Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

Sabarina - missed this SS more and am happy you are back with the update...as usual love the bickering between the two...and the obsession of Arpita still continues...even after his declaration of ILU...but the tennis game ruined the attraction and the mind started regathering the dots😆...as u rightly said. Am not so happy as the end is near... for the climax part - Tennis - hoping for the win and would love to see Aman-Yash parting shot.

Writing SS has to be creative but to write funny is the hardest form of craft. You may have a great sense of humour but capturing that in your writing needs practice but I feel Sabarina - you are a natural writer...it shows,...am waiting eagerly for the next.

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tleshni

@tleshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Great update👏.. I have to say again that I love Aarti because I could totally see myself in her.. insecurity in terms of Yash's feelings for Aarpita is not something that can be wiped away in 1 day especially when Yash told his new bride that he loves another😆.. Even after making love,I get how she is still abit unsure about Aarpita..glad that you didnt make things all flowery and "happily ever after" following their love making..👏

As chitsri pointed,you really have the talent to write all this witty dialogues between them...its so much fun reading this story.. and feeling sad that its coming to an end..is it wrong for me to request a few more chapters..?😆

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#923

yash lol
i feel for him
aarti really knows how to twist his words 😆

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ns1970

@ns1970

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Posted: 11 years ago

#924

Awesome update 👍🏼

Love the conversation between yash and aarti

Anxiously waiting on next update

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nan0102

@nan0102

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Posted: 11 years ago

#925

thanks for the superb update,,i just love these two so much,,their cute bickering is soo entertaining,,

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Sdaren

@Sdaren

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Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Loved the update, hope Aarti's insecurity has lessened and looking forward to the tennis rematch.

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

Superb update 👏👏👏. Their arguments are awesome. Yash's message about him being irresistible is fabulous 😉. Even though Yash confessed his feelings to Aarti that he loves her. But Aarti is feeling insecure that if Yash still loves Arpita. Poor Yash, unable to prove that he loves her only.

OMG! Tennis match again 😲. Yash will not give up until he win the tennis game over Arpita and Armaan. This tennis match again brought Arpita in between them.

Thanks for the PM.

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#928

read part 11 & 12, actually am back for d story, missed d previous pm's u sent sorry for d late response, will try to follow nd catch up soon😳

awesome piece dear👏👏

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princess4120

@princess4120

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Posted: 11 years ago

#929

haha.. so funny how arti goes from loving to insecure and into arguments.. it is hilarious to see how much she can twist anything he says.. poor yash..
awesome update.. waiting for the next part.. curious to see what happens with the tennis game..

take care