PV Frustration/Complaints/ Suggestions Thread

Like bbbccc mentioned show kids has kids. Not kids becoming adult.

Please show Aarti and Yash, as responsible parents not as love sick couple who want to please each other. I feel they are showing Yash and Aarti as neglected parents. As a writer, when you consider a storyline, please remember why and for whom Yash and Aarti make their Punar Vivah.

Show Aarti has a mother to the girls, like Aarti teaching the girls how to bake a cake, how to braid hair, needle work or something like how to do the basic chores of the house. I want to see the kids being punished, and Yash-Aarti also making them realize their mistakes.

Please don't neglect my sweet Payal or Palak give some storyline. Have equal screen space of the kids with their parents.

I want some family scenes of Yash, Aarti, Palak, Payal and Ansh. Like going to the park, picnic, gardening, playing tag, and singing ring round the rosy. Have a scene where Palak and Payal have tea party.

Like you guys have shown father and son bonding; I also want to see mother and daughter bonding between Aarti and Payal-Palak. Remember in the beginning of the show Yash and the elders married him so they can get the mother for the girls.


Don't show can of worms, opening in front of the kids, like seeing their parents fight, father's anger-abusive side

Please so some decedent romance of Yash and Aarti, not force.

Please give brains to Yash, and do not let him a tube light or air head. Sometime he too slow.

Show Yash and Aarti has normal couple, enjoying morning tea with one another, talking with each other, knowing about how each other's day went and how the kids are progressing. Also show Aarti and Yash getting to know each other, by talking about their college days or past. Show AarYa knowing to know about each other's likes or dislikes, mentioning what they like to do. Even with Aayu coming, Yash and Aarti are two strangers. I want Aarti to talk about her experiences has an orphan.

Show Yash, Pankaj and Pratiek talking about business, and getting more contracts. Yash contracts seem to stop after Neha and Heroine track.

Please as a creative head of the show and writer, do some research like the bone marrow is just a huge blooper. Just keep in mind, viewers are smart and , and there is always Google Bhaiya to help for research. Also remember some of your audience may be doctors,etc.

For each of the track please remember to have a beginning, middle, end with connection. Remember this show is like writing an essay. Also write a conclusion why you began the track.


Have some scenes of Vidhi and Pankaj Bhaiya, I really want Vidhi Bhaibhi to realize that she is neglecting her husband in her duty as a dutiful bahu,elder sister-in-law and mother.

I also want to see or hear about Vidhi Bhabi and Pankaj Bhaiya's kids Vedant and Vedika Sicidia.

After introducing another potential character like Aman, please give them a decedent ending like you did with Neha's character and track; don't have them disappear in thin air.

Change the wardrobe of Yash

Show Manasi, Aatri's best friend, I want Mansi to be pulling the legs of Aarti and Yash.

Keep the dates, straight and don't change it. Remember the viewers are observant.

Have a natural romance of Yash and Aarti, like the beginning of the days.

Please don't have miscarriage of Aarti, if you do so please show them normally, not drastically.

Do not go in circle with the tracks, like showing birthday parties, function every time. Show what normal families do.

Always remember, before starting anything what is the purpose of the character and storyline, what it has to connect with the big picture. Think about all the essays you had to write in college.