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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

Oh god Saddie how can you be so good at it...😆😆😆 aarti faints.. man😆😆

Good one...👏👏👏


LOL I Guess my imagination gets out of hand at times😆
Awhh Thank You ^_^
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Thanks ^_^
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Thank You all for commenting & 'Liking', Means a lot 😳


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Waiting wid wide eyes n a grin 😃
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Waiting Dear 😆
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PART 2

Wonderful update, Sadiie. 👏 I was smiling throughout the part.

I opened my eyes slowly and everything was blurry. Okay I wasn't dead, neither in hell nor heaven...jeez..I'm so dramatic at times.
-- Yeah, I accept Aarthi is indeed very dramatic. 😆

You've such a great sense of humour. 👍🏼 Specially loved the below lines.
Everything was black, pitch black. Well yeah it was black cuz my eyes were closed, duh..
It was fear alright; no one likes to be wake up with a supposed vampire staring down at you. 🤣
Come on, 200 is way behind old..Jeez 🤣
Vampires don't even exist, who the hell is this Namuna in front of me?
Ahhh crap! He wants to drink my blood! Naahiii!
-- See how dramatic she is, that too with a vampire around. 😆

Enjoyed reading all her self thoughts. Infact the entire part, below is few of my favorite lines between Yash & Aarthi.
'I still don't get it though! I'm not smart enough to understand a Vampire you know' I pouted.
"You could ask me to elaborate, you know" he chuckled.

'Please don't read my thoughts'
I prayed silently, hoping he would...ignore my..uh..irrational and delusional thoughts on him.
"Hah...you're truly amusing love" he laughed.
Okay that was it! Time to mind talk, Vampire style! 😆

"Why are you here?! How long have you been stalking me for?! And what the hell do you want from me? For Blood perhaps? I don't do blood sorry! Come never again!" I huffed and puffed but didn't blow up, goodness me.
"You don't do blood? What does that even mean Aarti?" he questioned, a small smile playing around the corner of his perfectly 'M' shaped lips.

Thanks for giving me my dose of happiness through your writing. 🤗🤗
Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


-Note-

I'm trying my hands at writing a few dialogues in Hindi again since I haven't used much Hindi for a good 5-6 months and totally forgot how to write the few "Tooti Footi" Sentences I knew. Lol ~

Part 3


Previously;

'Umm...Err..' my genius side turned her thinking cap on, too slow to fathom his phrase to be honest.

"I've known you since you were a baby; 20 years ago, Aarti"

Okay that's it, I'm dead.

The shutters closed down and everything went pitch black in front of my eyes.

Now;

Where am I? Oh no...I didn't faint again...did I?

My body ached so bad, I felt as though I'd been thrown into freezing cold water and then dumped on an Iceberg to die. Damn I was cold, so frikin cold!

I felt...frozen or something, my eyes wouldn't open and my body was so stiff...like I'm dead.

Wahhh!! No no no no I can't die! Nooo! I'm so young to die! Noo you can't do this to me! Me too young to dieee! I'll die when it's time but now PLEASE! I need to seek revenge from someone and also eat the Vanilla ice cream that's in the freezer waiting for me!

I forced my eyes open At last and my breath almost got knocked out of my lungs, literally. He was hovering right above me. Mamamiaaa!

I jerked up, sitting on the bed and facing him as he moved away slightly giving me some space.

"Gosh, you sleep so much Aarti" I heard him say.

My mouth flung open at his comment.

'What the Fakht! I fainted! And plus i sleep for long because I can Haan unlike you, you..Vamp!' I scowled, unknowingly attracting his attention..as usual.

"Oops.." I squeaked, realizing what I'd just blurted out..well inside my head.

"Yeah, I don't sleep either...which is why it's surprising and fascinating to see you sleep for so long, peacefully." he murmured.

"Actually I fainted.." I mumbled.

Come on, I didn't just close my eyes willingly and let myself hit the hard ground below me in order to, sleep! Such a Dumb Vampire, Jesus!

"I know you did" he replied, boring his eyes into mine.

My bad..

Oh his eyes...crystal clear, deep ocean blue ..my my...he is frikin gorgeous, too beautiful to even exist...no wait he doesn't 'really' exist..as a normal human being..no wonder he's so..so frikin beautiful, oh my eyes are gonna shed if I keep looking at this gorgeous ma..uhh..thing, creature, whatever the hell he is.

"You're beautiful" I blurted and then quickly slapped my palm onto my big mouth.

'Oh sheep! Keep your mouth shut Urghh!'

"I like you, you're cute. Really cute" he murmured, leaning towards me.

Uh-oh..Rabbits are cute too...

'Naaahhhiii!!!!! Jacob you frikin son of a wolf! SAVE ME OR ELSE!!!'

"Jacob?" I heard him say, his body suddenly stiffened as I watched him.

CRAP! Vampy not happy with Wolfy'a mention...YIKES!

"Uhmmm..Uh.." I stuttered.

'Abh...Kaise Bataaon Vamp Ko ..Who's Jacob..' I rolled my eyes slowly.

I saw him from the corner of my eyes and in an instant I found myself again sitting on his lap. How the eff did he do that?! Again!

"Leave me" I squeaked, mustering up all the courage I stewed in me for long.

"Who's Jacob?" he asked me, his jaws clenching and his eyes going hallow like bleak.

Oh boy...

"Umm.." I croaked, looking down.

I felt his long finger against my chin as he pulled my face up harshly.

Oww..that hurt you idiot!

"Tell me before I do something I didn't plan on doing" he whispered menacingly, against my skin.

I froze, what did he mean? Was he going to hurt me? But why?

I thought Vampy was nice and wasn't gonna suck my blood, but I guess I was wrong...Not fair!

"Damn it Aarti! Don't push me" he growled, gripping the back of my head and pulling it back.

Ahhh Vampy gonna kill me Nooo!!

"What did I do?!" I cried, pouting at the most ridiculous moment.

"Tell me who Jacob is before-" I cut him off before he could blabber any further.

I pushed his hand and looked directly into his fierce eyes.

Son of a gun you better shut up before I smack you in the face, Vampy Ki Bachcha!

"What you gonna do?! Bite me? Here bite me you blood sucking monster!" I spat, grabbing the side of his collar tightly.

He stared at me, bewildered at my sudden outburst and probably amused at me as well. His mouth stayed in a grim line as he continued to stare at me.

Yippeee I shut up a Vampire! Taaliya!

"Now, coming back to the topic!" I continued, feeling slightly proud at myself.

"Jacob is a werewolf in a frikin BOOK Called TWILIGHT! There, you happy now you Blood sucking 200 year old monkey?!" I finished off, taking my hands back and crossing them over my chest.

I sat there, proudly huffing and puffing while he continued to stare at me.

Abh..SAY SOMETHING!

"Let me show you something, monkey" I heard his melodious voice after what felt like ages.

After everything that I've said, he wants to show me something?!

And, did he just call ME A Monkey?!

Teri Toh!

Before my thoughts even processed properly and managed to make any sense, I felt myself so, so, SO out of place the very next moment.

"AAHHH!!" I screamed my lungs out not able to understand what was happening.

"Hold on tight!" I heard him say from somewhere.

Hold on WHAAA?!!!

My eyes opened wider than needed as I saw darkness around me. What was happening?!

"Woah!" I gasped, feeling a thud kinda noise in front of me.

"Open your Eyes Aarti" I heard him say and then chuckle slightly since I felt the funny vibration.

Oh crap!

I snapped my eyes open, heck when did I close them?

I was clinging onto his back!

WHAT THE!

I looked around and saw nothing but darkness, hesitantly I looked below me and my heart almost dropped into my pants.

I was at least some 173849ish feet above the frikin ground and clinging onto some Vampire's back!

"AH!" I cried out, clinging onto him tightly even though he was holding me securely by the waist. He held onto the tree branch, watching me by tilting his head to one side and showing me his pearly teeth.

I shivered, Ah man this was frikin freaky! Should I look at his face or look down and possibly piss in my pants thinking he'll drop me? My mind was having a battle of its own.

"You like it?" I heard his voice ring inside my head.

I like it?! Does it look like I LIKE It?! Probably if I wet my pants he'll think I got TOO excited and take me for another adventure! GAH screw this world, I need a Pee right now! Thanks a lot Vampy!

"Ahhh!! Let me out let me out!" I wailed, smacking his front & back with my legs and hands.

"Wait there's more" he told me.

NOOO My Bladder will burst, I can't die while damaging myself internally Nooo! Kaminey put me down!

"WHAT?!" I screamed on his face while he grinned back.

And the next moment I felt the cold wind slap my face as he suddenly rushed towards the left hand side.

"Agh!" I groaned, feeling another thud.

"This is fun isn't it Aarti?" he laughed, looking at me closely.

"N..Noo..it's ..scary.." I squeaked innocently hiding my face in the crook of his neck.

"Oh"

I heard the disappointment in his voice as he paused, looking away from me.

"Put me down..Pweez" I pleaded, still hiding my face in the crook of his Vampy neck.

"I don't like heights...and i need a Wee...Pweezz" I Continued.

That awkward moment when you tell a Vampire you need to take a Piss..knowing he can't take one himself..Sigh..what's my life like..

"Hold on tight, we're about to land; Spider-Monkey" he said, making me giggle for the first time.

So he did read Twilight..or watch the Book..Saala...was just playing with me asking me about Jacob the Wolfy!

But Awhhh Bless..he was trying to act witty So I wouldn't pee in my pants...TO HELL WITH THAT! Put me down before all hell breaks loose Kaminey!

I felt him move slightly and then just in a blink of an eye I found myself back inside my room, standing and quivering like jelly.

"BRB" I squeaked and just ran inside my tiny bathroom.

I closed the door and leaned against it, closing my eyes.

"Jeez...Why is this happening to me?" I muttered.

"Need any help?"

"WAH!!" I literally jumped to the opposite side of the bathroom had he not been standing in front of me!

"What are you doing here?!"

I asked, horrified beyond repair.

"You were taking long so I thought..Umm.." he trailed.

"That I needed help?! Hello Vampire Ji! I'm a human being who has to go through all this every day!" I huffed, but damn he looked so innocent.

"You could have said that in a polite manner, Aarti" he replied, his voice so soft I could melt if I was the sound waves.

"Okay let's this over and done with, I've had it with you Mister Vampire" I grumbled, opening the door and heading back inside my room.

He followed me, I guess, and stood behind me as I turned around and collided against him.

"Oh" I gasped, moving away but failed to do so as he wrapped his arm around my waist restricting me from moving any further.

Our eyes locked as I felt him leaning in towards me slowly.

"Let's get it over and done with then.." he murmured, his eyes darkening as he finished off.


NOTE

LMAO Please don't call me Paagal 🤣 I Just survived an almost car accident and in my hideous yet traumatized state I typed this update in College 🤣 🤣

The next part will probably be the last part and then an epilogue after that. Do let me know if I should continue this Paagalpan with Vampire's Girl Part 2 or something cuz I'm up for it as long as I keep entertaining you all =D

@Morris - Aawwhhh!! 🤗 I Can't tell you how much your comment means to me! <3 THANK YOU!! 😳

Ps. Ignore Spelling Errors, In a Rush to get started on my Assignments.

Sadiie x

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice sadiie dont stop 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love your story! Don't keep us waiting too long for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next part.thanx for pm!!

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