Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142

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princess4120

@princess4120

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

awww.. that was a wonderful part.. really enjoyed how arti is making yash restless.. and their little kitchen scene was awesome.. hehe.. i cant wait to read more..
i want this matter to be gone.. arti can't keep bringing up arpita.. but i can understand her insecurities about it as well.. yash and her need to hash it out once and for all.. and maybe if she knew the impact that she was having on yash.. or some of his feelings for her.. maybe she wuoldnt always bring up arpita..

anyway.. hope you do update soon.. cant wait to read the next part..

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Ashna

@AshnaKS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

You are too good. I'm addicted to your writing...

PLEASE update soon 😳

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

awesome update

poor yash...

aarti is impossible 😆

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-AarYaholic-

@-AarYaholic-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

I finally read up the entire story!!

You're going great Sabs! This story is too interesting to miss

Take your time...Do PM meeh!!

Regards!

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Fantastic update. Aww Aarti's silence is getting to Yash that he has started checking his phone for messages from her more often. I'm glad that Yash realised through Aarti and her parents' talks just how different her life was before marriage and he actually thanks her for doing everything possible to fit in with his family. The scene with the dishes was simply adorable. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: akui1984
Thanks for your wonderful words...Haha...Really? You liked the dialogues?!?! And you did not find the update kinda a bore? Thanks for finding the text msg part and their self thought funny! I read this update for the third time when I had to repost the whole part cause of some formatting error and was kinda restless halfway...Felt that some scenes were just unncessary and too draggy (Prateek and Yash office scene and the Dubeys family moment in the kitchen) and there was too much of Yash's thoughts!

I will definitely try to give longer updates...But I really gotta see how it goes! Anyway, Yash was the one who introduced this obsession to Aarti so he has to find the solution to it! 😆

Those scenes are necessary...cause other characters do play an important part to get the 'Tom & Jerry' game in action...nd then u can't make the main characters - THE MAIN - cause involvement of other character & their life do add spice ...by the way forgot to add...more than ARYA...I was missing their talks😉hope u give us update soon...thanks dear..

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palbhar

@palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

Really enjoyed this update...love this bubbly, cute Aarti who has so many cheeky answers to Yash and who keeps him on his toes!!!!

Aarti can never let go of Arpita until Yash says that he does not feel anything for Arpita anymore!!!! Unfortunately Yash doesn't realise how a woman's mind works!!!!!

Looking forward to next update!!!!

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

😳how embarrassing - caught by your DAD!! oof - poor aarti😃

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nan0102

@nan0102

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

very nice update...it was just too cute..the way aarti simple message affected yash like that..just love it..and the kitchen romance is just superb..will be waiting patiently for the next update..