OUR LIFE--A Trilogy (SS) - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu Di, extraordinary is such a simple word to describe this piece! 👏👏

That was a beautiful symphony where Aarti's plight was just heart-wrenching!! 😭😭

No need to thank us! You deserve all the love and support you gathered! 🤗
Edited by MSN_Vanny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Vaiashnavi & Miti: Thank you.🤗


@Pearl: Thanks. I guess this part had to happen...especially as I had touched upon that dark moment in Aarti's life, thus opening a loop. It needed a closure.😊

You take rest, my friend...I'll await my time.🤗


@Ash: Your appreciation has so much love...thanks.🤗


@Saf: Thanks my quiet friend. Those words of appreciation ended \my day on a great note.🤗


@gcluv: You flatter me, my friend...but I love it. Thank you so much for the sweet words.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh! I did not expect you to continue..but you gave us so much happiness by doing so.

That was so beautiful, Indu. I know I always say that for your works. But its true. Your words are so beautiful that they know their way to the reader's soul.

Aarti's pain brought tears to my eyes but am really happy for her since she got her Yash who will go to any length to make her happy. Unfortunately many Aartis' are not that lucky to have their Yash.

Once again - Loved it so much, Indu. Heart-warming. 🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh! Thats beautifful! I am speechless! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago


That was beautiful, Indu and I am glad you did the third and the last piece of the trilogy! 🤗


I want to you to write again but a new story, not a continuation to this one because every story has its proper end and it should end there...that is the beauty of story telling! This one began, developed and ended well...great job! 👏


But please write again...don't stop! 😊








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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful work dear Loved it so much
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The concluding part is so perfect to the lovely union of arya !!!
Edited by maha9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Vanny: I have to thank you, my friend. It's you and everyone here who supported me so much that I could take courage to go on and complete something with total satisfaction. I am so glad you liked it.🤗

@Morris: Thank you so very much for the support.🤗 Honestly, even I didn't think I'd continue...but then I guess I needn't want the story to be left open ended...or maybe just put it down to my inexperience in this kind of writing, and also that this entire writing was unplanned.😳
I so agree with this sentence you wrote: Unfortunately many Aartis' are not that lucky to have their Yash.
That's so true. Marital rape is rampant in our country...even in urban India...but women either keep quiet for fear of social ostracism or are unaware of their rights. And yeah...a Yash is very much a rarity.


@Ria, Mitul, & Maha: Thanks...🤗


@Shobha: Thanks, pal...🤗This is definitely over...Yash and Aarti are on their path to marital bliss, and who knows maybe they'll go back home after the vacation with Ansh, Palak, and Payal making her presence felt...that's their life to live now.😛

Thanks again for your valuable appreciation.
Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a very heart wrenching yet beautiful end to a wonderful story, Indu 😭 ❤️
You did an amazing job 👏
thank yu for the PM and for sharing it with us 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Zetter

Wow that was a very heart wrenching yet beautiful end to a wonderful story, Indu 😭 ❤️

You did an amazing job 👏
thank yu for the PM and for sharing it with us 🤗




@Zet: Thanks, my friend. I just wrote what I felt, pal...it's you and everyone here who made it so special by your heartwarming support and love.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Our Promise, Our Destiny, Our Beginning.

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Di I don't know what to say. I'm speechless and so touched by this entire Trilogy. I'm not sure this even needs a longer comment. Just...I...sigh...beautiful

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