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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Aaah! Yash!

Aww, you did it again, Kat. Tugged at my heartstrings from beginning to end, and after reading that beautiful scene depicting Yash and his little Ansh, I couldn't stop myself from letting out my spontaneous reaction at the end of the last sentence.
I love reading about Aarti's slow recovery...Going through what her life has been like, with your words as a guide, is painful, but at the same time, it's a good kind of pain, if that makes any sense. First Ansh, now the kids at the orphanage. That tender love for children, her mamta...Her interactions with children touch my heart and bring a smile to my face every time!
And Ansh, the poor child! He misses Aarti, doesn't he? 💔
Yash asleep is NOT boring! You brought his personality to life through the thoughts and words of the other family members, and now I'm feeling so sad. Yash and his tapasya...his obsession, his guilt. How many more times are you planning to break my heart, Kat Didi?
Here, no chappals or tomatoes. You can have my broken heart for now 💔.
Love, love, love the update, my dear! 😃



Borna!! I missed you here - welcome back.

No...no broken hearts. This tale is about hearts joining - so hold on.

@bold - thank you! I do know what you mean. But it also means that you felt Arti's pain, saw her life enacted before you - so thank you for getting so involved.

Ah Ansh - yes i am sure he is missing Arti. Babies, even newborns know and recognize touch and sound. And both her touch and her voice are missing in his environment now.

And Yash - thank you for your wonderfully kind words. His tapasya - of course it is related to Arpita - but obvious. But i think i want to surprise you with the reason...
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Posted: 12 years ago

ok just came back and still catching up

love love love this one👏⭐️
I like the details and emotions described when aarti's coming to grips with her grief. a nd the gradual healing process. beautifully done👍🏼
and while i want yash i also like the pace of the story 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Aarti is recovering from her past. Hope Yash will be able to do also
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous update!

I love how Aarti channels her energy into doing something positive and something that fulfills her. And Poor Yash! His pain brings his family pain and he is unable to do more for Ansh because he's too busy wallowing in his sorrow. None of the Scindias seem to have a handle on Ansh and it's only when father and son are sleeping together, wrapped up in each other's embrace, that there is a semblance of peace for them both.

I can't wait until the next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it. It was awesome.
It's good for Aarti that she started going to orphanage .
And that Vidhi is surely upto match making 😉

So glad that Aarti remembered Yash wedding planning event. Waiting for the day they come in front of each other

Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Ah finally aarti has recovered and now able to relive her memories without crying but it brings a smile on her face. Now that shows that her wounds have healed or at least almost healed..

Yash on the other hand is still grief stricken. Now it'll his time to recover. Hopefully this Dehli trip will bring Aarya close to each other or at least let him recover. I somehow feel the Schindia's are already trying to hook them both up..

This was a wonderful update deepti. I really like the way you brought out the new and emotionally healed aarti but at the same time you also showed the grief stricken yash. It was a really good read. loved it.



Thank you, Sheema. Waise, i am Kat, not Deepti - she writes the lovely "Always You" 😆.

Yes, Arti is coming to grips with her life again. As for Yash - he is "something"-stricken all right 😛. Whether its grief, guilt or something else - we'll all find out together, with Arti.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awesome update, Kat 👏 👏...haha oh my goodness Zoya was driving everyone crazy, I so love the fact that Aarti was able to remember her wedding day w/t falling apart it's a great sign that her time with the kids at the orphanage helps her and that she is on her way to a full recovery 😃


Aww poor Ansh, he is missing Aarti that's for sure and Yash needs to stop blaming himself for something he had no control over

Can't wait for AarYa to meet in Delhi, happy that Aarti called Vidhi and that Suraj thinks that its a great idea for Yash to go to Delhi 😉



Thank you, Zetter.

Don't think its a full recovery for Arti - that will take a long time, not a few months. But yes, she has accepted her loss and is dealing with it in the most positive way she can think of.

Ansh now - yes he is definitely missing Arti. You are a doc - colic has no known cause or trigger. It can hit randomly (and does) - so i decided to bring that in. Now did being seperated from Arti cause the colic or was it a coincidence? Who knows??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Awesome update kat eagerly waiting for next part.




Thank you Naeema. Next update will be next week.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ksfan2

love it kat di..it is superb..glad yash is back in the updates..waiting eagerly for next



Thank you Rasheeda. Yes Yash is back and you are about to get an overdose of him 😆.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hello Kat, you lied to me telling me we were'nt going to get emotional in this update but I forgive you cause of the meaning behind the emotions. Firstly Zoya and indecisiveness to make wedding choices was an ice breaker to all the tears that have been shed lately. Zoya is so spunky and cool like a little child and she brought about a smile to everyone. Aarthis new found haven at the orphanage was such a blissfully happy scene, the children there have continued what Ansh started and at the same time she gave back to them what they have been denied, a "mothers love". The sketching scene brought tears to my eyes as she recalled her baby but this time she appreciated the fact that she was apart of that moment and she had that memory. Ok so to the moment that brought the biggest smile, was the intro of our wedding planner. And then I again went and shed tears with the situation that the Scindia family is going through, not knowing how to bring back the light that has disappeared from Yash. Oh poor Ansh is going through the worst phase for any baby and I also believe that somehow his anguish is related to missing Aarthi. The moment between father and son was just so pure and captivating, although it was silent it spoke volumes of their already infinite love for each other and how desperately they need someone to care for them and fill their lives with happiness. As eager as I am for Arya to meet, I so want to see Ansh and Aarthis reunion also. So many questions, will yash take ansh to delhi, if so who will look after him as he will be busy working, how are u planning Aryas meeting, does yash know about aarthis loss? Eish you got me squirming here Kat so plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon. Thanks for keeping us drooling for more and the PM:)



J - i didn't lie!!! Or at least, didn't mean to lie (holds ears). As you said, the last few parts had been so...so emotionally heavy. I think we all deserved a break. I intend to have some fun with this story now that Yash is here - but his back-story is pending. And that has its own...well, let's just say pain. So, the idea is Arti's pain, followed by some fun, followed by Yash's pain - and then i don't know 😆.

I thought it was just fitting that Arti seek solace from children and what better way than through and with orphans. This way, again just as you said, she gets to give them the mother's love they were denied, and which she was denied to share by fate.

Ansh is missing Arti - yes. But is his colic due to that? Who knows - colic has no known trigger. So the baby's anguish can well be a trigger i guess.

No, Yash will not take Ansh to Delhi - he is a responsible parent. Arti and Ansh will have to wait before they can meet again.

J - thank you so very much for your detailed feedback and for getting so involved in the story. Its always a pleasure to write when i know i have readers like you waiting for the next bit. Thank you!!

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