Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina
Fantastic update Indu! I love how persistent Yash is! And what a character this Mr. Lamba is, 🤣. He's eyeing Yash's Mishti right in front of him, no wonder Yash was so abrupt and ready to tackle Mr. Lamba. Can't wait for the next update!

@Nina: Thanks. Well...Yash is on a mission. When he met Mr Lamba, he realized that he could have competition as well...he had never even thought about that...that someone else could also desire his Mishti. Yash does take things for granted at times...😊

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Shamika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: InduG64
@KS1000: Thank you so much. I am so glad that having chanced upon Sparsh, you liked the story. I hope the characters are clear to you now. Please ask me if you get confused.

I try to update every third/fourth day, so please bear with me.

Happy New year!!😊

of course dear i'm always waiting for your updates😳

wish you a very happy new year too🤗

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Mamita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Absolutely loved it once again!!👏👏👏👏 Loved how Yash is now determined to get her and so is Aarti to not let him know the truth... Its interesting to see this tension between them. And that spat between Yash and Pawan was awesome too... I knew Yash had to intervene here. 😉
And Maya is here, although as the mother-in-law now...😆
Continue writing fabulously, Indu.. This series is such a big treat for me after a hectic day at the college..😳

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Indu - you had me all emotional till i came to the end and read the viper's dialogue 😆😆😆 - you had to bring her in, didn't you? Beautiful updates. I absolutely loved how you brought out Mishti and Yash's thoughts and emotions and then juxtaposed them - brilliant stuff lady. This is going so well. I know there is a happy ending - but am so anxious to know how they get there - so very well written dear.

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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Ooopps, soorry, 😕
Can I reserve this post for a while?? 3AM here..
Just stole few minutes to read ur beautiful updates, will be back after I got some sleep...

Happy New Year Indu dear!!! 😳

EDITED:

Nothing much more to say now...
Just that, am glad your giving us more reason to want every part of the story..
Every chapter is getting better and better.
The more we read each part, the more excitement we felt to wait for the next...
I just hope, I always have free time whenever you updated the story, coz it's really aching me when i'm almost left behind..

P.S I loved Yash being possessive and protective to Mishti...

Edited by smileymj10 - 12 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#786

Indu you did it again 👏

Loved the poem in the beginning.

Wow Yash just wanted a sign from Aarti, and what a beautiful sign he got ( rose petals ). He so wants to take his Misty in his arms and take away all her pain. Aww.

The way Yash was looking at Aarti while she was arranging flower bouquet. The feelings that stirred inside him . How misty felt his presence. You've described it so well. I can literally visualize it happening in front of my eyes 👏.

Loved the way Yash was flirting with Aarti, and repeatedly saying " OUR WEDDING" instead of my wedding. This side of Yash took my breath away today.

He knows his misty is stubborn she won't accept her feelings for Yash so easily. Go Yash go make her admit her true feelings for you.

( psst. hated that ammaji 😡 ).

Update soon.

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: mamita
Absolutely loved it once again!!👏 Loved how Yash is now determined to get her and so is Aarti to not let him know the truth... Its interesting to see this tension between them. And that spat between Yash and Pawan was awesome too... I knew Yash had to intervene here. 😉
And Maya is here, although as the mother-in-law now...😆
Continue writing fabulously, Indu.. This series is such a big treat for me after a hectic day at the college..😳

@Mamita: Thanks.I am so happy this relaxes you. That should be the intent of a story, right? Stay with me till Yash succeeds...😊

Happy New Year!!🤗

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: kdsubs1
Indu - you had me all emotional till i came to the end and read the viper's dialogue 😆😆😆 - you had to bring her in, didn't you? Beautiful updates. I absolutely loved how you brought out Mishti and Yash's thoughts and emotions and then juxtaposed them - brilliant stuff lady. This is going so well. I know there is a happy ending - but am so anxious to know how they get there - so very well written dear.

Kat, thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed the reads...As for Maya well, she represents the section of the society who follow certain beliefs and think they are the be-all and end-all. If a widow is considered inauspicious for a marriage, then a woman with no children is not allowed anywhere near the birth-related rituals and an infant's religious ceremonies. Sad part is such discrimination is occurring in our immediate families...right where we are.

Happy New Year!!🤗

Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Ooopps, soorry, 😕
Can I reserve this post for a while?? 3AM here..
Just stole few minutes to read ur beautiful updates, will be back after I got some sleep...

Happy New Year Indu dear!!! 😳

Thanks Smiley.

Wish you a very Happy New Year too!!🤗 Take your time...😊

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Indu you did it again 👏
Loved the poem in the beginning.
Wow Yash just wanted a sign from Aarti, and what a beautiful sign he got ( rose petals ). He so wants to take his Misty in his arms and take away all her pain. Aww.
The way Yash was looking at Aarti while she was arranging flower bouquet. The feelings that stirred inside him . How misty felt his presence. You've described it so well. I can literally visualize it happening in front of my eyes 👏.
Loved the way Yash was flirting with Aarti, and repeatedly saying " OUR WEDDING" instead of my wedding. This side of Yash took my breath away today.
He knows his misty is stubborn she won't accept her feelings for Yash so easily. Go Yash go make her admit her true feelings for you.
( psst. hated that ammaji 😡 ).

Update soon.

@Nikki: Thank you. Your comments are always so endearing. I love to read your feelings for Sparsh.😊 I am glad you found the interactions between Yash and Mishti enjoyable. These are the tricky moments when Yash is trying to make a dent in Mishti's resolution without hurting her...yet the more he comes to know regarding her, the more his urgency is increasing for her to reveal herself.

Happy New Year!!🤗

Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago

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