Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

beautiful

i presume that MRS. D is mishti ..

is Palak yash's daughter? He's married??

plz update soon

Edited by miti16295 - 12 years ago

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

@Raveena & Rutu: Thank you.🤗

@Deepti: Thanks. Oh...did Mrs D sound like a mysterious name...umm🤔 😃

@Kadeen: Thanks, lil sis🤗...Ummm...you all are giving me loads of ideas with your speculations...Keep going!!!!!😃
Years are just a number after awhile...The news is that my knight thinks he has planned something hush-hush. He doesn't know I know all...Men!!! 😉 😆

@Sarah: Awww...thank you so much for the good wishes🤗...It's the anniversary when I look back I see a path well walked with two pairs of footprints right beside each other...the number in the milestone doesn't really matter then...😊

I am happy you were OK with the part and the story progress.

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

LOL! Achcha Didi, so you won't be letting us in on the number😆. Well as long as the knight planned something, after all none of them are ever very good at keeping surprises a secret.😆

We're giving you ideas? LOL! You're the one who keeps throwing us for a loop

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Morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Loved the below lines in your note on pg.19 especially the sentence in bold. Just felt like mentioning here.

Aarti left because her time was up in this world, but not before she had held a little girl's hands, guided her through all the ups and downs of childhood through adolescence and to adulthood. Wherever Mishti is now...she is because of that touch of faith that Aarti had extended to her. Wherever Aarti is now, she must be happy to see her Ansh being taken care of by her Mishti...She died, her sparsh didn't. It lives in the sparsh between Ansh and Mishti...The guided has now become the guide!!!!

Now coming to Part 4 - Another wonderful update. 👏

Fact was when she was around or away, he never felt he couldn't see her -- Looks like a simple line but holds so much depth. This very well says Yash was seeing through Aarthi that he never felt his deficiency when she was around him.

My guess - Palak may be Yash's adopted child. You've stopped at a point where we could not wait to know what happened next. Please continue soon. 😊

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doratalk

@doratalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

@Indu.. First of all- thanks for sharing the link to your Sparsh SS with me. I loved all four parts. I love how you setup the backstory and built in little facts that become relevant to the main story. I like how you created a version of Aarti (from PV) for Yash and one for Aman. He would have been the other guy who could have been her soulmate! How very perceptive- but what was I thinking- the writer here is Indu!! 😃 I cannot wait for her to speak to him now!!! 😆😊

Lovely writing!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏