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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: RA17
dear this was sp beautiful

yash and aarti as aarya journey with aayu oh it was all dreamy

loved each word and s smile on my fcae

they are really meant to be HAMESHA AND FOREVER

will reallly look forward to more work on aarya

yo write so beautifully and simple way it touches your heart..

all i can do 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

thanks dear...i m glad u loved it...thanks for always being active n leaving ur precious comments...it really helped me...thanks again😊

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
Epilogue is fabulous, fantastic, awesome, mind-blowing. The baby shower, the family's bonding, the kids understanding their responsibility, the waiting for the baby to come to this world, all is just fabulous.

"Paridhi then comes forward and whispers "bhabhi, right now I and pratiek wants a baby version of our gundi bhabhi and next baby version of shy yash bhaiya" It's really cute of Paridhi.

And Aayu, it's the beautiful gift, bundle of joy for the family, especially for Yash and Aarti. They lived happily hamesha and forever. Lovely ending.

But I will miss HAMESHA AND FOREVER.

thanks so much dear😉thanks for always being active and thanks for leavinf ur feedback...i know it ended...i will also miss hamesha and forever...😭..but it is said everything which has a start has to end... so did this os ended...thanks for supporting me through the entire journey of hamesha and forever😊

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: maha9
wow my dear i have tears in my eyes after reading this perfect cute ending ...
what a lovely baby shower and i can imagine how beautiful arthi would have been !!! SO so happy to see u as a talented person !!!

So dont stop eith this and continue another cute story u can do it !!!!

maha dear...thanks so much...thanks for always being active...n leaving ur feedback...it always encouraged me to write more...dont worry..i will start a new os soon once i get a new idea..till then stay tuned with the actual pv

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Abie10
Hey buddy, I enjoyed reading every bit of this update it was so beautiful that I feel as if I was watching the whole baby shower and Aayu's arrival. It was a pleasure being with you in the entire journey of Hamesha and Forever. U have a great writing skill 👏 ... Hope to see another OS soon.

thanks abie dear...thanks for being with me through the entire journey os hamesha and forever...u dont know how scared i was to write this os...n how scared i had been before posting each part...but i m glad it was loved by all...thanks for always supporting me by leaving ur precious comments...will write soon once i get a new idea😊

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: kratzyfan
simply superb...wonderful...touchy...heartfelt story..😊

thanks a ton dear😉... thank u for ur feedback...😉

Edited by princess121993 - 12 years ago

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5
wow...damn good

thanks so very much...😉thank u for ur feedback😃

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Roza

@..Comrade4eva..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: princess121993

waiting for ur comments...

Done and edited!!😃

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Awesome Epilogue to a Beautiful Story

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: SAnonymous
Awesome Epilogue to a Beautiful Story

thank u so so much for always liking and commenting on my work...ur feedback meant a lot for me...thanks for supporting me in the entire journey of hamesha and forever😊

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: guruandkratz
Reserved!!
*****EDITED*****

Me first. YAY!!🥳
I know I am really late in un-reserving this post! Sowwie!!😳

So I am crying becuase someone finished this. It cannot be over. Please do not let it be over! But it is already over! NOOO!!!!!!!!🤢

Please please please please please please please please please please please please make another dear!!

Now about the update...

So glad about Aarti's pregnancy...especially the kids taking care of her..so sweet!!😳

So glad Akash tried to change his habits...and they were accepted!!😃

The preparation for baby shower was cute...Yash missed his kissy again!!😆☺️

Paridhi's whisper made me giggle...loved how each of them replied!!😆

Waiting for Aarti to give birth was really adorable...especially when Aayu kicked!😊

The scene at the hospital was really great. I loved it!❤️

This was a very addicting FF. I will miss it! Please make another dear!!👏⭐️

😭...another one soon please!!😃😉