aarya OS: REALISATION OF LOVE) PT2,3pg 8,12 nov 25 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Thank u Suhaana for the pm


awesome

i appreciate u for writing on AARYA

only few people are doing this


i will also try my hand


Will be waiting for the next part dear


pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
woww it was really awesome suhana, loved the way aarya's love relation is.
cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
I was super engrossed in this OS... It was beautifully written and I can't wait for the next part👍🏼.. Please PM me once you update..
Kudos to your talent..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

AARYA OS: REALISATION OF LOVE






PART 2


It was his mistake that she left him..and '.. the day she left him 'he didn't knew what he is loosing'.a true and pure hearted soul left him'..

But not now'yes if he has done a mistake then he will rectify it''

Will ask forgiveness '' he know that she will forgive him easily'. Knowing her self very well he knew that aarti will not even get angry this time'. But this time he will give her a surprise 'that will make her forget all their fights 'all their teasings''and the thing that will remain in their heart will be just their LOVE'''''..

Yash was confident determined what he had thought '.. aarti was looking no less than an angel '. Well yes the lover boy couldn't even take his eyes off the beautiful enchantress , she was truly meant for him he had realized'..

Suddenly she felt a very soft touch on her waist '.. someone's breath was fanning on her neck like demanding her presence' somewhere her heart knew who was the owner of those wanted demanding that she is all willing to loose herself in him'. Closing her eyes simply she turned into his embrace when '. A soothing yet similar voice said'..

Yash: ' I am sorry''

A sweet surprise '.. a captivating smile adorned on her supple lips'. Ohh he so much wanted to capture that smile in his heart and that too he did'..

Taking her to the to the dance 'he proceeded the hands to his shoulders'.the experience was all new to her'..and yes for him also'.to take every step forward towards her'..

He was scared '.an unknown fear was there '.what if his move will hurt her..what if she doesn't hold that feelings like he is having'.. he was so much engrossed in his own thoughts that didn't realized when a gentle squeeze brought him out of his world'..

The soft music was playing in the background''well it was adding the fuel to the hearts which were yearning for once glimpse of his beloved'..

( Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad )



Aarti out of her shy was keeping her head bent down'.while yash very swiftly turned her around taking her again in the cage of his arms''

Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

A slight blush appeared on her lips'.. her back was touching his broad shoulders '. Both of them were just lost in the divine spell of the dance'. Their dance was witnessed by all the couples who have actually stopped dancing seeing them lost in themselves''

Yash suddenly twirled her making her turn'.aarti was sacred of his move'she was not a great dancer'hell great dancer ..she was just coping his moves '.

Giving him an angry glare like telling him'dare you drop me'and here I will make you vanish into the thin air'.as soon as his left hand spun her around making her come in his arms'.a big round of applause was heard making them come out of each other''

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sorry for short part again

Promise will complete in next update

Do read and enjoy sweets'

if u want pms than add suhaaana to ur list or send me a pm i'll add u

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: taahir004

Absolutely beautiful just breathtaking

Suhaana you truely wrote this OS so well please do continue soon


thanksss dear

i did posted part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: gcluv

one word come to my mind ---- excellent

lovely update
please continue...


thanksss dear

updated part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ummisco

You pen words down sooo beautifully

Read your other work on AarYa,it was also perfectly written
Pls continue both soon...



thanksss dear...

updated both do check it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

very well written👏 Brilliant sweety👏


i loved it❤️

keep it up😃


thankkk u diii😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: ana56

wow amazing concept and cute story yaar
want a nice ending
update soon


yup sure a beautiful nice ending ana

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