OUR LIFE--A Trilogy (SS) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
@Swag: I couldn't agree with you more. All sorts make this world, but those who ill treat children have to be the worst of God's creations. I have also seen women employing little girls...as young as 9/10/11...to be a maid/nanny for their infants, and leaving the babies in their hands to go for their outings. These girls who themselves need a mother to take care of them become surrogate mothers at such young ages...sad, so sad, but so true.



@Darrish:
Thanks, pal.🤗 If I have to say a thousand times, I'll say it...that it is friends like you and everyone in this forum who have made my first experience so special...because you took time to read Our Life and feel the emotions of the story as much as I did while writing it. That itself made it so special for me.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesume, lovely, fantastic.. Very beautifully written.. Thanku vry much 4 d pm... D poem at d end dreams 's one ws also lovely..
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Posted: 12 years ago
@indu :I knw this girl's who's stepmother one beated her with a belna just because the mother called her black and stupid and wen she answered back her stepmom beated her with a belna 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Kashishangel: Thank you for the lovely words of appreciation. My satisfaction is your liking what I wrote. I am glad that the story appealed to you.😊




@Swag: Gosh, that's so cruel.😲 Why is it that people want to wield power over who are weak and dependent on you? The Satan never sleeps...does he?
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an exquisite piece of writing from you:).The story,the characters all perfect.I loved the different idea.kudos for that!
Simply saying I loved the bond between aarya.It was incredible,the love between them.The romantic in me is still going gaga!
You are excellent!
Do come up with more FFs please! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Vidya: Thank you for your sweet appreciation.🤗 I am glad I could touch the romantic in you. The day I feel I have something to pen down, I'll surely do so...till then Que sera, sera...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64


@Swag: Gosh, that's so cruel.😲 Why is it that people want to wield power over who are weak and dependent on you? The Satan never sleeps...does he?


nope he doesn't and the girl was just voicing her opinion and she got licks with the belna and stuff and after she was forced to go to listen to the ramayn being recited and her mother complained to all of her aunts and the poor girl got scolded frm all of her aunts😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so awesome. Great work. I enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Induji, That was so beautiful.. You are so talented... 👏👏👏👏👏👏

I love your creativity in changing up the roles of the characters from the real PV but keeping most of them in your story. It was very nicely done. I also loved the back stories...

When's the next one coming?!?!?! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Dora: Thank you. So glad you liked it. About the next one? No idea...I'll write only if I feel I have something to share. Thanks for the support.😊
EDIT: ji??????😲 😛 🤗


@J.M. Singh: Thank you.😊
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