Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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smileymj10

@smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

As ur name suggest, Gosh Indu Ghosh!!! How can u always make me feel AWw whenever I read ur updates?!! My hands are kept pulling me to go to my keyboard and type a comment for u..
I always loved how you connect one side of the story to the other side of the story..
Did Yash actually made a palace dreamed by her princess Mishti???
I so loved how Palak and Ansh played as a cupid for their Aunty/Mama and Uncle/papa..
With Yash hearing the voice of Mishti.. Sparsh!

I so loved it, I repeat, so loved it !!!

Can't wait for the next dear... 😳

Edited by smileymj10 - 12 years ago

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

@Sidu & Ra: Thank you.😊

@SAnonymous: Thanks. Glad you liked it.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: smileymj10

As ur name suggest, Gosh Indu Ghosh!!! How can u always make me feel AWw whenever I read ur updates?!! My hands are kept pulling me to go to my keyboard and type a comment for u..
I always loved how you connect one side of the story to the other side of the story..
Did Yash actually made a palace dreamed by her princess Mishti???
I so loved how Palak and Ansh played as a cupid for their Aunty/Mama and Uncle/papa..
With Yash hearing the voice of Mishti.. Sparsh!

I so loved it, I repeat, so loved it !!!

Can't wait for the next dear... 😳

@Smiley: Hey, Barbie Doll! Thanks..."Gosh Indu Ghosh!!!" was awesome. I do say Gosh a lot.😳

Well...didn't Yash say, "I can recognize your voice from miles away"? So he did...and now questions will start arising in his mind about whose voice it was...a voice that sounded exactly like his Mishti's.

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ummisco

@ummisco

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Woww,just woww...

A palace,with a glass tower...for her...made by her Prince charming exactly the way she once told him...

Yash's love for Aarti knows no limits...it is timeless,spaceless,formless,unshakable and unbreakable...Aarti is one lucky girl!!!!

Now he will surely recognise that voice from anywhere...

After all he spent 6 years of his life with

"I won't…I'll come…I won't fail you…not in this life."...only this comforting him...

Her voice is etched in him...

She can no longer escape from what is already ordained...

Can't wait for confrontation time...

As usual another fabulous update!!!

Tanx for the pm.

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Indu that was an awesome write up dear yash heard mishtis voice and the phone slipped from his hand he is shocked, poor Neema parekh gets pinched by mishti that's how we girls do being too careful or naughty not to say anything that personally between them and sometimes woman are more careless when it comes to secrets.ah loving it dear thanks for your PM and eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Awesome so did Yash finally hear his Mishti's voice while he was speaking to Palak I didn't really understand who was talking to whom there so plz excuse me but it was really nyc and tht tower tht Yash built 4 Mishti seems so pretty no I want one just lyk tht😆

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sweetone

@sweetone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#407

perfect. anxiously waiting for the next part. thumbs up and thanks a bunch for the PM.

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sia221

@sia221

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Both are living with the other's most integral part with themselves...Yash with Aarti's dream by making her dream house... !! Aarti with Yash's name... !! Thats so sweet.. they love each other so much...!! 😭

Ok.. just like Yash.. there is a growing restlessness in me too.. when will and how will Yash find out..??😆

Nice update.. Indu.. Do continue...😊