Destiny's Decree- Chapter Five! (Page 24)

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Leevi05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nice update 😉 wating for next part

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saf24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Another awesome update Pearl. You are keeping us in suspense and intrigued so I love that. 🤗

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mitul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

awesome update. i am loving the suspense..

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Ah, Pearl!

The "A" bracelet scene reminded me of a similar scene in a show that I had the misfortune of watching, LOL. I love how you made Aarti's personality shine through in that moment, though, as well as Yash's aversion to rain. *sigh* I wish I could write more, but I've got to cut this short today!

Totally hooked to this story - I'm loving the way the past and present are unfolding side-by-side...So many questions, and I know you'll be answering them all, one by one!

Fantastic job, my dear! Can't wait for the next update!

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ummisco

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Pearl_27

Thank you! Your name,please? I'll continue soon.

My name is Haleema,

Wowww...2nd part so soon 😃

Beautifull update...It's really captivating...

But you left us hanging...

So many unanswered questions...

What is Aarti's story?

Does she have a child?

What made her to accept Yash's proposal of marriage?

Her never ending dream or more like nightmare?

Can u pls pm me when u update next...tanx

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Pearl...Pearl...Pearlll...after reading, the first thing I thought of was "Why so short?? 😡". But alas, I know you're busy with exams and school. So I forgive you! 😆

OMG! I love love the integration of the past and present! Both are equally vital to this story and reading it when entwined so beautifully is a treat! 👏👏

You still have the suspense going and my curiosity is reaching the limit! 😆 My heart goes out to Aarti! Poor soul! 😒

I wonder if Yash still has that bracelet? 😉😈

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Pearl_27
Thank you for such a delightful comment! 🤗 Awww...🤗 No need to thank me! You deserve it all!

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drmhp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

nice update

waiting for next part

Edited by miti16295 - 13 years ago

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

@Pearl: Superlative writing, my friend!👏You got me holding my breath during that read. I love how Aarti's character is unfolding...first through his reaction to her call and then through the night routine, ending in the regular nightmare. She has a traumatized past...and he has no clue what!!! Waiting to know more...This is great building up, Pearl. You got the reader in me hooked.😃