes after reading this perfect cute ending ...

what a lovely baby shower and i can imagine how beautiful arthi would have been !!! SO so happy to see u as a talented person !!!

So dont stop eith this and continue another cute story u can do it !!!!

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Abie10

@Abie10

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hey buddy, I enjoyed reading every bit of this update it was so beautiful that I feel as if I was watching the whole baby shower and Aayu's arrival. It was a pleasure being with you in the entire journey of Hamesha and Forever. U have a great writing skill 👏 ... Hope to see another OS soon.

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ANU

@kratzyfan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

simply superb...wonderful...touchy...heartfelt story..😊

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charmi

@princess121993

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Dear.. So Cute and Dreamy Epilogue it was!! 👏👏

I had tears in my eyes for the happy ending!! 😳 Just wished many more like this kind of moments in PV soon! 😳 Most happy is to read about Aakash and Ishita!! 😳 I'm waiting for his acceptance in the family in PV!! 😉

Oh Aayu came to the world already.. !! AarYa moments with the kids were so cute.. !!

Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us dear!! 😃 Hope to see you coming up with another story!! 😉 Thanks once again buddy! 🤗

awww...isya...thanks for always being active and giving ur precious feedback for my os...it really encouraged me to write more...thanks for supporting with ur comments