SATRANGI- SS part 11 updated on page 80

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So guys am back again with another SS...😊 not a big one though... i think it will take around 4- 5 parts...at first I started it as an OS... but it is turning out to be so big for it to be termed as OS......😕 so i turned it into SS...😳 it's some what close to my heart... dunno how it gets turned out to be... hope you all like it... 😊OK enough of my silly rant... here is my new SS...have a look at it... read it and give your opinion... and don't forget to 'like' it😳 Edit: any one who wants PM can send me a buddy request... it will be easier for me to send PMs😳


SATRANGI


He was there roaming around aimlessly as if searching something. But what was he searching for was unknown to him. It was then a butterfly adorned with beautiful colors on its wings came to his view. It came near to him fluttering its wings as if waiting for him to concentrate on it. He got amused with its multi colors and started following it as if he was enchanted by it. He followed it and entered into a place filled with greenery around and embellished with orchids and all sorts of flowers. He was just trying to sink in to the atmosphere. It was then he saw a beautiful girl clad in a white chudidar and her head was covered with a multicolored dupatta standing there as if waiting for him. When she saw him, with an enchanting smile on her face she just forwarded her hands gesturing him to come and hug her. He was bewitched by her in such a way that he without any retort went and hugged her. He was hit by a wave of solace. Now he came to understand what he was searching for and he got it. He closed his eyes letting the emotion sink in him. He after a few seconds felt a void and opened his eyes only to witness barren land around him. He was left with her multi colored duppata and was flabbergasted to see it full of blood and his hands are blood stained too!!

Yash just woke up with a jerk from his sleep. He rubbed his face, brushed his hair back with his trembling fingers and reached to the side table to drink some water. He got up from the bed. This happens with him every day. He just can't call it a dream and he can't even call it a nightmare. It seems so real for him. He doesn't know when he started getting this dream but it literally changed his life. The girl in his dream, she is the one who changed his life. He loves her. Weird it is, but he loves his dream girl. He switched on the lights of his room which was filled with his dream girl's paintings. Yeah he painted his imagination. He went to the large size portrait of hers and whispered "Satrangi" He smiled to himself. These paintings are his only companion after his mother left him 5 years back. She died of cancer. Today's not a different day for him but don't know why he is feeling restless as if something big is going happen today. He just can't concentrate. He sluggishly went and got ready for his office. He is in his car and waiting not so patiently for the traffic to get cleared. Mumbai traffic is something he hates. Suddenly he is having this weird feeling again as if his girl is around. He is feeling pulled in to an unknown abyss.

Meanwhile there came a cab in which Aarthi is talking to her mom Shobha turning to her side. "Maa I am going to admit you in the hospital today and head to our home here in Mumbai. And I need to the check with the packers and movers whether they reached or not. Have to do the arrangements. Tab tak aap hospital mein hi rahenge. You need to rest." Shoba tried saying something but Aarthi cut it off "Don't worry I can manage."

Yash went to his office but can't concentrate much on his work. He is the head of the most famous event management company. He was in an important meeting with one of his clients. They are discussing about the type of venue, flowers and stuff like what sort of colors they want in the venue. The mention of colors made him restless again. He being unable to carry on the meeting asked his subordinate Rishi to take over and just went off. He needs peace of mind so he headed off to the nearby mazhar.

Meanwhile here in her home, Aarthi completed her arrangements in the house. The last thing remained is put up pictures on the wall. She took out big portraits hung them to the hinges. She looked at them for some time and then moved out. Aarthi wants to re-live her memories. So she went to the nearby mazhar where she went earlier when she came to Mumbai first time.

part-2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=9

part-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=18

part-4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=26

part-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=32

part-6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=40

part-7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=48

part-8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80?pn=56

part-9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80

part-10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80

part-11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3381013/satrangi-ss-part-11-updated-on-page-80

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anushaarja thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks PK... u will always be the first one to write in my OS or SS thanks... and am glad u liked it...😃
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I like it!!! But what does this mean - thanks and sorry!!!
- Tab tak aap hospital mein hi rahenge.?
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Originally posted by: akui1984

I like it!!! But what does this mean - thanks and sorry!!!

- Tab tak aap hospital mein hi rahenge.?


until then u r staying in the hospital

and thanks for liking it... glad u liked it...😊 may i know your name?😳
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thanks nan0102😊
may i know your name?😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...
But sorry to ask what does "Satrangi" and "Mazhar" mean?...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ummisco

Nice start...

But sorry to ask what does "Satrangi" and "Mazhar" mean?...


thanks ummisco😊
satrangi- multicolored
mazhar is a place where we find god according to muslims... basically mazhar is also called light... here it is place of worship...may i know your name?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: keerthus.9

nice , like it 😊


thanks keerthu😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushaarja


until then u r staying in the hospital

and thanks for liking it... glad u liked it...😊 may i know your name?😳

Thanks for translating for me! I am Sabrina.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akui1984



Thanks for translating for me! I am Sabrina.


nice name...😊 btw u dunno hindi??

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