Destiny's Decree- Chapter Five! (Page 24) - Page 3

Okay to be honest,I didn't expect,you guys to like it this much😲,It was just a spur of a moment and I was sitting free and this story popped into my head.But I am truly humbled that you guys read it and commented. Thank you for reading and loving it. 🤗

@Ojo Thank you!!🤗 The title was a little bit difficult to decide,I was stuck between destiny and wife,glad you liked that too! I'll be updating it soon,wait for a little bit more.

@Maham Thank you,I am so glad you commented and found it interesting. 🤗 I have something in my mind about this,let's see,if you find that interesting or not.

@Sheema Thank you!!😊 I am glad you liked the start.KKHH is going to go out of the window after some parts.😆

@Deepti Thank you so much! 🤗 Your questions will be answered soon,but they're gonna take some parts to be answered,the story is going to deal with past and present.

@Morris Thank you! 🤗 The equation between Aarthi and Yash is going to be quite interesting.You'll be getting to know how they were before and how they are now,and their take on it.

@ns1970 Thank you!😊

@Indu and Vaishu I am waiting for your precious comments!😳

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Pearl: Sorry for the delay No need to be sorry,Indu!...Got really caught up, and well...didn't want to be in a hurry when I write how much I loved this. 😃Your comment was totally worth the wait.

That was such an emotionally vivid description of Yash's pathos and his sorrow. Your words made me a spectator sitting on the benches of that court and observe the play of passing emotions on Yash's countenance.Oh my...That was a high praise,and you're being so sweetly biased.😛 I felt his angst, his frustration, his sadness through the words that seemed to flow with his emotions.I am glad you felt all the emotion which I wanted to depict,and more than anything else,he is confused!!!. You have begun with a very different beginning from the show yet the central theme is same.Start was really a difficult job to do,but then,I did. ...one connects immediately. Bravo...Great job, Pearl!!!👏 I await the follow up.😊

Thank you so so much,for such a wonderful comment,you're such a great support.🤗

@Saf Thank you so much for liking the start🤗,thought a lot about it,and then if the insecurity of people liking it or not,anyways I am glad that you liked it. Next is going to be up soon with a twist.😉

@Enid Well,it is on its way,but wait for sometime.I am so glad you were able to connect with it and I was trembling when I posted it.Thank you for reading and liking it,my first attempt in this forum! 🤗

@sweetone Thank you so much,I'll try to update it soon. 🤗

@Anitu Thanks,my friend. 🤗

@Shashi, miti, luv_lvndr, sidu12, nuresmeralda Thank you so much for liking and loving it,I am so glad you people took your time to comment. 🤗

@Rutu Didn't expect you to be here!😲 But I am glad that you read and liked it 🤗 ...I'll PM you surely,from now on.

@Iluvkanha_GCian Thank you so much,friend! 🤗 I am so glad that,I could get that "Wow" Reaction from someone.You name?

@IsYaRoCHeR Thank you so much!! 🤗 You know my name,can I know yours?... I'll PM you,once I update.

@Zetter Thank you 🤗 ...I am so glad that you liked it,that means a lot.I'll not make you wait much.Will be updating it soon.

@Mitul Thank you!🤗

@Nina Thank you for liking and commenting! 🤗 Tension is going be from both sides and you'll getting know how they feel about it.

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

OMG! Pearly! You had me hooked from the quote to the very end! 👏 👏 👏

Vanny,you know you're one sweet soul! Ah! I am so glad that,I was able to get you hooked.

That was fantastic writing! Thank you! Now I'm very curious!!! That was my first motto....At first, I thought he had never seen Aarti again, but you threw me for a loop that she's his wife! 😲 That is a twist after all,otherwise why would I wrote it ,the show is much better.😆

Another thing I loved was, it's from his point of view! 👍🏼 That made it an even more delightful read!

That is something,I was worried about,but not anymore...I am glad you liked it that much!

Please update soon! I'm eagerly waiting! 😉

I will update it soon,wait for sometime.

Thank you for such a delightful comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Thank you for the PM Pearly. Thank you for commenting,Kadeen! This was beautiful!! Thank you so much! The circular motion of Yash's thoughts, the love pouring out of him for Arpita, the wistfulness at her loss Yash was sad,but Arpita was not the sole reason for his sadness,some one's behavior,has caused it,there is something more to it😉....Superb!! Thank you for a superb comment,I am glad you liked it and you have been such a great support.🤗