Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 123mitul

loved this update. but seriously!! Aarti is obsessed with Arpita!!

Thank you for commenting! Yes, Aarti is obsessed with Aprita but she cant help herself...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for reading!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitsri65


Must say - this lengthy update is the best u have done so far. Love the way how u handle the sharpness of dialogue delivery - awesome...as these two 'Tom & Jerry' (as u righty put it) characters never satisfies with short update from u...continue to give longer one in future too...it was quite funny both were missing their talks..nd yes texting msg part and self thought was 😆.am waiting to see how Yash is going to deal with Arti obsession - her day starts and ends with Arpita😆
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Thanks for your wonderful words...Haha...Really? You liked the dialogues?!?! And you did not find the update kinda a bore? Thanks for finding the text msg part and their self thought funny! I read this update for the third time when I had to repost the whole part cause of some formatting error and was kinda restless halfway...Felt that some scenes were just unncessary and too draggy (Prateek and Yash office scene and the Dubeys family moment in the kitchen) and there was too much of Yash's thoughts!
I will definitely try to give longer updates...But I really gotta see how it goes! Anyway, Yash was the one who introduced this obsession to Aarti so he has to find the solution to it! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaah... sabrina lovely update once again

text msg part was awesome omg this aarthi is really so smart 😆😆 yash wasthinking that his behaviour somehow affected aarthi but here it was completely different she completely disturbed yash from his routine life😆😉

omg that kitchen talk in dubeys talk i liked the most 😃😃 it will be quite amusing if yas serves them while they r eating😆😆

atleast now he admitted that he admires her how she adjusted herself in his family😆

omg hot kitchen scene😳😳😳

they missed their talks hmm...

seirously aarthi has arpithas obsession😆😆 hope she will find a cure soon 😆😆
great job dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for a very lengthy update...that too much early👏🤗

so the great Mr.Yash scindhia's mind is diverted becoz of a small text from his wife😉...loved that texting part...poor yash ...he had to give explanations to prateik,pankaj n arpita for this...

and ha..that self thoughts of yash n aarti ...a good idea👍🏼 to know what's going on in their mind...i was laughing reading😃 self thoughts that too last when yash thought that he has to count till ten before giving the answer😆😆...

why this aarti brings arpita's name b/n them...our yash babu has to clear these things b/n them...otherwise aarti's obsession for arpita further increases 😆...

now aarti is thinking about arpita more than yash😆...(a smart aarti👍🏼)...

i'll be waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the update. Finally things are moving in the right direction for them.
Edited by Sdaren - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A long and wonderful update. Thank you so much!!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃really nice story..I liked it too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

aaah... sabrina lovely update once again

text msg part was awesome omg this aarthi is really so smart 😆😆 yash wasthinking that his behaviour somehow affected aarthi but here it was completely different she completely disturbed yash from his routine life😆😉

omg that kitchen talk in dubeys talk i liked the most 😃😃 it will be quite amusing if yas serves them while they r eating😆😆

atleast now he admitted that he admires her how she adjusted herself in his family😆

omg hot kitchen scene😳😳😳

they missed their talks hmm...

seirously aarthi has arpithas obsession😆😆 hope she will find a cure soon 😆😆
great job dear

Hey thanks a lot for always leaving your appreciative comments behind! Haha, Aarti is definitely a smart cookie and I always knew that she would win in the battles of wits! I am glad this part is appreciated! 😊
OMG! Thanks for saying you liked the Dubey's family scene cause I found it too draggy when I read it again and felt that I should have shorten it instead...It is great to know someone actually like trhe scene!
Yash has to be the one to find the cure for Aarti's obsession since he introduced that obsession to her! 😆

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