My first OS/SS' I love you Aarti' update page 25

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo
ah nikki.. it was a nice start..
subtle yet you can feel the longing.
waiting for the next part which i feel is going to be hot..

Thanks Sheema.

Just edited it and added the precap ka hint in it 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shalini28

di i really liked it pakka😳

Thanks Shalu 🤗

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drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thank you so much Miti. I am still shaking with the thought, that wether it's good or not. If I get positive response, I'll update it before Monday only. 😊

di it was really good

waiting for some hot hot moment of aarya😳

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Shalini barman roy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Thanks Shalu 🤗

aargh di why did u end it at the rite time

jaldi jaldi aisa waisa part okiee☺️😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
I simply loved it...
A very beautifully written one...simple yet said what we all wanted to hear!

However - you had ended it at the wrong time when I thought something would happen!😆

Please continue ...

Yeah with all the high voltage drama going on in PV, I wanted to write about something simple and romantic.

Sorry for the abrupt ending. We must always leave the audience to crave for more. 😉

Thanks for the encouragement. 😊