My first OS/SS' I love you Aarti' update page 25

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: *Maleena*
Wow wonderful start! I love it! I really liked how you show how Yash and Aarti are feeling after all that has happend. Please continue soon!

Thanks for our beautiful comments. I actually feel that they should show something like this in PV also. As our AarYa went through so much in the last few weeks. That's why I wrote it. 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini
whoa.. awesome nikky...
love it...
Finally Yash tax will be paid.. lol

waiting eagerly for next part...

awesome awesome awesome

Thanks dear.

I am not sure when we will see the tax paid scene in PV, so I thought why not to write about it myself 😉

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-Maaneet-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

really nice os for a start..good job

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

For the first time writer, you have expressed the feelings very well Nikki, you will go a long way. Waiting for the next. Good job!

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Jaymini Mistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

first part was great !!! can't wait for part 2 !!! please contin soon yeye ? !! wonderfull !

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Great Job, Nikki! 👏👏👏

Loved it so much... Congo for the first trial! 🥳

Can't wait for the next! 😃

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aditi sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

WOW !!!! Nikki ,

Beautifully written Os 👏👏👏👏👏👏
Very good start dear
there is a easy flow in your writing
loved it very much
You write so well
do write more often
Waiting for next update for aisa waisa of arya

CONGRATULATIONS !!! DEAR ON YOUR FIRST WRITE - UP