ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10)

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

that was...amazing👏

first off the gift of sketch really got to me but the bird of paradise, such a hopeful and pure wish, really left me speechless...and then jealous. i don't know how you or indu or deepti or any other gifted writers do this. i have hard time writing even a reply post that truly conveys how beautiful the writing is. sometimes i get so aggravated i have to count to ten before trying again😆😉

really though- fantastic job👏

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

Chapter 9A

What has Yash done that Vidhi n Pankaj sent Aarti to him ? 😕
He had drunk for 4 hours 😲
What came over him ? 😕
So he forgot Arpita's b'day !
Poor guy ,I wud say !
Thanx 4 the chapter 😊

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

Chapter 9B

Embarrassment isn't allowing him to confront Aarti !
Can imagine what Yash must b feeling on 4getting his love's b'day.. Guilty !
How sweet ! Sherwani 4 little Ansh 😊
A mother-son sketch 😊
Loved that one last picture love 😳
The whole scene after that was beautiful Kat 👏
Aarti cud feel a sense of helplessness , vulnerable at not being able to stop what occured in her lyf , had it been known she wud'nt have allowed him to drink as much as a drop of alcohol !
Fighting wid her own self to live the precious life she had or just to breath 😕
I think she should give her lyf a chance now 😊 Or at least try 😊

All the three chapters were beautifully penned Kat 👏
Esp Aarti's thoughts, Yash-Arpita memory 👏
Thanx 😊