ArYa OS: Anguished Hearts

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freya

@freya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nice one con ti soon

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Excellent Fab Job...! The way they are whispering to their hearts tells it all... Love how u write and describe it...! TFS! 😃😉

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice start dear but a short one. Continue soon na... I am curious to know further

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Huh!!! all the time wen u kept writing these long essays and expect ppl to read it u complained to me and said because of me u will hav to turn one of ur OSs into an SSs I swear I didn't even knw u were capable of writing sumthing so short😆😛

Edited by swaggerchick16 - 12 years ago

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chhavi

@-Kash-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved it, but too short! Love to see something like this in the show!

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elanpremi

@elanpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

well done yaar, nice portrayal of Arya's emotions

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

@GCLuv - thank you. I am glad the two different viewpoints came across.

@Nina - thank you. About time the two dunces did some introspection, don't you think?

@Pearl - thank you Pearl-girl. And me too - i want to see some introspection in the show too...but was getting impatient so wrote this one instead. 😛

@Gafulu14, Elanpremi - thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.

@Sunrio80, Freya123, Supransi, Maha9, Kashish - thank you so much! There are many unanswered questions here - and i am hoping the show will answer them for us. Maybe if i get dissatisfied or impatient with the show again, i'll write a part 2 here... 😉

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

@Naeema - funny you mentioned the title. I think i spent more time trying to figure out the right title for this one than i actually spent writing the OS! I wanted to portray the two diverse kind of anguish that i expect Arti and Yash would go through - and am glad it came through. Thank you for reading the OS and for your feedback.

@IsYaRoCHer - whooo - if you don't mind, can i ask what your id represents? Seems like you had something specific in mind 😊. Thank you for reading and liking the OS - and i love how you captured the essence - "whispering to their hearts...". Thank you!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
Huh!!! all the time wen u kept writing these long essays and expect ppl to read it u complained to me and said because of me u will hav to turn one of ur OSs into an SSs I swear I didn't even knw u were capable of writing sumthing so short😆😛

😆😆😆 - oh Kesha - but its so much fun surprising you 😉.