Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142 - Page 95

Originally posted by: maha9

Oh god my dear u forgot to pm me 👎🏼

wont this arthi get out of her arpita thoughts ???

and yash's naughty message convo with arthi is superb dear.. and the fact that he is so proud to say he IS IRRESISTABLE for arthi 😆 not even bothering of the people outside !!!!

omg the night serious convo made me afraid again she will end up in a fight and why does yash want so eagerly to play with arpita... when our arthi is so confused even after making love with him ☺️

but whatever may be the fight u ended them both again in lovely moment of union 😳 wow my yash cant stay away from his beautiful wife not even one night ah !!!!
but he was so besharam in lots of love that he forgot to switch off the lights 😆

and the next day.. arthi started herself and the topic and made a conclusion with yash..

nowadays arthi is getting clever so that she escaped from yash's kiss this time in a swift jump from the car 🤣 poor yash would have felt disappointed ...

thank u so much for this sweet part dear

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Sabarina - missed this SS more and am happy you are back with the update...as usual love the bickering between the two...and the obsession of Arpita still continues...even after his declaration of ILU...but the tennis game ruined the attraction and the mind started regathering the dots😆...as u rightly said. Am not so happy as the end is near... for the climax part - Tennis - hoping for the win and would love to see Aman-Yash parting shot.

Writing SS has to be creative but to write funny is the hardest form of craft. You may have a great sense of humour but capturing that in your writing needs practice but I feel Sabarina - you are a natural writer...it shows,...am waiting eagerly for the next.

Originally posted by: tleshni

Great update👏.. I have to say again that I love Aarti because I could totally see myself in her.. insecurity in terms of Yash's feelings for Aarpita is not something that can be wiped away in 1 day especially when Yash told his new bride that he loves another😆.. Even after making love,I get how she is still abit unsure about Aarpita..glad that you didnt make things all flowery and "happily ever after" following their love making..👏

As chitsri pointed,you really have the talent to write all this witty dialogues between them...its so much fun reading this story.. and feeling sad that its coming to an end..is it wrong for me to request a few more chapters..?😆

Originally posted by: rutu83

yash lol
i feel for him
aarti really knows how to twist his words 😆

Originally posted by: ns1970

Awesome update 👍🏼

Love the conversation between yash and aarti

Anxiously waiting on next update

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Superb update 👏👏👏. Their arguments are awesome. Yash's message about him being irresistible is fabulous 😉. Even though Yash confessed his feelings to Aarti that he loves her. But Aarti is feeling insecure that if Yash still loves Arpita. Poor Yash, unable to prove that he loves her only.

OMG! Tennis match again 😲. Yash will not give up until he win the tennis game over Arpita and Armaan. This tennis match again brought Arpita in between them.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: billieberry

read part 11 & 12, actually am back for d story, missed d previous pm's u sent sorry for d late response, will try to follow nd catch up soon😳

awesome piece dear👏👏