OUR LIFE--A Trilogy (SS) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Am glad I got slept and decided to read this in the morning...
Coz I know it was a treat to read and wants to focus on it...
And I was right, I knew it!!!

I'm actually surprised when I found out that there's another one, but even surprised when I read it. Marvelous, Fantastic, Fabulous, Stupendous, Great, Astounding, Awesome, Superb, do I have any words left to say??? Of course it was a very beautiful, beautiful story, wonderful beginning and end!!!

Thank You for sharing us this masterpiece of yours, and you always touched my heart... Keep doing it my friend coz I'm loving it...
Please do some more... 😳


(oops, sorry for making it a long one, just can't resist)

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! I ndu I can only imagine the hurt tht Arti went through I know how it feels wen ppl make up bad things abt u n then tell ur mother and ur mother wud believe tht person despite u constantly telling her tht it is not true and Arti's mother just only wanted to use her as a maid for her son this is lyk cinderella 😆 but it was good hope u write more stories and eagerly waiting for ur updates on TSR and btw I finally got tym to read ur essay as u can see😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was beautiful! Best Update yet! 😳
You portrayed a lifetime of Yash and Aarti's emotions in just 3 updates! How? 🤗
Excellent Work! 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
@Zet: And I take pride in your pride...🤗


@Sunrio: Thanks for appreciating, my friend. 😊 🤗


@Shubhi: Thanks...and this is for you:

Kiddoji...
you are my Guruji,
as your direction toward this type of writing
ended in this trilogy.😛 🤗


@Naeema: I am just so glad that you emoted with the story...that's my satisfaction.Thank you.🤗


@Asha: Thank you. 🤗


@Smiley: Thanks...I don't think I did deserve all those wonderful adjectives, but I will accept all, along with all the love with which they come.🤗
Hey, I thought that was short...wish you had written more...☺️


@Swag: Thank you. so much.🤗
Yup, what could be more worse than bringing home a child under false pretenses and ending up tying her in a bondage of guilt.



@Iqra: Thank you, my friend. Your appreciation makes me happy...so glad you were with me in this journey.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu ! This was so unexpected, especially because we all thought that part 2 was the last part. I loved how we got to see a little bit into both Yash and Aarti's past after they separated from each other. It was amazing 👏!
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Posted: 12 years ago
*Refusing to look at page 19 until I give you my comments about Our Destiny...And I'm amazed that I haven't given in to temptation yet! Can't wait to read the final part! Reserved!*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

*Refusing to look at page 19 until I give you my comments about Our Destiny...And I'm amazed that I haven't given in to temptation yet! Can't wait to read the final part! Reserved!*




And I love you back...so will wait...our promise. ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Indu ! This was so unexpected, especially because we all thought that part 2 was the last part. I loved how we got to see a little bit into both Yash and Aarti's past after they separated from each other. It was amazing 👏!




@Nina: Thank you, dear friend. What can I say...even I had no idea I will end up doing this. But I am glad I did...I guess I didn't want Aarti's happiness to be left in a loop.😳 I am glad you liked it...and I am very grateful that you were with me throughout with Our Life. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Indu: trust me I knw ppl tht go through those kinda things even with their real parents or step parents some parents even take out all their frustrations on their kids its really bad
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was definitly a pleasant suprise. Loved it soo much!! It was beautiful, but what else is new. You have a gift Indu. I so love your writing!!👏👏

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